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that was so nice...continue soon

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Originally posted by kritika4eva

<font color="#330033">Hehehehe!!I loved reading Naku's reaction part!!LOL!!! It was relly gud apra!Update ASAP!Smile</font>


thanks a ton I will surely continue soon LOL

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Originally posted by Irika95

that was so nice...continue soon


Thanks

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Originally posted by raziya56

omg...they met...wel both are gunna get the surprise of their life *excited* please continue its good!


Lets see who gets the actual surprise dutta or nakusha Embarrassed

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I love the part apra...pls do continue. want to see what dutta does when he realizes that the girl he met at the shop is his betrothed.

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hey i loved this part!!!!...especially the last bit...plzz update the next part soon!!Big smile..and plzz PM me when u update..

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Chapter 3

Nakku reached her home all tired after a wonderful shopping she had completely forgotten about the bang with dutta she simply displayed her shopping to babi and ganpat and went to sleep, Dutta on the other hand was quite furious Nakku's face revolving around his head the whole night, his ego dint allow him to accept the defeat from a girl, a girl he could not answer back to.

Early next morning Nakku got dressed for her shagun whole heartedly because baji leela and sudarshan convinced nakku that dutta wasn't a bad choice infact he was just near to a perfect choice for nakku as a life partner. Dutta along with his family arrived at the Diveker Niwas and he was welcomed by babi and ganpat. He silently sat down for a small Pooja where ganpat gave him gifts and they fixed the marriage date.
With in no time the pandit called for the bride and leela and baji were ordered to bring nakku down. Roops rushed up to get a glimpse of her future vaihini along with kala, they knocked at nakku's door. Leela was getting nakku ready and baji was fixing his hair when sudarshan opened the door, he looked at kala and roops uncertainly

"nakusha" kala said in her sweet voice

Sudarshan welcomed them in "please come in voh rahi aapki nakusha" kala was happy to see what an amazing beauty nakusha was she looked absolutely stunning is a violet colored lehnga with silver work on it and a pink colored dupatta to go with it, nakusha was helping baji with his dhoti while leela was busy tying her saree falls. Baji almost dropped his dhoti seeing roops with kala, nakku looked at baji uncertainly
"roops" baji said

Roops giggled "baji yeh kya hai" she said "tai yeh baji hai maine bataya than a" roops told kala

"per tum yahan kaise" a shocked baji asked

"voh its small world na baji…. Waise bhi nakku tum bahut sundar lag rahi… bhao tumhe dekhega toh pagal ho jayega" kala said "waise mera naam kala hai mein dutta ki behen hoon"

"aur mera naam leela hai mein nakku ki behen hoon aur yeh humara bhai hai baji rao aur tum ho roops" leela looked at roops "not bad baji"
"tu kya bolti hai nakku roops ke bare mein" baji asked

"dhoti… dadu dhoti toh pehen le" nakku whispered "excitement mein tu dhoti ko bilkul hi bhool gaya hai" she handed him the dhoti and baji rushed to the washroom

Roops went and hugged nakku "so cute na tai nakku kitni sunder hai iski aur bhao ki jodi duniya mein sabse pyari jodi hogi"

"haan duniya mein sabse pyaari ladki" kala said "arre iss roops baji ke chakkar mein yeh batana hi bhool gayi ki neeche nakku ko bula rahe hain"
Kala took nakku and leela and the others followed her, Nakku looked like a stunning beauty and when she saw dutta she was absolutely impressed by supriya's choice he was a hunk of a man looking absolutely stunning in the green colored sherwani, dutta looked up to see how his would be wife looked and got the shock of his life when he saw nakku, he was absolutely fuming in anger and rage of revenge, he tried to maintain his calm knowing that his mother had a very weak heart.

Nakku came and sat beside dutta silently and kala continued with the shagun rasams, nakku stole glance and looked at dutta between the rasams she noticed that he was disturbed, quietly the rasams were completed and the patils left the diveker niwas.

Patil Niwas

Dutta came into the house and threw the vase in anger aayi sahib, kala and Kishore looked at him shocked "main uss ladki se kabhi shadi nahi karoonga" dutta screamed

"bhao per hua kya hai… humse koi galti ho gayi kya" kala asked
"voh ladki ek ziddi nakchadi ladki hai…. Usse baat kerne ki bhi tameez nahi hai" dutta roared in anger

" bhao dekh tujhe koi galatfemi hui hogi nakku aise bikul nahi hai voh bahut pyaari hai uske gale se toh awaaz bhi nahi nikalti" kishore said
"haan bhao.. kitni pyaari kitni naazuk hai voh" kala spoke

"dekh tayi maine kaha na main uss ladki se nahi shaadi karoonga toh nahi karoonga" dutta screamed in anger, right then aayi sahib clutched her heart "aayi" kala screamed and rushed towards her

Fortis Hospital

Aayi sahib was diagnosed with a mild heat attack, kala sobbed in kishore's arms while he consoled her while dutta sat there completely in guilt just then the doctor came out "dekhiyeh bahut zayada stress hone ki wajah se yeh sab hua hai aap inka dhyaan rahke.. aur inhe khush rakhne ki kosish kare" The doctor left after giving some more minute information
kala looked at dutta "ab toh tu khush hai na bhao… aayi ki yeh halat teri wajah se hui hai…. Agar shadi nahi karni this toh ha kyun kiya and phir yeh natak" kala screamed at dutta "jab dekho koi na koi naya bahana dhoodta hai tu shadi se bachne ka"

"chup ho jao kala" Kishore said

"nahi Kishore aaj jo bhi aayi ki halat hai voh sirf iski wajah se hai agar aayi ko kuch bhi hua na bhao phir tera mera rishtaa humesha ke liye khatam" Dutta looked at kala with pain in his eyes and then walked into aayi sahib's room he sat beside his aayi and held her hand "aayi mujhe maaf ker de per iss mein meri koi galti nahi hai… yeh sab uss nakusha ki wajah se hua hai" dutta said

Aayi sahib slowly regained consciousness' "dutta" she whispered "tu shadi kare ga na" she asked

Dutta nodded guiltily "haan aayi…bus tu jaldi se theek ho ja" dutta said and aayi sahib smiled meekly kala walked in and dutta left the room immediately "Kishore mujhe kuch kaam hai main chalta hoon" he said and he left
Kala Smiled when she saw dutta going out "chalo aayi bhao chala gaya ab yeh oxygen mask nikal do" kala said "natak khatam" she added
"kitna ziddi hai yeh ladka kala thank god maine iska kharab mood dekh liya rasamo ke beech main aur main samaj gayi thi ki lava ab phootne hi wala hai" aayi sahib said

"aayi ab isse phele iska mood phir badle hum kal hi iski aur nakku ki shadi kara dete hai" kala said

"per kala… aayi bhao ko iss tarah emotionally backmail kerna theek nahi hai" Kishore objected

"agar isko emotionally backmail nahi karege toh yeh kabhi shadi nahi karega… Kishore bhao ko bhi khush hone ka haque hai… aur mujhe poora yakeen hai nakusha hi voh ladki hai jo bhao ko khush rakhegi" kala said

"bus kala ab ek aur din intezaar nahi kerna chahiyeh warna dutta itna bhi bewakoof nahi hai ki voh yeh natak na samjhe" aayi said
"per aayi hum ganpat aur babi ji se kya kahege" Kishore said
"bus yehi ki meri tabiyat bahut kharaab hai aur main shayd mer bhi sakti hoon isiliyeh yeh shaadi kal hi kerni padegi" aayi said
Dutta Shriram Patil weds (v/s) Nakusha Ganpat Deviker
Nakusha was upset because she hardy got any time to shop nor were there any pre wedding functions everything was nothing but hoch poch and all thanks to the patil who wanted the wedding the very next day.
Dutta was upset and most of all guilty for hurting his own mother, he half heartedly got ready for the wedding. Dutta's barat reached nakusha's place and the wedding ceremonies began. Dutta sat in front of the sacred fire in a violet sherwani and golden turban, while nakusha was dressed in a red colored saree looking absolutely hot. Slowly the pandit chanted the mantras and the two of them followed each ritual dedicatedly finally after the sindoor daan both of them were declared man and wife.    
Dutta swore in his heart "nakusha welcome to hell aaj sirf tumhari wajah se meri aayi ki yeh tabiyat hai aur meri tayi mujhse rishtaa todna chahti hai … aaj se main kasam khata hoon kit um bhi meri tarah apne rishton ke liye tarasogi"

While Nakusha swore "Supriya aaj khush toh bahut hogi tum … meri shadi kara ke per maine bhi thaan liya hai iss dutta ka istemal karke tumhe apne aayi baba se door na kiya toh mera naam bhi nakusha nahi…. Bus kuch dino mein yeh dutta meri unglion pe nachega"



After her bidaayi nakusha had a warm welcome at the patil niwas, after she did the Aarti of her bappa at the niwas nakku was taken to dutta's now their room for their special night. While Nakusha sat shyly on the decorated bed and dutta slowly walked towards his room like a lion approaches its prey. He slowly opened the door which made nakku even more nervous he entered the room and locked the door. Then he slowly came towards the bed and said in a harsh tone "get up" Nakusha looked at him confused she slowly got down the bed and looked at him, Dutta in turn glared at her with anger.   

As of now this is the 3rd part will add baji roops romance in the next part

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this part was really good apraSmile..im just hoping that dutta is more justifiable with the torture he is gonna do.. Confused ..bechari nakku..it wasnt her fault..it was coz of dutta's ziddipana..anyway..it was really good..update the next part soon!!

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