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Tere Bina ~ TaSha ff~ First Step of Dutta P8 (Page 3)

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Originally posted by sosweetsumi

do continue dear
this is awesome
bye sumi


thanks a ton
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Chapter 1

Patil Niwas

Kala sang the morning Aarti while aayi sahib, Kishore Anay and Dutta stood at the temple with their hands folded, the Aarti finished and kala distributed the Prasad to everyone.

"bhao….. aaj tera janamdin hai isiliye maine aur Kishore ne ghar per ek choti si party rakhi hai.. tu jaldi aa jana theek hai" kala said, dutta looked at kala and nodded he went to aayi sahib and took her blessings and left for his work.
"wow tai bhao ka janamdin hai….kitna maza aayega na" roops chirped in her usual voice

"haan aur aaj hi hum bhao ka rishta pakka ker denge…. Voh aayi maine kaha than a meri dost ki jaan pechaan mein ek ladki hai… maine bhao ke liye baat ki hai aaj uske parents aur behen aa rahe hai" kala said

"kala dekho iss baar bhao is pooch ker sab kuch kerna nahi toh voh yaad hai na pichli baar kitna tamasha kiya tha bhao ne" Kishore reminded

"haan tai… mujhe toh lagta hai bhao aur shadi dono hi poles apart hai" roops added

"bus ab bappa se yahi prathana hai ki ek sunder sushil aur pyaari ladki aaye mere dutta ki zindagi main ab uski bhi umar ho chali hai" aayi sahib prayed

"per aaye sahib aap toh jaante hai na ki bhao shadi se kitna chidta hai…." Roops argued

"roops humara kaam hai usse manana…. Aur voh hum ker lenge hai na aaye" kala said and kishore cleared his throat "sab bhagwan ki marzi hai…. Bhao ko biwi nahi gulaam chahiyeh"

Diveker Niwaas:

"bus maine kaha na aayi mujhe shaadi nahi kerni koi bhi ladka jisse aap bolo main usse shadi nahi ker sakti" nakku screamed

"nakku beta sun yeh rishta supriya laayi hai… voh tera bura kyun sochege" babi said

"ek vohi toh hai jo bura sochti hai" nakku muttured under her breath "aayi kuch hi der mein bhai aa raha hai don't want to spoil my mood" nakku whined babi looked at her 21 year old desperately when supriya walked in

"aayi aap jante hai nay eh rishtaa bahut accha hai bade hi nazeeb walon ko milta hai yeh rishta" supriya added and babi nodded in agreement "ek baar iss nakku ki shadi uss machiene dutta se ho jaye bus uski life will be hell…. Aur phir nakku toh aise ziddi hai ki voh 2 din mein uss dutta ko chod ker bhaag jayegi aur main ganpat kaka ka apni mutthi mein ker loongi" supriya thought

Nakusha waited for a elder brother to arrive her only supporter apart from leela tai in this hell, leela hardy visited this house she preferred to stay in her own penthouse at ville parle with her husband and today she needed their advice desperately because the way things were going her parents would get her married quite against her choice with a man she hardly knew.

"hey meri koyal" baji entered with his luggage "kya hua tu mera darwaze per hi wait ker rahi hai"

"baji dada….. I was just waiting for you, that supriya has attacked me again" nakku hugged baji "uss aurat ko koi kaam nahi hai na hi uske pati ko aaj kal voh dono mere liye rishtaa dhood rahe hain" nakku said

Baji looked at nakku and smiled "naks teri umar hi kya hai bus 21 saal"

"yeh baat aayi aur baba ko samajh aaye toh accha hai na" nakku spat in anger

"ok chill aaj tayi ke ghar chalte hai aur suds se baat kerte hain he never gives wrong advice" baji declared

Dutta's Birthday Party
   
"aayi inse mileyeh yeh hai gapat deviker aur unki patni babi deviker, maine kaha tha na inke bare mein" kala introduced

Aayi sahib folded her hands and welcomed them "yeh mere bade bhai ki beti hai supriya and yeh uska pati ravinder" ganpat introduced

---- at leela's house---

"toh saali sahiba problem kya hai" sudarshan took the drink leela served them

"nakku ka toh roz ka hai sudarshan…." Leela commented

"tai… tujhe mazak lagta hai yahan aayi baba aur voh supriya mera rishtaa tay kerne gaye hai" nakku said

--- patil house---

"aradhana ji yeh rishtaa meri sabse choti beti nakusha ke liye hai …. Aur hum toh dhanya ho gaye hai" ganpat said

"deviker ji aapne ladki ko toh sab bata diya hai na humare dutta ke bare main" aayi sahib confirmed

"haan haan" babi chirped inn "bus hum toh yeh soch ker kush hain ki dutta jaise ek kamiyab bande se humri beti ki shadi ho rahi hai" aayi sahib smiled and so did kala

Dutta entered the mansion with Kishore and anay, supriya turned to look at her target "lo aa gaya… ab bus yeh haan ker de phir nakku se kaun poochega" supriya smiled devilishly "aunty ji aap nakku ki ek baar photo toh dekhiyeh" supriya said in her sugar coated voice.

Babi presented nakku's photograph and aayi sahib looked at it a smile spread across her face "kitni sundar hai dekh na kala" aayi showed kala nakku's photo and smiled "haan aayi" dutta walked near kala and looked at the deviker's "bhao dekh na.. kaisi hai" kala showed nakku's photo to dutta, Dutta gave a shocked look at kala "sunder hai na bhao"

"tai zara mere saath chal" dutta said in a commanding voice, kala nodded and looked at Kishore for support and they both followed dutta into his room

---- Leela's house---

"toh isme bura kya hai" leela argued "aur waise bhi you don't have a boyfriend"

"leela is right nakku… I mean you know…. Atleast give it a try ab voh teri shadi kal thodi kara rahe hai" sudarshan said

"tai yeh dhokla bahut acchha banaya hai tune" baji said , at this sudarshan smiled and leela and nakku glared at baji

"dada aap ko khane ke aalava kuch aur soojhta hai" nakku said

"nahi but nakku suds jiju theek bol rahe hai" baji added "ab chalo yaar shaadi ki baat hum kal karenge phele ladka toh haan kare" baji said

"hmm right….. hum abhi chitaa kyun ker rahe hain" leela said      

-- Patil House---

"tai yeh sab kya hai tu jaanti hai na mein shadi nahi kerna chahta" dutta spat in anger

"bhao tu ek baar photo toh dekh" kala pleaded

"haan bhao ek baar dekho yeh ladki sunder hai aur tujhse umar mein choti bhi hai" Kishore said

"haan bhao yeh bikul waise ladki hai jaise tujhe chahiyeh…. Ab bhao aayi ko bhi toh dekh uske kitne aarman hai tujhe leker" kala justified

"haan bhao yeh ladki tumhari her baat manegi..... aur tumse koi sawaal bhi nahi karegi" kishore said

"bhao ek baar photo toh dekh" kala presented nakku's photograph in front of dutta and he glanced at the picture for the very first time in his life. He stared at the picture as his eyes met the awesome beauty that girl was, she was short, petite, silky brown hairs, green eyes and skin as white as pearl.

"tai aapko jo sahi lagta hai voh karo" dutta said ultimately and he handed back kala nakku's photograph and kala gave a cheerful smile and Kishore gave a thumbs up to her.


Do let me know how the 1st part was post sincere and loads of comments

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wow that was good do cont. kya angle hai wah wah u really come up with fresh idea's no other FF has
keep it up Thumbs Up

Edited by skavitha08 - 05 June 2010 at 11:07am
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so finally dutta agreed to marry........bichari naku se bhi koi puchhe.........neways nice part.........continue soon.........
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Originally posted by swati2008

so finally dutta agreed to marry........bichari naku se bhi koi puchhe.........neways nice part.........continue soon.........


Yes he did reluctantly well he has his own reasons

nakku se koi nahi poochega lets see what nakku has to say about the whole proposal Wink
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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 11:31am | IP Logged
oh my god....soooo good...loved it yaar....pls jaldi upload karna...i loved it very much......yo are a good writer...:D:D:D
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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
dono hi shaadi nahi karna chahete.
 
plz dutta say yes....
 
plz update sooon it's verry intersting.
 
dying 2 read next part.
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awesome...update soon

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