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Unexpected :: [Mayur] :: Chapter 3 :: Page 48 (Page 37)

FragranceOfLove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MjhtFan_Mahima

Originally posted by MjhtFan_Mahima

saw all your three posts
how many times do i have to tell you
that you should not be nervous abt posting your updates

your updates are always amazing
and this update was rocking
nupur's dream...... by god........ mar jawan
and her hindi....... that's the best
mayank needs a p.a
hope it's nupur
waiting for their unexpected meeting
and the reply to my comment
continue soon
loads of love

Thanks a lot...... welcome sweety :)

Yaar i am always nervous about posting my first part..... ok aaab next part ke liye nervous maat hone.... tum nervous hogi toh hum sab ka kya hoga wahi joh manzoore kahani hoga...

They make me decide about character and everything else...

Thanks yaar.....

The colourful comments used are sooooo gorgeous.....Day Dreaming glad you liked them.... i loved them.....

I am in love with them! thx...... (acchi adat dala di hai tunne) kehne ki aadat bahut hai mujhe!

I will always reply to ur comment......and u know that.... of course yaar..... reply nahi kiya to main tujhe chan se jeena thoda nahi dungi lol......bilkul.....hak hai tumhara!

Thanks yaar.....



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FragranceOfLove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ....Anchal....

I know i know that i am late! bahut zyada late ho tum!

sorry na! chalo koi nahi....

And ya, i know ki tujhe kitna dukh hai nupur ki maut ka. yup.....plz topic change.....

So shut up and now lemme read. main nahi tum bol rahi thi...

"Fire and Ice"......hmm......kahin woh dono isi tarah toh nahi hain na? lemme see....

WOW! aswesome....stupendous....min boggling....romantic and a very beautiful.....DREAM?????? whoa! shock ho gayi? challenge karne ka nateeja dekh lo! WHAT THE HELL! stop cursing....u know i hate curses....

tune itna pyara sa dream banaya.....yup.....thank u....

i can see that u are really working hard on romantic things......good...thanks.....

meri toh har tarah se jeet hi hogi chahe tu romantic likhe ya na nahi i know......yeh logic tumhara......

the lyrics are beautiful......but tum toh kabhi bhi english songs sunti hi nahi ho....tum toh woh baba adam se zamane ke gaane sunti ho.....yup....i dont hear them........and by the way, old songs are meaningful and beautiful.....i love them a don't call them names.....and i never heard this song......

to yeh lyrics kahan se aaye? kahin tumne aise gaane sunna shuru toh nahi kar diya? ise kehte hain googling madam.....

lol.....yaa suzanne scene was hilarious.....thanks.....

and for once, nupur ekdum alag hai! yup she is different...

thank God woh sweet, simple, innocent ladki nahi hai.....kyunki tum already vaisi ho aur main toh jaanti hon ki tum kaise react karti ho....aww.....yeh galat baat hai/....but thanks.....

yahan par nupur rocking hai.....tumhari tarah seedhi saadi down to earth nahi....thanks....

so i love this change......thanks....

orphanage.......hmm......toh yahan par kahani shuru hogi! yup..dekhti jaao miss.....

and mayank is so full of attitude.....he isn't!!!!!!

dono opposite lagte hain.....par unmein ladai to hogi nahi......i wonder tumhe agar pata bhi ho ki ladai karne ke liye kya karna padta hai....cause tum toh kabhi ladti hi nahi ho.....i know mujhe ladai likhni nahi aati no ladai.....main ladai mein likhoon kya?

mayank kitna work alcoholic hai....good.....yup......woh toh hai,,,......

wow yaar........brilliant update.....par kuch zyada chota nahi tha? thanks......yup thoda chota tha.....

chal koi nahi.....main hoon na....ya tu toh hai hi.....

and i forgot to say that......jaldi update karo! just updating......aapka hi intezaar tha.....

Mahak.....tu jaldi se next part post karo.....kar rahi hoon baba.....

i know woh toh romantic hoga nahi.....kyunki first meeting haina......let's see.....

par haan....mujhe yeh part bahut acha laga.......mujhr lagta hai ki main bet haar jaaoongi.....u will......i am sure of that.....

i mean tum mujhe challenge hara kar hi dum! thanks.....

kyunki acha hai....isse mujhe romantic padhne ko milega......i know u miss romantic alcoholic......

aur yaar mujhe koi mills and boon ki book padhni achi lagti un books se zyada romantic likhna....try karoongi......never read any book of i don't know how they write....

update! ya......

P.S.- looks like logon ko tere update se zyada mujhse pyaar hai! thank God that i challenged u! thank u doston.....main har baar mahak ko challenge karke koi ache updates maang loongi.....i know! par har baar yeh method nahi chalega.....

tere liye,

yaar compliments ke liye thanks....

i have responded to them.......

yaar but ek baat teri mujhe galat lagi......

tune yeh toh keh diya ki main tab tak update na karoon jab tak tu na comment kare.....

par teri vajah se main kitna late update kiya hai......sab log naraz honge mujhse!

chal koi nahi...frdship ki hai......nibhaani toh padegi hi....


Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 24 June 2010 at 9:49am

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FragranceOfLove IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 9:34am | IP Logged


Hey guys! Thank u for the beautiful comments.....i have replied to them individually....check pages 35 to 37 for them....thanks for having faith in i will update my other ffs....and guys, thank u so much.....i really owe this one for u.....

                                                   Chapter 2

                                          Unexpected meetings



I was happy to come to a place where I can let myself out. I don't have to pretend to be a strong headed girl in front of these little angels. They love me the way I am. I don't have to pretend that I don't care when I actually do.


I always pretend that I am a strong girl who can manage everything and do anything. But the reality is, behind this bold girl, there is still a little fragile soul hiding. I am scared of the minute things but I show off like I can handle the tiger alone. I can't drink wine without spitting it out, and I show that I can have beer.


Well, I have to pretend. I need to survive. I can't let everyone see that I am so sensitive and weak and let everyone take advantage of my emotions. But at this orphanage, I am what I truly am.


"Hi" a child called and I looked up in that direction.


To my pleasant surprise, I saw my angel Susie bringing a hunk with her. Who was that macho? I am surprised. Well, I am bowled over. I never found someone so damn hot in this orphanage. But then, Suzanne should have been here to make him hers.


I am not interested. Hey! Who am I fooling? With his speeding steps, my heart beats are speeding up. Damn him!


He came near me and put his hands for a handshake. I smiled and took his hands into mine. I felt something but I don't know what it was.


He said, "Hey gorgeous, this is Mayank Sharma, MD of Sharma group of industries."


Man! This man was something. He dare call me like that only? Men and their flirting habits! Urgh! But I am not a fool. I decided not to play along.


I replied in most pleasing manner. I said, "Hey, I am Nupur Agarwal, the caretaker of this orphanage."


Mayank said, "So you are an Agarwal and still you are in this gutter when you should have been rich. You know, all Agarwal's are usually very rich."


I hate this man! I hate him like hell. How dare he say that? Let me teach him a lesson.


I said, "yeh dikhta toh acha hai par ismein akal bikul bhi nahi hai. Yeh sirf dekhne mein hi hero hai lekin akal mein zero hai. Aur guroor toh itna hai jaise isne sab kuch khud kamaya ho." But I knew that he won't get anything.




What the hell is she uttering? I hate her. But I will make sure that she is mine. Those who talk rudely to me, I make sure that they have to be with me. No one ever did talk rudely to me so basically, she is the first one. Damn her!


Nupur said, "umm….actually who said that all Agarwal's are rich? Actually I am what I am by my own methods. I am not a girl who has inherited anything from anyone."


I loved her confidence. I have never met such a girl in my life. She is so different and beautiful. She has to be mine.


We were still holding hands. Her touch of her silky creamy skin was giving me temptations. She is so soft. I wonder how soft her lips would be on mine.


I am feeling an urge to take her in my arms and kiss her. Well, it would be my first kiss actually. I never thought that I would like to kiss any girl. But she is so different.


She is confident and strong. I can't hate her. I actually like her a lot. Like? I have met her few minutes ago man! How can I like her? I am getting sick!


I replied, "Nice. It's nice to meet you Miss Nupur Agarwal."


She politely replied, "The pleasure is all mine."




I was about to go when I noticed that our hands were still together. I gestured him to leave my hand.


I thought he would leave it, so I just turned to walk away. It was unexpected when he pulled me closer. It was so unexpected and sudden that I got hit on his broad muscular chest.


I tried to get away but the grip of his hands on my back was strong. I was wondering if he was mad, when he pulled me closer.


I was suspicious of his intentions. I was nervous and shocked. It happened so suddenly that I couldn't understand anything nor could protest.


His hands were on my bare waist. Why the hell had I chosen to wear an off shoulder top with exposing waist today? But I had never thought that someone would meet me like this.


I nervously bit my lip. But it didn't take me seconds to realize that it was my biggest mistake.




I don't know what is happening with me, but I can't control myself anymore. I pulled her towards me and she too turned in a reflex.


Her soft fragrance had made me pull her towards myself. Her body too reacted like a magnet to mine. She smelled like jasmines.


I could feel her creamy skin under my fingers. She was shivering and I could feel that. But the sensation her skin was giving me was beyond explanation.


I saw her bit her lips and I couldn't hold myself back now. I took a bold step. I just captured her lips with mine and sealed them.


I kissed her but she didn't responded back.




What the hell! As soon as I bit my lower lip, I felt his warm lips on mine. And the thing I hate is I am feeling happy. There is something that tells me that his lips were meant to be on mine.


He kissed me softly and then passionately but I didn't responded. It was true that I didn't object, but I didn't want to give up too.


I didn't object or pushed him because I was mesmerized. I felt as if I have come to a place where I always wanted to. I felt that I always wanted this since long.


But I don't know why, I couldn't reply back. His lips are giving me warm sensations and a shiver was running through my spine. I don't know what the heck is going on.


When I was about to pull myself out of the trance, I pushed him back.


I was angry at him and at myself. Why the hell I didn't pushed him earlier?


I said, "Mr. Mayank Sharma, what the hell were you trying to do? Are you in your wits?"


He smirked and but I could feel he was somewhere guilty. He said, "I am sorry but I couldn't control myself. You are so beautiful. But why didn't you stop me earlier?"


This was a million dollar question! How could I tell him that I didn't stop him earlier because I myself was enjoying it? Damn me!


I tried to cook up a lie. I downed my eyes because I knew my eyes speak myself out. I said, "Actually, it was so unexpected that I couldn't say a thing. When I realized what actually was happening, I stopped you. I think its better that we don't meet ever."




I could somehow feel that I was guilty. Which jerk just kisses a girl in the first meeting? Well, it was my mistake but somehow I felt that it was right.


I asked her for an apology and she said that we should never meet again. This meant that she too had felt something.


But I too think that we need to control the desires growing inside us.


I said, "I think you are right. We should never meet again. Bye."


She too muttered a bye and we went in our own opposite directions.




But sometimes what we think never happens. They were meant to meet. Their opposite directions have to collide. And desires can never remain unfilled by force.



That's it for today!

It was huge!

And hope u liked their unexpected meeting.....

yeh abhi shuruvaat hai....aage abhi baaki hai....

Do comment....

So i would update as soon as i can....


Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 24 June 2010 at 10:01am

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.Daksha. Goldie

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 9:41am | IP Logged

Aakhirkaar slowy ne update kar hi diya......finally....
Yaar ye sach mein unexpected tha.....bohot bada waala.......
I was getting nervous yaar.......
But still very nicely written......ab toh ye romance jab ek din high point par pohinchega tab kya hoga.......(will their unreal feelings turn real)
Wo kehte hain na.....SOLID update tha......ek dum dhinchaak.......
Aage toh bohot kuch hai.......waiting for ur UNEXPECTED update.....

Edited by .Daksha. - 24 June 2010 at 10:31am

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.Rabia. Goldie

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 10:13am | IP Logged

awesome update
loved it to the core
meeting was awesome

do cont soon

Edited by fanofmjht - 24 June 2010 at 10:18am

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--Mahima-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
main kaha se shuru karu... tum hi bata do... par tum abhi yaha ho nahi toh main khud hi kucch soch lati hoon......
first let me start with something which i expected and got.........
i expected an update from you today as i know mahak never breaks her promises.......
i knew you will update today
second something i wanted and i partially got it
i wanted a mayur passionate meeting........ i told you yesterday....... i said it out of the blue....... i though never expected i would get that......... it was totally unexpected
third wat i never expected
a mayur kiss in the first meeting......... i never thought that would be so quick
i never ever expected that...........  that was totally unexpected.......
desire for each other already........... omg...... wow
this upadte was totally unexpexcted mahak
mazza hi aa gaya
ever line gave me something unexpected
mayur talks......... they were amazing
mayank impressed by her confidence was so cute
so mayank dosen't know hindi........ wow nupur has full advantage
mayur not leaving hands..... haath chodne ke liye pakadta bhi kaun hai
mayur holding nupur by waist...... omg never thought that would come so fast
and the kiss......... both were enjoying........ awwwwwwww
the push....... oh no........
and the lines never meet again.......... both don't know wat's in store for them
continue writing mahak
this story is going to be a hit
i have an urge of converting it into a book and telling the world wat a great writer my friend is......
plus i'll earn some profit too
keep writing  and i'll keep expecting the unexpected
loads of luv
p.s- this is the longest comment i have ever written and it was well deserved

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 24 June 2010 at 11:42am

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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 10:25am | IP Logged
just such an amazing update
i really loved their first meet
thanks for the pm


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Wow Mahak
it was simply mindblowing
just wow
do conti....soon

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