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...Noorya...

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 3:34pm | IP Logged

Helloz peopleTongue

This is my first attempt to an OS on SR so let me make one thing very clear........im not a good writterLOLLOL.....so plzz after readin it dont kill meWink
Actually i was bored so thought writting something about SR and this came like a rocket my dimaag ConfusedLOL...
good and bad comments are welcomed about me n my story but bashers plzz stay out of it its only about SR, me n my boringpaan...
 
I'll continu the story after the scene where Armaan says to Sid that he has to drink cappuccino, wear pink shirt and all...
 
 
 
 
Next day Armaan is yelling at Sid coz he doesnt want to come out of the changing room
 
Armaan : Siddhanth ab...ab bahar bhi aao naa!
 
Sid : No! main issi room mein hi rahounga!
 
Armaan : c'mon yaar tum...Riddhima ke liye itna bhi nahin kar sakte....(Sid shows his face behind the curtains)
 
Sid : par yeh karna zaroori hai? i mean log dekh kar kya sochenge??
 
Armaan : abbe who cares logoon ke bare mein....care tho sirf Riddhima ke bare mein karni hai...aur voh tumhe dekh kar deffo khush ho jaayegi...
 
Sid smiles : sach?
 
Armaan : haan much! chalo ab bahar aao (Sid finally decides to come out...a mocking face appears on Armaan's face seeing Sid in that pink shirt and Sid notice)
 
Sid : has rahe ho mujh pe??! (Armaan nood in a no) enough! main change karne jaa raha hoon...(Sid is about to go back n change but Armaan holds him by his arm)
 
Armaan : arre rukh naa main has nahin raha tha....bohut cute lag rahe ho mere coochie (and pinches his cheek)
 
Sid : Armaan tum....(but he cuts him)
 
Armaan : ok fine mazak kar raha tha....but seriously u're looking very nice (Sid just give him a look and JP Jiggy enter)
 
JP : arre wah Sid bhaya...aap tho bilkul hero lag rahe ho
 
Jiggy : hey JP tere pass bhi ek aisa shirt hai naa?
 
JP : arre haan....acha hua tumne bola...ab hum usse nahin pehnenge (Sid Armaan n Jiggy get confused)
 
Jiggy : kyun???
 
JP : arre Riddhima babhi tho humre saath rehti hai naa...aur agar humne voh pink shirt pehen liya tho kahin voh humse impress na ho jaaye....
 
Armaan : abbe yaar....shut up! jo laane ke liye kaha voh laaya??
 
Jiggy : haan haan yeh lo (Sid gets shocked by seeing wax!)
 
Sid : Armaan are you serious??
 
Armaan : nahin....kal hum guessing guessing khel rahe the....of course im serious yaar!
 
Sid : Armaan dekho...main yeh nahin karunga....cappuccino piya maine...yahan tak ki yeh pink shirt bhi pehen liya lekin main yeh wax nahin karunga...
 
Armaan : tumhe karna padega Sid
 
Sid : no way!...
 
Armaan : soldiers...attack!
(Sid runs from there before JP n Jiggy could do anything. They run after him in whole Sanjeevaani and trap him in locker room)
 
Armaan : ab kahan bhagoge mere pink candy...
 
JP : arre Sid bhaya kuch paane ke liye kuch khona padta hai
 
Sid : mujhe mere baal nahin khona!
 
Jiggy : arre yeh tho kuch bhi nahin hai Sid...logoon ko kya kya khona padta hai pyaar mein
 
Sid : guys meri baat tho suno...
 
Armaan : sun ne bolne ke liye time nahin hai...guys hold him! ( JP Jiggy hold Sid n lay him on the bench and Armaan quickely past wax on his legs)
 
Armaan : ok chodo usse kam ho gaaya...(they leave Sid n he sits on the bench n checks his legs)
 
Sid asks angrilly : ab?...ab iska kya karna hai??
 
Armaan : ab tumhe isse hatana hoga you'll have to snatch it
 
Sid : pagal ho gaaye ho?! dard hoga!
 
Armaan : yaar tu itna complain kyun karta rehta hai ladkyon ki tarah...aur yeh pink shirt pehen ke tho aur bhi ziada kar rahe ho....Riddhima ke husband nahin saheli baan gaaye ho...
 
Sid : Armaan tum..(he cuts him again)
 
Armaan : agar abhi hataoge nahin tho aur bhi mushkil ho jaayega (Sid looks at his legs)

Sid : Damnnnnnn!!!
 
Armaan : nahin daro mat dard nahin hoga...really
 
Sid : jhooth mat bol bohut ziada dard hota hai
 
Armaan : jhooth nahin bol raha....u know what agar tum isse bohut fast snatch karoge naa tho bilkul dard nahin hoga trust me...lekin agar tum slowly slowly karoge tho bohut dard hoga
 
Sid : really?
 
Armaan : yeah really
 
Sid : ok fine...(Sid bends n gets mentaly prepared to snatch the wax n Armaan covers his ears with his hands n Sid looks at him)
 
Sid : tum apne khaan band kyun kar rahe ho????
 
Armaan : voh actually jab tum snatch karoge tho....tho ek awaaz niklegi aur....aur voh awaaz mujhe bilkul pasand nahin...
 
Sid : awaaz? kaisi awaaz?
 
Armaan : voh tumhe snatch karne ka baad pata chalega (Sid gives him a tensed look n gets back to his position n so does Armaan)
 
Sid : one...two...three (n he snatch it) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
(tears rolls down his cheks coz of pain n Armaan comes near him)
 
Armaan : iss awaaz ki baat kar raha tha...(Sid looks at him still crying n lays his head on Armaan's shoulder)
 
 
SCENE CHANGED :
 
Sid n Armaan are walkin in the corridor n Sid is walkin weirdly coz his legs are still in pain
 
Armaan asks very cutely : bohut dard ho raha hai??
 
Sid looks at him with anger : nahin yeh tho mere naaya cool walk hai!...aur dard nahin JAAL raha hai...aisa lag raha hai ke aag ke upar apne taange frie kar raha hoon
 
Armaan laugh : dont worry pehli bar hai naa issi liye itna dard hua next time...(Sid stops n looks at him with even more anger) nahin...koi next time nahin hoga...
 
They walk again n saw Riddhima coming....
 
TO BE CONTINUED.......
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( updated 05/31)
 
Sid smiles seeing Riddhima but Armaan grabs his hand and take him to the corner
 
Sid : Armaan what are you doing???
 
Armaan : chalo yahan se varna Riddhima dekh legi
 
Sid : tho acha hai naa...main yeh ussi ke liye tho kar raha hoon tho uske pass jaounga naa
 
Armaan : abbe tum....chup chap chalo!
 
SCENE CHANGED :
 
Sid and Armaan are in the cafeteria and Armaan orders some drinks
 
Armaan : bhai saab ek coffee aur ek cappuccino dena (the waiter gives him the drinks and he offers one of them to Sid)
 
Sid smiles : Coffee! (Armaan takes it back and give him the cappuccino)
 
Armaan : oh sorry...yeh lo (Sid's smiles fades and they sit)
 
Sid : bohut maza aa raha hoga tumhe yeh sab karne mein naa....yeh disgusting cappuccino pilane mein..mere legs ko torture karane mein aur pooro sanjeevaani mein iss pink shirt mein ghoomane mein! kis baat ka badla le rahe ho mujhse??
 
Armaan : yaar tum taang nahin aate itna complain karne se??...jab dekho shikayat karte rehte ho jaise duniya ka sab se bada looser aur baad naseeb insaan ho...
 
Sid smiles sadly : tho hoon naa...Riddhima ko paane ke liye ek mazaak baan gaaya hoon agar main looser nahin hoon tho aur kya hoon....Riddhima meri ho kar meri wife ho kar bhi meri nahin hai..agar main baad naseeb nahin hoon aur kya hoon...
 
Armaan : dont worry Sid....2 din baad tumhe tumhari zindagi wapis mil jaayegi (he feels very bad for Sid n tries to change the topic) ab...c'mon yaar ghabrao naa...main hoon naa!
 
Sid : tum SRK ke bohut bade fan ho kya?? pehle voh 4 din ladki in aur ab main hoon naa...
 
Armaan : actually i like Salman Khan...bohut achi body hai uski lekin SRK ke dialogues bohut ache hain...dialogues se yaad aaya yeh JP kahan hai? kahin voh apna dialogue naa bhool jaaye...(just then he enters and came to Armaan)
 
JP : sorry Armaan bhaya voh kuch kam aaya tha
 
Armaan : haan koi baat nahin...yeh batao tumhe yaad hai naa kya karna hai? jab Riddhima aayegi tho tum mere pass aake bolo ki Dr Keerti mujhse baat karna chahti hai
 
Sid confused : yeh natak kyun?
 
Armaan : taaki mere jaane ke baad Riddhima tere saath baith kar baat kare...JP tum jao voh bas aane vaali hai (JP goes and hides with Jiggy behind the door)
 
Sid : par main bolounga kya uss se???
 
Armaan : calm down....normal baat kar lekin haan plzzz usse ghoorna mat bewakoofon ki tarah and for God sake for My sake for Sanjeevaani sake ziada over acting mat karna...
 
Sid annoyed : haan bas bas...itna bhi bura nahin hoon
 
Armaan : kash main tumhe record kar paata...tab pata chalta ke tum kitne ache actor ho (just then Ridz enters the cafeteria and saw Armaan and Sid there. Armaan smiles n looks down and Sid was already staring at her amazed...but Ridz was cofused lookin at Sid)
 
Ridz thoughts : pink shirt??...Sid aise colours ki bhi shirt pehenta hai??..(Armaan looks up and sees that Sid is staring like an idiot at Ridz so he hits him on his leg and Sid came to his sense n turn his face...Ridz went n ordered her drink)
 
Armaan : abhi abhi maine tumse kaha usse ghoorna mat aur tum kya kar rahe the?
 
Sid embarrased : mm...main kahan ghoor raha tha usse..voh mujhse dekh rahi thi...
 
Armaan : yeah right....(JP comes and start his drama)
 
JP : Armaan sir...(he cuts him)
 
Armaan : abbe zor se bol voh sunegi nahin
 
JP louder : ARMAAN SIR...DR KEERTI APKO DOOND RAHI HAI
 
Armaan : OH REALLY? OK...MAIN CHALTA HOON..SIDDHANTH..(he wish Sid luck n leave n also hides behind the door. Ridz turns and find Sid alone..she walks  toward him hesitantly. Sid looks up n sees Ridz standing she gave him a cute smile)
 
Ridz : may i?
 
Sid : sure...(she sits)...same cappuccino again?
 
Ridz : yeah...i didnt know tumhe cappuccino pasand hai...
 
Sid : pasand?...i i love cappuccino! mujhe roz cappucino pine ki adat hai varna mera din poora nahin hota..jaise tumhe dekh ke (Ridz get surprised) i mean..tumhe dekh ke aisa lagta hai...ki tum bhi roz piti ho...(behind the door Armaan is obseving Sid but cant hear anything)
 
Armaan : yeh Sid bol kya raha hai..mujhe sun ne ke liye uske kareeb jaana hoga (he looks at Jiggy then at JP n see a file in his hands. He took it hides his face goes n sits in a table behind Ridz)
 
Ridz : vaise...nice shirt...
 
Sid : really?? voh Armaan ne..i mean Armaan ne bola achi nahin hai...par i like pink tho maine pehen liya
 
Ridz smiles : pink mera fav colour hai
 
Sid : wow! ek aur common cheez...(Armaan waves to Sid n he saw him, Armaan was trying to say something but Sid did not understand so he concentrates on Armaan and forgot Ridz. He starts makin faces and Ridz noice him and gets confused so she turned to see whats happening behind..Armaan quickely hides back his face and Sid pannicked so without thinkin puts his hand on Ridz's)
 
Sid : RIDDHIMA!...(she looks at his hand then at him and Sid starts staring at her again...she was not feelin comfortable so was lookin up and down but Sid was lost and suddenly his mobile rings which brought him back to reality. he takes back his hand n checked his mobile....Armaan's message)
"idiot! saara din vahan
rahega kya? ab cafeteria
se niklo kisi kam
ke bahane....
right now!"
 
Sid looks again at Armaan who was saying go with his head he then looks at Ridz
 
Ridz : kya hua?
 
Sid : voh...mujhe jaana hai..ek important call karni hai...see you (and he leaves from there followed by Armaan leavin Ridz all confused)
 
Ridz thoughts : yeh Sid itna ajeeb kyun behave karne laga hai uss party ke baad....par acha laga yeh dekh kar ki hum phirse theek se baat kar sakte hain...
 
SCENE CHANGED :
 
Armaan and Sid are in locker room and Armaan is quite happy that Sid did not ruined his plan
 
Armaan : finally yaar! aaj tum normal insaan ki tarah behave kar rahe the...
 
Sid : excuse me? main normal hoon...tum itna pressure daal rahe ho mujh par issi liye sab ulta hota rehta hai...
 
Armaan : haan haan theek hai...ab sun aage kya karna hai....kal JP aur Jiggy Riddhima ki khaanon tak yeh khabar pooncha denge ki tum aur ek basket ball match khelne vaale hain phir Riddhima ko waje jaan na hoga aur tum usse bologe ke hum dino ke beech jagda hua aur maine kaha ki tum mujhe haara nahin sakte..phir voh tumhe rokhne ki koshish karegi aur TAB!...tab tum Riddhima ko provoke karoge shart lagane ke liye
 
Sid confused : Riddhima mujhse shart lagale...par kyun?
 
Armaan : very good question my friend!...shart iss liye taaki tum jeeto aur usse bahar dinner ke liye le jao
 
Sid smiles : haan..yeh achi idea hai...(then he lost his smile n gets nervous) main aur Riddhima dinner ke liye bahar?? akele??
 
Armaan : haan kyun? nahin jaana?
 
Sid : jaana hai par...par maun usse kahunga kya? hum karenge kya?
 
Armaan loosin his patience : usse yeh bol ke tu kitna bada stupid fool idiot hai!...abbe dinner ke liye jaa rahe tho khana khaoge aur kya karoge!
 
Sid still not convinced : par dude..maine Riddhima ke saath akele ek poori shaam kabhi nahin bitaayi hai...tho main uss se kya bolounga?
 
Armaan : ab main yeh kaise solve kar sakta hoon yaar tum uske saath romantic baatein kar mausam ki baatein...tum...peom! tumhe shayari aati hai??
 
Sid : of course! i love shayarizz
 
Armaan gets happy : really? tho sunao ek mujhe...(Sid thinks for a while and starts)
 
Sid : hmm....aankhon mein teri ajab si adayein hai
         dil ko....(Armaan cuts him)
 
Arman : abbe yeh tho gaana hai!
 
Sid : acha?...maine tho abhi socha iske bare mein
 
Armaan : rehne de...shayari chor tum simple si baatein kar...about life...usse apne din ke bare batao apne like dislike ke bare mein aur phir sab khud ba khud ho jaayega....
 
Next day in Sanjeevaani talks were one about the match and as soon as Ridz enters the hospital JP Jiggy start
 
Jiggy : mujhe tho 100% yakeen hai ke Sid hi jeet lega (Ridz get confused)
 
JP : arre bewakoof humne kab kahan ki Sid bhaya nahin jeet sakte...hum tho sirf yahin keh rahe hain ki Sid bhaya kisi aise vaise khiladi ke saath nahin balke Armaan sir ke saath khelne vala hai
 
Jiggy : haan tho?...yaad nahin jab Sid ne seniors ke saath khela tha tho kaise sabak sikhaya sab ko...
 
JP : haan malum hai the hum vahan par...par chalo hum dono ke bolne se kya fark parta hai...aaj shaam pata chalega ke match kaun jeet tha hai Armaan sir ya Sid bhaya (JP Jiggy leave from there n now Ridz is worried and wants to know why are they playin a match. She is lookin for Sid and finds him in changing room)
 
Ridz : hi...
 
Sid : hi...heu..kaisi ho?
 
Ridz : theek hoon....tum?
 
Sid : fine
 
Ridz : voh....sanjeevaani mein sab..tumhare aur Armaan ke match ke bare mein baat kar rahe hain (Sid gets happy seein that she found out about the match)
 
Sid : haan...voh hum shaam ko khel rahe hain
 
Ridz : kyun?
 
Sid : voh....aaj subah mera aur Armaan ka jagda hua aur usse lagta hai main usse haara nahin sakta aur usse galat sabit karunga
 
Ridz : Sid tumhe kissi ko kuch sabit karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...naa hi Armaan ko aur naa hi kisi aur ko
 
Sid : zaroorat hai Riddhima..aaj zaroorat hai...aur vaise bhi poori sanjeevani ko yeh baat pata lag chuki hai ab main peeche nahin haath sakta...sab ko lagega ki main Armaan se dar gaaya
 
Ridz : Sid plzz...mujhe pata hai aise match ke bare mein...humesha kuch naa kuch galat hota hai...
 
Sid : kya galat ho sakta hai Riddhima?? (just then Sid feels that its time to provoke her) oohh...let me guess...Armaan haar jaayega...yahin naa?
 
Ridz get confused : what?
 
Sid : Armaan ko haarte hue dekh kar bohut bura lagega tumhe.....yeh batao ke ziada kis baat pe bura lagega...mere jeetbe oar ya uske haarne par?
 
Ridz gave him a killing look : Armaan ke haarne mein mujhe koi fark nahin parta!
 
Sid : Oh!..matlab mere jeetne pe ziada bura lagega...
 
Ridz : maine aisa kuch nahin kaha!!
 
Sid : ek kaam karo shaam ko match dekhne aa jao infact aa ke Armaan ko support karo...i dont mind...(Ridz feels like killin him now!)
 
Ridz : mujhe yeh stupid match dekhne mein koi dil chaspi nahin hai!
 
Sid : WOW...itna bura lagega Armaan ke haarne mein jo aa ke dekh bhi nahi sakti
 
Ridz : Sid tum...!
 
Sid : haan main!...main hi jeetounga...u know what...lets make a bet!
 
Ridz get confused again : bet?
 
Sid : yep!...tum match dekhne aa jao aur agar main jeet gaaya tho...
 
Ridz angrilly : THO??!
 
Sid : tho tum mere saath......date pe jaogi...(ok now Ridz is completely shocked by this!....on a date?? with Sid?? is he serious??? she was lost in her thoughts but continus to provoke her...) kya hua?..dar gaayi?
 
Ridz : FINE! manzoor hai!.....aur agar tum har gaaye tho??
 
Sid : tho..........tum Armaan ke saath jao...
 
Ridz : shart mere aur tumhare beech hain!...Armaan ko beech mein mat daalo!
 
Sid : fine tho.....tum jo kahogi main voh karunga
 
Ridz : Done! (and she just leave from there like a lil angry kid..Sid gets happy that it worked but sad coz he just hurt her again)
 
Sid : sorry Riddhima...maine tumhe phirse hurt kiya...lekin tumhe gussa dilane ke liye mere pass aur koi raasta nahin tha...aur ab main yeh match jeet ke hi rahounga....tumhare liye....
 
The day passed n everyone is excited about the match..Sid is in locker room thinkin about Riddhima, her anger n feels kinda happy thinkin that maybe...maybe Ridz had moved on and wants to be with him....Armaan enters the locker room n finds Sid there
 
Armaan : hey dude! ready?
 
Sid : yeah...
 
Armaan : arre tumne itni lambi short kyun pehna hai?? i mean itna lamba pehen na tha tho legs wax kyun kiya??
 
Sid : tho kya chaddi pehen ke aata apne legs dikhane ke liye!
 
Armaan : ok fine...gussa kyun karta hai yaar...match ko leke itna nervous hai?....daaro mat im sure u'll win
 
Sid : excuse me?..main darta nahin hoon tumse aur naa hi main nervous hoon...main bas Riddhima ke bare mein soch raha tha...
 
Armaan : Riddhima...ooh right Riddhima!...tho kam ho gaaya??
 
Sid : haan...humne shart bhi rakha aur voh match bhi dekhne aa rahi hai
 
Armaan : great! ab bas tujhe match jeetna hai aur tum dono dinner pe jaoge
 
Sid : dont worry...main hi jeet lounga
 
SCENE CHANGED :
 
The whole staff is at BBC waitin for the match to begin...all of them are sreamin Sid and Armaan's name...Ridz come with Sue and they sit on a bench...Sid saw them goes there n puts his foot on the bench where Ridz was n tied his shoelace. Ridz first look at him but soon her eyes stop at his leg and she gets surprised..Sue also noticed his leg and gets shocked!
 
Sue : Bro!!? yeh tumne kya kiya??
 
Sid : what?
 
Sue : tumhara leg?...pehle tho yeh aisa nahin tha!!...tumne apne legs wax ki??
 
Sid gets nervous n embarased : nahin tho...yeh tho humesha aise hi the...
 
Sue : no bro..maine dekha hai..(Sid cuts her)
 
Sid : Sue plzz...mujhe match khelni hai tho main jaa raha hoon....badi aayi mere legs notice karne...(he turns to leave but Ridz stop him)
 
Ridz : Sid (he turns back)....all the best (he just noods n leave)
 
Sue : i swear bhabhi bro ke legs aise nahin the...
 
Ridz : i know...main bhi Sid ke saath reh chukki hoon Suvarna...
 
Sue : pata nahin kyun par bro kuch ziada hi weird hone laaga hai...(Ridz just smiles)
 
Jiggy whistles the begginin of the match n the game starts. After while Sid is leadin wih 22 to 20. Armaan is dribbling the ball Sid wants to take it but he moves on the left n accidently push Sid who fells n hurts his elbow n it starts bleeding. People get surprised n Armaan was about to help him when he saw Ridz rushing
 
Ridz : Sid! (Sid sits on the floor n checks his wound. Ridz kneels down quite worried)
 
Sid : Riddhima..im fine....kuch nahin hai (but she was not listening him n wiped the blood with her duppatta)
 
Ridz : bohut dard ho raha hai?
 
Sid smiles : ab nahin....(Ridz realized her state n just looked at him. Armaan was watchin the scene n feels happy for them but hurt inside. He then goes to them)
 
Armaan : im sorry Sid..galti se...
 
Sid : its ok...its a game hota hai
(Armaan helped him to stand n Ridz went back to her place n the match starts. It was almost the end of the match now only few mins were left. The score was equal 63. Again Armaan had the ball n was dribbling...Sid looks at Ridz n remembered their bet he then looks at the ball and at Armaan...Armaan moved on with the ball but Sid smartly took it n scored a basket just at the moment when the end of the match was whistled. Sid's supporters get really happy n JP Jiggy were dancin with joy. Sid just took a breath of relief n feels a hand on his shoulder....Armaan
 
Armaan : congrats man...(they shared a hand shake n Sid without thinkin twice just hugged him)
 
Sid : thanks bhai...(Armaan just smiles with teary eyes n after few secs broke the hug. Everyone came around Sid to congratulate him..only Ridz was standing where she was....then everyone left the BBC and Ridz slowly walked toward Sid. Armaan was standing in a corner happy seein them together...)
 
Armaan : aaj tumhe jeetna hi tha Sid..kyunki tumhara pyaar tumhare saath tha....(he smiled with teary eyes n just left.....)
 
Ridz : congrats
 
Sid : thanks
 
Ridz : dard ho raha hai?...chot pe?
 
Sid : nahin ab nahin ho raha.................tho?
 
Ridz : tho?
 
Sid : main jeet gaaya...........
 
Ridz smiles : tum shart jeet gaaye Sid..tho mujhe tumhare saath bahar jaana hi hoga...
 
Sid : vaise agar tumhe nahin jaana hai....
 
Ridz : jaana hai....
 
Sid smiles : tho kal shaam ko chalein? ( Ridz smiles n noods)
 
 
The next evening Ridz was getting ready she cant believe she is goin out with Sid....its like all their problems all their misunderstandings have been solved by thei own...but thats not the point...the point is that she is goin on a date with her husband, with Sid...and only the thought makes her smile....She decides to wear one of ther light pink churidar...she remembered Sid in the cafetaria seein the colour n smiles......after some time the doorbell rings and hearing that her heart beats faster....
 
Ridz : Sid....(she goes down, take a deep breath n opened the door....she was right its Sid...wearing her favourite white UB shirt holdin a bouquet. Sid smiles n gave her the flowers n Ridz smiles back)
 
Ridz : thanks...
 
Sid : heu...chalein?
 
Ridz smiles : haan...(they leave n after some time reach the place. a beautiful n romantic restaurant with lots of candles flowers n a soft music..the waiter came n request them to follow hil. Sid helped Ridz to sit n then he also sits. Ridz was observing the restaurant)
 
Sid : kya hua? jagah achi nahin lagi?
 
Ridz : nahin..aisi koi baat nahi hai...bohut khubsurat hai..(Sid smiles)
 
Sid : vaise ek baat bataoun....pink colour mujhse ziada tumpe achi lagti hai (Ridz smiles but could not believe what she just heard...did he just said that im looking preety in pink??....no this cant be true...that must be a dream...but no its not..all this is real, this night, this place, Sid...is it really Sid? the Sid i know is soo different...the Sid i know would never say something like that or take me on a date...or maybe this is Sid but i never got the opportunity to know him....she was lost in her toughts...in Sid...)
 
Sid : Riddhima?...tum theek ho?
 
Ridz : haan...
 
Sid : khana order karein? (she noods. Sid calls the waiter n they ordered their food...they eat the dinner n enjoyed their evening. The DJ played a very romantic music and people start dancing. Ridz smiles seeing the couples n Sid got an idea...he stands up n Ridz get confused. He comes near her n asked for a dance)
 
Sid : may i? (Ridz thinks a sec n slowly puts her hand on his. Sid smiles n they walk to dance floor. He was holding Ridz's hand and puts the other one on his shoulder...he then runs his hand on her waist Ridz looks at him and lost herself in his eyes...so does he.....they forgot the place they were and people around the only thing which matters was their togheterness.........
 
SCENE CHANGED :
 
Sid n Ridz are in the car n Ridz is thinkin about the evening the spend with Sid
 
Sid : Riddhima.....voh..tumhe ghar jaana hai?
 
Ridz : tho aur kahan jaoungi?
 
Sid : nahin voh...actually.....main soch raha tha...kyun naa hum meri favourite jagah chalein?
 
Ridz : tumhari favourite jagah? kahan?
 
Sid : beach pe.....par agar tumhe ghar jaana hai...
 
Ridz smiles : beach pe chalte hain...(Sid gets happy n did not hide his joy. They reach the beach n were walkin along the sea)
 
Ridz : tho yeh tumhari favourite jagah hai?
 
Sid embarrased : haan...
 
Ridz : kyun? aisa kya special hai iss jagah mein? (Sid stops sits on the sand n admires the view..Ridz sits near him)
 
Sid : kuch bhi nahin.....lekin yahan aane mein bohut acha lagta hai...khas kar jab maan mein confusion ho...pata hai Houston mein jab bhi mom dad ke saath mera jagda hua karta tha tho main beach pe jaake maan halka karta tha saari problems se door.......yeh thandi thandi hawa...samundar ki awaaz...kuch der ke liye saare pareshaniyaan bhoola deta tha.....aur jab kisi apne ke saath aate ho tho voh pal aur bhi khas aur bhi khubsurat banta hai....(Ridz is amazed..she can listen him like that forever...Sid realized that he is saying too much n feels embarased)
 
Sid : heu....aur tumhari favourite jagah kaun si hai?
 
Ridz still lost : jahan tum......(Sid gets surprised n Ridz realized what she was saying) i mean...jahan tum stress tension...in sab cheezon se door ho...apne ghar....apnon ke pass...
 
Sid gets sad : lekin jab apnon ka saath naa ho tho voh ghar ghar nahin lagta....(Ridz get the point n lost her smile so Sid tries to cheer her up)
 
Sid : kitne dinon baat hum phirse ek doosre ke saath theek se baat kar rahe hain naa...
 
Ridz : haan...mujhe tho lagta hi nahin tha ke hum dono dobara ek saath....i mean bina lade reh sakte hain....(Sid looks down)
 
Sid : im sorry Riddhima....(ridz looks at him confused n he looks at her)
bohut hurt kiya maine tumhe.....par yakeen maano tumhe iss tarah treat karke sab se ziada mujhe dukh ho raha tha....
 
Ridz : tho kyun karte ho aisa Sid? kyun khud ko aur mujhe dukh de rahe ho? (sid could see the pain in her eyes but what he noticed more was the answer she was waiting for soo long..so he finaly decides to give her the answer tonight)
 
Sid : tumhari khushi ke liye....Riddhima maine tumhara pyaar dekha hai Armaan ke liye....tumhara pagalpaan dekha hai...tho jab Armaan laut aaya..tumhari zindagi ka sab se bada sach...tho main tum dono ke beech kaise aata? (Ridz had tears in her eyes seeing Sid's pain n she remembered they convo at the party) mere liye sab se important tumhari khushi hai Riddhima...main nahin chahta tha ki tum majboori mein shaadi apnao...tumhe khush rehne ka poora haq hai Riddhima kyunki zindagi ne tumhare saath bohut naa insaafi ki hai...aur agar voh khushi Armaan hai tho voh hi sahi
 
Ridz with teary eyes : yaad hai Sid...maine party mein tumse kya kaha tha...main manti hoon ke maine Armaan se bohut pyaar kiya hai...apne jaan se bhi ziada...par..par pyaar ka matlab mujhe tumne samjhaya hai...Armaan mera ateet hai Sid...ek aisa ateet jo humesha mere saath rahega...ek yaad baan kar.......tum mere aaj ho Sid..aur mera aane wala kal...aur main apna aaj apna kal aur meri poori zindagi apne pati ke saath bitana chahti hoon....tumhare saath Sid...(Sid gets shocked n happy at the same time hearing this...a smile of a new hope appears on his face...) Sid maine kabhi humare rishtey ko todna nahin chaha....yeh rishta meri zindagi hai pehchan hai meri....main Riddhima Modi hoon aur humesha rahungi......aur iss se bada sach meri zindagi mein aaj kuch nahin hai.....(she puts her hand on his shoulder) Sid kya humara rishta itna kamzor hai ki ek misunderstanding ke waje se hum uska samna nahin kar sakte??....kya hum humare rishtey tho ek aur mauka nahin de sakte Sid??...(Sid keep lookin at her with love and noods in a yes...she smiles they lost theirselfs in each other eyes..........and sudenly it starts raining which broke their eye lock....Ridz stands up n starts walkin when.............)
 
Sid : i hate cappuccino.......(she gets confused n forgettin the rain turns back lookin at Sid)...bohut karvi hai...mujhe coffee pasand hai..aur pink colour main pehenta nahin hoon...at least voh wala pink main nahin pehenta......
 
Ridz still confused : matlab?
 
Sid : matlab....voh sab maine tumhe impress karne ke liye kiya....Armaan ka madat lete hue....(Ridz is shocked now) usne mujhe tumhari pasand naa pasand ke bare mein bataaya....tumse kaise baat karun kaise behave karun....
 
Ridz hurted : matlab.....matlab aaj jo kuch bhi tumne kiya jo kuch bhi tumne kaha.....voh sab Armaan ne tumhe sikhaya....jooth tha sab?....(Sid all wet takes few steps toward her)
 
Sid : nahin Riddhima....yeh sab jooth nahin hai...jo kuch maine kaha jo kuch maine kiya...voh sab sach hai...infact jo kuch Armaan ne mujhse karne ke liye kaha tha main vaise kuch nahin kar paaya.......shayad main romantic hoon hi nahin.....aur jab bhi maine Armaan ke kehne pe kuch kiya hai tho humesha kuch galat hota tha.......aur main aaj ki shaam ko special banana chahta tha......par shayad main voh bhi nahin kar paaya...(he looks down feeling guilty)
 
Ridz : Sid kya maine tumhe badalne ko kaha? kya maine kaha ki tum coffee nahin cappuccinon piyo?...nahin naa...tho phir tum kyun badalne ki koshish kar rahe ho?....Sid tum jaise ho mujhe vaise hi ache lagte ho (Sid looks at her) kyunki tum bohut ache insaan ho Sid....humare difference hume poori karte hain Sid.......lekin haan..tumhari ek baat mujhe bilkul nahin pasand......tum humesha apni maan maani karte rehte ho....bina pooche bine samjhe ek nateeje pe poonchte ho aur sochte ho ki yahin sab ke liye acha hai...aur yeh tumhari sab si buri adat hai! (Sid smiles listening her n Ridz noticed)
 
Ridz : has kyun rahe ho??
 
Sid : jab tum mujhe aise dhaant thi ho tho bohut acha lagta hai....
 
Ridz : ab chalein?....barish bohut tez ho rahi hai....(she turns to leave but Sid holds her arm..makes her face him n goes close to her)
 
Sid : agar party ke baat tumhe yaad aa gaayi hai iska matlab hai ki jo tumne mujhse maanga tha voh bhi yaad hai...(Ridz thinks for a sec but doesnt remember) actually kuch maanga nahin....kuch sun na chahti thi mujhse...(then she remembers what she was asking from him and gets embarrased n looks down....) I Love you Riddhima (she looks up into his eyes) main tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon.....aur main tumse vaada karta hoon main tumhe duniya ki har khushi dene ki poori koshish karunga....zindagi bhar tumhara saath dounga har more pe tumhara saath dounga....tumhara dost baan kar....life partner baan kar........
 
Riddhima could feel the sincerity in his voice and they keep staring at each other lost in their world and ready to start their life from a new beggining with trust respect and most important with LOVE........
 
THE END....
 
So here was my lil attempt to write on my most fav jodi SR...Embarrassed
sowwie for the mistakes and if u did not enjoyed readin it...and for the ones who requested me to write the part this was the last but i think u got that with the THE ENDLOLLOL
hope i did not desapointed you guys and if yes then SOWWIEZZZ hunLOL
oo and yes i hope the "romantic" moment was there.....i tried my best to make it
like our original SR romantic moments so hope it workedWink
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
God Bless You All,
Noorya


Edited by ...Noorya... - 31 May 2010 at 10:45am

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heyyyyyyy!!!
i love love love ur FF!!
Pz plz plz do continue!!

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Originally posted by pinguunique

heyyyyyyy!!!
i love love love ur FF!!
Pz plz plz do continue!!

aww thanks sweetsEmbarrassed

and thanks for waisting ur time on reading my OSLOLLOL
ur comment means a lot to me
and about the next part.....
yaar u're the only one requesting itLOLLOL
if i get toda more comments then i'll deffo post it and if not
tho bhi i'll post it for u yaarWinkHug
 
God Bless,
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hey sweety...it was sooo cute n hilarious...i cud imagine it happening...
waitin 4 de next part

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Liked your OS a lot...... Can't believe that you are a beginner in writing OS...... Its well written......Clap Clap Clap ....  Please do continue.... Waiting for Ur next update...... Big smile

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i want a next part!!! this part was fun... hope next part has fun with ridhima too!!!

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this was funny!LOL..i loved your dialogs!Approve.. hope the next part will be funny too!..but in a romantic way that involves SR!Day Dreaming..please do continue sweets! Embarrassed

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Hey Noorya Hugwow this is ur first OS..its awesome plz continue loved ur dialogues...ROFL i think this can happen in the show too..LOL keep them coming sweetz..Big smile

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