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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Confused
Originally posted by visrom

(Pls go thru prev page to understand the whole story and who is the shooter)
 
Scene : Bureau...
 
Sachin : Sir, Sir....bachayiye
 
ACP : Kya hua Sachin...itne dare hue kyon ho?
 
Sachin : Sir, koi mere jaan ke peeche hai sir....koi mujhpar goli chala raha hai sir1!!
 
ACP : Kaun
 
Sachin : Pata nahin sir....use theek se nishaana lagana bhi nahin aata sir....lagta hai life mein pehli baar Gun ka istemaal kar raha hai/rahi hai. Main apne ghar se nikla toh goliyon ki baarish hone lagi....main darkar gaadi mein baitha aur yahan aa gaya ki shaayad aap log mujhe bacha sake.
 
Daya : Kahan hai woh? Main dekhkar aata hoon.
 
(And Daya goes out and comes back in)
 
Daya : Baahar toh koi nahin hai...yeh tumhara wehem hai.
 
Sachin : Nahin sir....aaj ke baad main aapke saath hi rahoonga. Main aapke ghar mein paying guest bankar rahoonga.
 
Daya : ConfusedConfusedConfused
 
 
 
 
Plz don't mind .. aage ka continue  karati heun
Daya: Ye bhai...tuze meinhi mila tha.....tum Fredy ke sath jake raha?
Sachine: Sir..Bhabhji Muze ghar nahi aane de rahai hein
Daya:Kyo..kya kiya tune?
Fredy:Usase kya puchate hein sir..muzase puchiye..ye paraso hamare ghar khane ke liye aaya tha..har vakat mere piche..mein biwi se kuch baat karane jau..to bhi mere saath..kitani baar mein ese kaha ..are bhay do minute to mere biwi ke saath muze chod do...lekin ye mana hi nahi..tang aakar mere wife ne ese kaha agar fir se tum mere ghar mein pair hi nahi rakhana..
Daya: Bad manners sachin..sab ke piche piche chalneki  Buri aadat hein tumhe..
ACP: Daya..aajake din tumhare saath rakho...esake jaan pe aa padi hein...
Daya: Sir aap muze kyo bakara bana rahein ho..thik hein aapane kaha esaliye...eak din..lekin meri sharth hein mere saath Abhijeet bhi rahega..Manjur ho to?
ACP: Kyo nahi aayega wo..wo to tumhara best friend hein...
Fredy: (Vivek ka)Chalao achha huva...aaj kal Abhjeet sir bahut chup chaap rahate hein..Daya sir ke saath rahenge to unke chehare ki khushi vaaps laut aayegi..
(Tabhi Abhijeet vaha aata hein)
Daya:Abhijeet aaj tum mere saath mere ghar mein chaloge..
Abhi: Sach Daya..kitane dino baad hum aiseBig smile
Sachine: Sir mein bhi aayunga aapake saathBig smile
Abhi:KyaShocked(Daya ko kone mein lekar) Daya ye kya kara raha hein esane pahelehi tuzse muzako dur kiya hein..aur tum ese bhi hamare saathConfused
Daya:Kya karu mein ACP sahb ne insist kiya..nahi to..Please Abhijeet mere saath aao nahi to..din bhar mere piche piche firata rahata hein..ab raat ko bhi..mein to pagal ho jaunga yaarConfusedCry
Abhi: Are..aatahun yaar..pareshan mat ho ..he bagavan hamko Sachinse bachaooooUnhappy
(Raat ko Daya ke ghar mein-abhi,sachin aur Daya so rahein hein..Sachin ko aise lagata hein ki Daya ke ghar mein koi ghusa hein...wo  Daya ko Uthata hein)
Sachin: Daya sir..Daya sir...muze lagata hein ghar mein koi ghus aaya hein?
Daya:Kya..kidhar?
Sachin:Shayd hall mein hein
Daya: Chalo jakar check karate hein..
(Daya aur Sachin hall mein jata hein aur pura hall check karate hein..lekin koi nahi milata unhe...es bich mein Abhijeet jag jata hein...Daya aur Sachin ko na pakar uthkar hall mein aata hein)
Abhi: kya huva Daya?..tum dono yaha kya kar rahein ho?
Sachin: Sir muze lagata hein ghar mein koi ghus aaya hein esaliye hum dono yaha dekha rahe thein ki koi hein to nahi?
Ahi: to kuch mila.
Daya:Nahi yaar koi nahi..shayd esako wehem ho gaya hoga.
Sachin: nahi sir..muzape vishwa kijiye..yaha koi tha...
Abhi:Daya hum sara ghar check karate hein...shyd vo ghar mein hi kahi chuopa ho?
Daya: thik hein..
( vo tino daya ka sara ghar check karate hein...lekin kuch nahi milata unhe..fir sab so jaate hein..lekin kuch der baad Sachin ko  fir se lagata hein ki ghar mein koi ghusa hein..wo abhi aur daya ko fir se jagata hein..aur wo tino fir se ghar..aur ghar ke bahar jakar check kart hein..lekn koi nahi hota...sachin aise 2-3 baar karata hein..daya ko buhut ghussa aata hein)
DayaAngry sachin..tumhe wehem ho raha hein...koi nahi hein yaha..kyo bar-baarhamein nid se jaga raha hein tu..so kyo nahi jaate..
Sachin: nahi sir ye mera vehem nahi hein..sach mein hi yaha koi tha..wo muze marana chahata hein..please sir..please sir mera bharosa kariye...
Abhi:THi hein hum bharosa karate hein...tum so jao hum yha pehara dekhe baithate hein
(Sachin So jata hein aur abhi daya usake bajun mein pahera dene beithete hein..)
Abhi Stern Smile Sachin Sleepy DayaErmm(Ye har baar hamare bich mein aata hi hein)
 
(Next morng CID bureau)
Abhi SleepySleepyDaya
ACP: FRedy..ye abhi aur daya aaj bureau mein so kyo gaye hein?
FRedy: Kal Raat tak wo sachino pahera de rahe the
ACP: kyo..kal raat aisa kya ho gaya?
Sachin ACP ko sab bata deta hein
Daya  aur Abhi tab jagate hein
Daya:ACP sir aaj hum esake saath nahi raheinge
Abhi: Ha sir..esaka dusara intazaam kar dijiye.
Sachin: lekin sir mere jaan ko khatara hein
ABHi-Daya: Ye mere bhai hame maaf kara do...apane liye dusara intzaam kara lo.
Sachin: Thik hein sir...aaj Mein ACP ke saath ACP sir ke ghar jaunga..
ACP: KYa?Shocked..nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiD'oh
 


Edited by jiya1 - 03 June 2010 at 10:08pm

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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Hey Jiya di...that was really nice!!!!ClapLOL

i liked the last line wher ACP says :Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii....LOLLOL
This Sachin is just soo bugging!!! Koi intezaam to karna hi hoga.... Angry

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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
Wackocontinue:
ACP:THik hein Sachin aaj tum mere ghar aana..FRedy aur Viviek...tum bhi chaloge
FRedy:Sir..aap muzako rahanehi dijiye..Vivek ko mein sahe raha tha...ab ye Sachin bi?Confused
ACP:Ye Fredy..jyada natak mat karo..aaj tuz ko aur Vivek ko mere saath aanahi padega?
VIVek:Confused..Ouch (apana pet dono hatose pakadake) sir.lagata hein ..mein nahi aa sakata..mere pet mein bahut dard ho raha hein.
(Tabhi Dr. Salukhe aate hein)
Dr.Salunkhe: Ghabrav mat bete...Dr.Salukhe aa gaye hein..mein tumhe Dawa deta hun..tumhara pet dard 2 minute mein gayab ho jayega.
Fredy: Vivek bus kar abhi ye natak..ye koi kaam na aayega...hame jabardasti vaaha chalanahahi hoga.
Vivek: mein bach bhi jata ...lekin ye dr.Salunkhe bich mein aagaye..ab mein enako bhi nahi chhodunga.
Fredy: ye tum Kya karane vaale ho?
Vivek: aaj hamare saath DR.salukhe bhi ACP sir ke ghar chaleinge.
FRedy: lekin kaise..
Vivek: ACP sir mein aapake saaath aunga..lekin ye garmi ke vajah se meri tabyet thodi down hein..agar aapko koi aitraaz na ho to hamare saath DR.Salunkhe aayege to achha hoga.
kyoko raat ko muze bohot taklif hoti hein..
Dr.Salukhe..thik hein vaise bhi ghar mein akela baithakar bore hota hun aaj sab hum eak saath rahenge bahut saare gaape marege...
 
ACP:(Ungali hilate huve): Ha ha salunkhe...mein tumhare liye khas Bhendi ki sabji banaunga..
Dr.salunkhe:Plz ACP siheb ..vo oil free sabji  ke baare mein to nahi aap kah rahein hein?
ACP: Shockedtumhe kaise pata...
Dr.Salunkhe: eak baar test kar chuka hunDead muze maranna nahi hein..
Sachin:Sir aaj mein aap sabke liye khaana apane haato se banaunga..aap mere hao se khana khayiye...ungali chatte rahenge  rahenge apani
vivek aur fredy: esake hatho ka khana?Confused Wacko mar gayeDead
DR: Salunkhe: Ha ha kyo nahi..muze yakin hein tum ACP se bahut Achha banate honge..
ACP(to salunkheAngry)..dekhate hein
Sacin: Sir..mein aaj muze jaldi chhod dijiye...5 baje..mein aapake ghar jaata hun aur aap ke liye gar lajjij khana banata hun
ACP:Unhappy..thik hein ye lo mere ghar ki chabi..ab hi chale jao..abhi shyam ke 5 bajane aaye hein..hum ghar mein raat 8 baje tak aayenge..
Sachine: ji sir
(Sachin chala jaata hein aur Dr.salunkheBig smile lekin ACPUnhappyVivekStern Smile aur FredyDisapprove{thinking}God..kya hoga hamara aaj raat ko?)
At ACP home
(ACP,Salukhe,vivek aur fredy exact 8 baje aate hein..door bail bajate hein)..sachin door kholata hein..usake chehare pe aata..kapde par haldi..masale ke daag pade huve hein)
ACP: (Ungaliya hilate huve) Sachin...ye kya haal huva hein tumhara?
Sachin: Kuch nahi sir..khana bana raha tha...aapaka khana tayar hein..aap sab fresh hokar aaiye mein aap sab ko sachin special khana parosata hun..
(ACP,vivek,fredy aur dr.salunkhe fresh hone ke liye jaate hein..lekin dr.salunkhe ko kuch jalneki boo aati hein)
dr Salunkhe: ACP aap koi jalneki boo aa rahi hen kya?
ACP: ha salunkhe..muze bhi aa rahi hein
Fredy aur vivek: ha sir..hame bhi aa rahi hein..chalo jakar dekhate hein
( tabhi sachin aata hein..)
Sachin: sir Khana redy hein...aap sab chaliye
ACP: Sachin, ye kaisi  baas aa ahi hein?
Sachin: wo Sir..achhi hein na..mein ne apake liye special biryani banayi hein..usame smoke effect dete hein koyale se ..ye usaki baas hein..Achhi hein na sirBig smile
ALL:ha ha..Stern SmileConfusedStern SmileErmm
ACP: Pahele muze pani pina hein( wo kichan mein jaate hein..wa  dekhat ehein ki sab chije yaha vaha giri hein..sab mess hein..) Sachin ayha aajaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooAngry
(Sab daud ke vha aate hein)
Sachin:kya huva sir?
ACP: Ye tume mere kichan ka kya haal kiya hein?
Sachin: Sir ..vo khana banate huv ehuva..
ACP: mein tumhe..(rukate hein)..Angry..chalo abhi khana khaye?
Sachin: ha..ha..Chaliye sir
DR.Salunkhe,vivek aurFredy:UnhappyStern SmileWacko
( Sab khana khane jaate hein..lekin dekhate hein roti jali huvi hein..biryani spicy hein...sabji mein namki nahi)
Dr.salunkhe: sachin..tum humko yesa khana khilwayega...esase achhi to ACP ki oillfree bhendi hein
FRedy aur vivek: ACP sir aaj kya hum bhuke rahenge?
ACP: Nahi nahi..hum hotel se khana mangawate hein.Sachine..hotel se khana order karo.
Sachin: ji sir..meri bahut jaga achhi pahechan hein sir..aap aapane aisa khana nahi kahaya hoga kabhi..
(Sachin hotel se khana order karata hein..khana aate aate 2 hours lagate hein
..door bail bajati hein..ACP door kholate hein)
Delilivery Boy:ACP PRadhyuman..mein *** hotel se aaya hun..apane khana order  kiya tha..ye lijiye aapaka kana aur ye  aapaka bill
(ACP parcel lete hein...aur bill dekhate hein..aurAngry  Rs:5400 ka bill?..bill pay karate hein..delivery boy jaata hein aur usake baad)
ACP: Sachin etana bill kaise aya..tune kaha se magvaya tha  ye khana?
Sachin:**** hotel se. Mumbai mein naya khola hei ye 5 star hotel
ACP:kya?D'oh
(sab khana khate hein..aur gappe lagate hein..Sachine yesi yesi baate karata hein ki sab bore hote hein..raat ke 12 baje..sachin achank dar jaata hein)
Sachin: ACP sir muze lagata hein ki es ghar mein koi gun leke muze maran eke liye ghusa hein?
ACP: fikar mat karo..hum sab hein na..sab pura ghar check karo achhi tarh se.
All: yes sir.,,
(sab ghar achhi tarah se check karate hein ..lekin kaun bhi nahi hota vaha..)
Dr.salukhe: lagata hein sachin ye tumhara vehem tha
Sachin: nahi sir..vishwas kariye yaha koi to tha?
Fredy: sir esaki baato pe yakin mat ki jiye..kal daya aur abhi sir ko bhi aise hi raat bhar sataya..
Vivek: muze lagata hein ki raat bhar hame yah jakar pehera dena chaiye..
ACP: ha...lekin aisi hi bai the rahenge..
Sachin: sir hum na Antakshari khelte hein..humara time pass bhi ho jayega aur mera dar bhi
ACP: thi hein
(sab antakshari khelne baithate hein
Sachin pahele gaane lagata hein..usaka gana sunkar sab ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused..ha fredy sir aapake upar Ka aaya hein aap ka se gaayiye..fredy gana shuru karata hein..lekin sachin use bich mese kaata te huve gane lagata hein...yesa vo ar kisi ke saath karta hein..puri raata yahi sinsila chalata rahate hein...subah hoti hein)
Fredy:(chupakese vivek ke kaan mein): vivek ese sab ke bich taang adaneki aadat hen lagata hein..kal raat dekah..hum jabhi koi gaate the..tab ye gaana shuru kar leta tha..hame gane hi nahi deta..mere puri raat bekar gai esaki vajah se..
Vivek: ha sir mein  suna hein..ye hamesha Daya sir   ke piche saye ke tarah pada hein...esake vajah se Abhi sir aur Daya sir ke bich mein diwar aagai hein..ye dekhakar IF  CIDNs bahut  naraj hein..aur esako dhund rahein hein
Fredy: barabar hein..aisi namune ko hum hi nahi zel sakate to lag kaise zelenge?..esaki to transfer honi chahiye
Vivek: ha sir
(dusari tarf salunkhe aur ACP baat kar rahein hein)
ACP:Kya huva salunkhe? eatane ghusse mein kyo ho?
dr.salunkhe: ACP sahab..ye dekhiye mere baal zad rahein hein ..ab mein nahi sehe sakata ...agar mere baal ko kcu huva na to meinAngry
ACP: are ghussa mat karo..mein Sachin ka kuch karata hun..(ACP bahut saare phone kaarte hein..)
salunkhe desh ke kisi bhi kone ki CID sachin ki lene ke liye tayar nahi...sab bolate hein sachin se hame bachaoShocked
(sachin ke tarf jakar) sachin..aaj se tum under ground ho jao..kal ke anubhav se hame pata chala ke log tumhare piche haat dhoke kyo pade hein...plz jalldi jao
Sachin chala jaata hein
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by jiya1 - 03 June 2010 at 10:01pm

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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
I think they are really loosing a bit of charm. it's becoming monotonous. They should bring about some alterations in their dialogues. for e.g. dialogues like " Daya kuch toh garbar hai ", " tumhe fasi hogi fasi ", " mumbai mein jitni bhi dokan hai sab main ja kar check karo " are being used by ACP in all the episodes. There should be some modifications. For the last 12 years we are hearing the same dialogues.....Initially Fredrix was a very serious officer...but now a days in order to bring some life to his character they have tried to make him a bit comical but it has actually become too much. It seems that he is over-reacting to every thing. Also just 5 minutes before the show ends they reach the climax and in every episode one of the officer slaps the culprit and he tells everything fluently...that should be changed....

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@KHUKU2010- u r quite right but still this show ROCKS Smile
@all- carry on guys.... Im just enjoying ur scripts LOL

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