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Posted: 12 July 2010 at 8:35am | IP Logged
You write really well! amazing piece!

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Posted: 01 October 2010 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Lol! That was cute =) 

I did think that the characters were something less than your usual. In a way, that the background details were sort of listed, not, connection binding enough...? I don't know if that explains what I missed. 

But the story as such had to leave a smile. =) 

The serenading came out so fresh, and aww-inspiring, despite being an age old cliche - and that is something! 

[S.L.]

ps: Kiran and Kiran set me off to your posts to look up other stuff you've posted. It will remain among my favorites for a long time. =) 

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Posted: 11 October 2010 at 10:39am | IP Logged
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Thanks a ton for checking it out, and I'm really glad that you liked it. :)

@scarlett.lady:
Thanks! :) I know it was not exactly up to the par - I want to edit it but I'm simply too lazy :P
Serenading, inspite of being a really cliche cliche, is incredibly, cute in my opinion. I'm really honoured that you liked K&K btw :)

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Posted: 12 October 2010 at 12:58am | IP Logged
loved this one too..u hav a knack of crafting cute romance..gud work, pooja..

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