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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 10:00am | IP Logged

Wow!  I loved ever moment of their encounter. Smile I thought it was so cute they way she was trapped between him and his bike. Embarrassed I love the way you write; makes me feel like I'm there watching it.  Big smile

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that was sweet update with cute kriya scene .their first meeting was very good. can't wait for read more.plz update soon.and plz make ur update a bit longer if u can.

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Guys I Have The Index On The First Page Embarrassed
And I Have Done Chapter 3, Just Going To Either Extend It Or Just Post ItLOL I Dont Know Which One To Do.

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post chapter 3 plz then u can write a looooooong chapter 4  Wink xxxx

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Originally posted by Mariam...x

post chapter 3 plz then u can write a looooooong chapter 4  Wink xxxx
 
LOLOki!  Chapter 3 Coming UpWink

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Heyy Guyz!! Thank You Soooooooo Much For Commenting And I Appreciate All Your CommentsBig smile
Okay Here's Chapter 3. I Tried Making It As Long As Possible But Because Of My HUGE Fonts It Turned Out To Be Quite Short ...AgainAngry
Okay Enough Of Me LOL
 
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Chapter Three

"Kya Baat Hai Bhaiya!" Said Chandu.

Krishna was smiling and still looking at her while she was running away. He was not listening to whatever chandu was saying.

"Mann Hi Mann Muskara Rahe Hain Bhaiya" said tunna, jokingly.

Krishna was feeling shy now and kept ignoring whatever they were saying.

"Abh toh milna hi parega" he said, to himself again.

Pratigya was running as fast as she could and finally stopped in front of the college gate, gasping for breath. Finally she stopped breathing heavily and looked around to see if Krishna was there or not. To her relief, he was not there, she sighed and stepped inside the college gates.

She tried to act normal but she just could not. All she was thinking about now was her meeting with Krishna Singh. Again she was so lost in her thoughts that she did not realise where she was going. Suddenly she crashed with someone and went flying back. She nearly fell but managed to get a hold of herself. Now she was fuming with anger, and without looking who she collided with, started venting her anger at the "stranger".

"WOW GREAT! pehle se hi mera mood itna kharaab hai aur aap hain ki" she said .

"I'm sorry" he replied

"Sorry Se Kaam nahi chale ga!!" she said

"Kaha na sorry, Pratigya Ji". He said

Pratigya had calmed down now and took a second look at the stranger.

"Oh No!" she thought. It can't be him! Oh please not him! She continued.

The "stranger" was no more a stranger. It was Krishna!! Oh My Goddd!! how can that be possible?!! She could not believe it was him again.

"Just incase you're thinking what am i doing here, i came here looking for you" he winked.

(Guys Ive got no idea where my fanfic is going!)

She didn't know what to say now.

K: Heyy tumne kya koi bhoot dekh liya?

P: Haan kuch aisa hi samajh lo" she murmured

K: Did you say something?

P: Oh, No Not at all.

K: Cool! okay mujhe aapse baat karni hai, kya aap uss cafe(pointing to the nearest cafe outside the college) haan woh wala. Kya aap uss cafe par aa sakti hain shyam ko pleaseeee. He Finished with such a cutee smile.

Pratigya stood there like a statue for few moments. What was he on about?! And how can she go with him? She doesn't even know him.

P: What?!

K: I Said, kya aap mere saath uss cafe main aa sakti hain shyam ko?

P: Aap yeh sab kyun kar rahe hain? main aap ko jaanti tak nahi

K: Hi my name is Krishna Singh our main aapse milna chahata hoon

She was stunned at his sudden change . I Mean, what does he want?!

Krishna However, felt like he was on the nineth cloud! Finally she will get to know his true feelings and then accept him.

"I Dont know...i think you're mistaken" she said

"What? mistaken for what?" he replied

"Anyways yeah i will meet you outside the cafe at 5pm today" he continued.

"Lekin-"she couldn't finish. Krishna had left without waiting for her reply.

"Abh main kya karon?" she asked herself. She was really confused now, what should she do now?

She was sitting in her class, but could not concentrate properly. All she was thinking about was Krishna and his stupidity. I mean what on earth was he thinking about?

"Na jaan na pehchaan chale aye milne huh!" she whispered.

"What did you say?" whispered rozie.

Rozie is pratigya's best friend. (By the way i choose rozie since my friend rozeena aka rozie(SweetRoziie) tells me that i look like pratigya Rofll!! Let me make a confession i do not look like pratigya aka pooja gor. Since she calls me pratigya's look alike, i'll have her as pratigya's friend lol)



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1st 2 read lol....awwwww thank u  Big smile liked da update...i wonda wots gna happen at da cafe????? xxxx

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