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Aww sadia that was lovely! I'm anxious to read more and congratulations on your intro and first chapter. I knew it would be fabulous.
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"I-i'm s-sorr-ry," was all she could say.
"I said, sorry se kaam nahi chale ga" he replied.
She didn't know what to say now. Was he going to slap her or what?. Her mind was filled with many questions but only krishna could answer them.
Pratigya: I didn't know where i was going i'm sorry, she said, Scared what might he do next.
He came towards her, deeply staring at her right in her eyes, she was so scared that she would cry any moment now. He Stepped towards her and she stepped back until she hit something that somewhat felt like the shape of a bike. Yes, it was a bike, of krishna's. Now She was trapped between him and his bike.
Should she go left or right? First she tried to go past him from the left handside, but he stopped her by putting his hand infront of her. Then she tried to go from the right, again he put his hand infront of her.
"Yeh kya left right left khel rahi ho?" he asked.
Pratigya didn't know what to say so she kept quiet.
"Yes, where was i?" he said while remembring what he said to her before she did her left right left thing.
"Ah yes! hmm..sorry se kaam nahi chale ga" he repeated.
Finally she managed to say something.
"Well..kya chaahte hain aap?" she asked
"Tumhe" he replied.
"Ji?" she asked again.
"Oh..Urmm..mujhe tumhaara..mera matlab aapka naam jaana hai" he replied ever so innocently
At first she got shocked, but then she thought, "it's alright if i tell him my name, or else he won't let me go!!"
"Aap ne kuch kaha?" he asked
" Huh? nahi nahi woh main....mera naam Pra...."she said struggling to even say her name as he was staring at her all that time.
"Pra? nahi mujhe aapka nickname nahi chaahiye, aapka full name chaahiye" he said.
"Pratigya Naam Hai Mera, Pratigya Saxena!" she replied and ran from there as fast as she could and did not look back.
"Pratigya" he whispered to himself.
"Abh toh milna parega , phirse" he continued and started smiling to himself.
Meanwhile, someone else was smiling too while looking at krishna. It was tunna and chandu, actually both were there when all of this happend and could not believe what had just happend.
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Phew!!!Atlast you updated.I am happy that nothing happened and that she managed to run away from there.looking forward to the next chp.Pls update soon and if you can,pls make your next update more longer
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@Shruthi- Thank You Soooooo Much For Commenting And I Will Try To Make My Updates Longer
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