Twisted Love_KriYa_ UpDaTeD Part 35_Page 89 (Page 6)

serialmaniac IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 8:06am | IP Logged
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Guys I Wanted To Write More But My Silly Sister Was Here Looking At Everything I Was Doing So I Just Had To Post Whatever I Had Written
I understand...........i myself have a peeping tom brother.............nosey parker.....peeping everywhereLOL

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halaa Senior Member

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
update soon.

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starrysky Senior Member

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 2:49pm | IP Logged

Aww sadia that was lovely!  I'm anxious to read more and congratulations on your intro and first chapter.  I knew it would be fabulous. WinkLOL

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Heyy! Thank You Sooooooooooooooo Much For Commenting And I Appreciate Your CommentsBig smile
Here's The Next Chapter Hope You Like ItEmbarrassed

Chapter Two

"I-i'm s-sorr-ry," was all she could say.

"I said, sorry se kaam nahi chale ga" he replied.

She didn't know what to say now. Was he going to slap her or what?. Her mind was filled with many questions but only krishna could answer them.

Pratigya: I didn't know where i was going i'm sorry, she said, Scared what might he do next.

He came towards her, deeply staring at her right in her eyes, she was so scared that she would cry any moment now. He Stepped towards her and she stepped back until she hit something that somewhat felt like the shape of a bike. Yes, it was a bike, of krishna's. Now She was trapped between him and his bike.

Should she go left or right? First she tried to go past him from the left handside, but he stopped her by putting his hand infront of her. Then she tried to go from the right, again he put his hand infront of her.

"Yeh kya left right left khel rahi ho?" he asked.

Pratigya didn't know what to say so she kept quiet.

"Yes, where was i?" he said while remembring what he said to her before she did her left right left thing.

"Ah yes! hmm..sorry se kaam nahi chale ga" he repeated.

Finally she managed to say something.

"Well..kya chaahte hain aap?" she asked

"Tumhe" he replied.

"Ji?" she asked again.

"Oh..Urmm..mujhe tumhaara..mera matlab aapka naam jaana hai" he replied ever so innocently

At first she got shocked, but then she thought, "it's alright if i tell him my name, or else he won't let me go!!"

"Aap ne kuch kaha?" he asked

" Huh? nahi nahi woh main....mera naam Pra...."she said struggling to even say her name as he was staring at her all that time.

"Pra? nahi mujhe aapka nickname nahi chaahiye, aapka full name chaahiye" he said.

"Pratigya Naam Hai Mera, Pratigya Saxena!" she replied and ran from there as fast as she could and did not look back.

"Pratigya" he whispered to himself.

"Abh toh milna parega , phirse" he continued and started smiling to himself.

Meanwhile, someone else was smiling too while looking at krishna. It was tunna and chandu, actually both were there when all of this happend and could not believe what had just happend.


This Time I Was Running Out Of Time So I Had To Post Whatever I Had WrittenLOLEmbarrassed

Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 03 July 2010 at 2:10pm

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shruthiR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 7:38am | IP Logged

Phew!!!Atlast you updatedBig smile.I am happy that nothing happened and that she managed to run away from there.looking forward to the next chp.Pls update soon and if you can,pls make your next update more longerSmile

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Oh my days;) This is soooo good! :O
Keep it up! I'm really eagar too read your next chapter!:O

About the chapter: Omg yayyyy! Nothing happend to Pratigya
Awhhhhhh that was soo cute " when krishna starts smiling"
This is abit liike the story whats happening in Pratigya remember
when he did the same.. when he found out her name! But it is different
and goood!

But it is reallly nice! Congrats on your 2nd chapter!:D

P.s Agree with Shruti .. Make your next update, Longer!:P


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..CountingStars IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 9:32am | IP Logged

@Shruthi- Thank You Soooooo Much For Commenting And I Will Try To Make My Updates LongerBig smile

@Rozie- LOLJka! Thank You Sooooo Much For Commenting And Yeah I Will Make It Longer. Lolz Awwwhhhh Yeah I Think I Might Start The Next Chapter Now Lol x

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.YixingsManal. IF-Addictz

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 9:50am | IP Logged
thanks Hug
Loved it yaar
waitin for the nxt part Wink

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