Story-KISSA ULJHE SWALO KA(UPDATED-6th Aug Pg-27) - Page 4

i am waiting for some from u guys as well....kab tak main akela he iss thread ko chlata rahoga 😊 [;)

Wonderful rap. enjoy it reading oopps singing.  I must say You are talented in this area. Keep up.

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

Wonderful rap. enjoy it reading oopps singing. I must say You are talented in this area. Keep up.

thanks bro yar tum bhi kuch likho na 😉 talent bhi tab he pata chlta hain jab u show to the world... 😉 😛

Sorry Bhinder for this late reply.... usually i am the first one to comment on ur creations ( and also the first one to read, obviously!!!!😉).....

I am very bad at rhyming and writing poems. Still I am busy will try hand some other day.  Dimag Ghum jayega mera to bi ek line hi milegi.
Edited by sunnyp1414 - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

I am very bad at rhyming and writing poems. Still I am busy will try hand some other day.  Dimag Ghum jayega mera to bi ek line hi milegi.

same here !!!!!😆😆 mere dimaag mein ek line bhi nahi aati!!!

Originally posted by: Shagnika

Sorry Bhinder for this late reply.... usually i am the first one to comment on ur creations ( and also the first one to read, obviously!!!!😉).....

I must say u r really talented yaar! I told u b4 also.... Keep it up !!!👏👏

Btw, jo kaam diya tha did u manage anything???😉😆😛

kaun sa kaam 😕 voh story climax vala?? 😕

Originally posted by: Shagnika

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same here !!!!!😆😆mere dimaag mein ek line bhi nahi aati!!!

areey nahi yar jab try kroge sab honga...just give it a click once will see the results ..nahi hoya ton na sahi kam se kam yeh regret ton nahi rahega that i could be a writer 😛Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj

kaun sa kaam 😕 voh story climax vala?? 😕

nahi re....isi thread se related tha !! Don remember???!!!😲😭

Originally posted by: Shagnika

<div></div>nahi re....isi thread se related tha !! Don remember???!!!😲😭

oh yeah i do remember now..voh ton nahi hoya but i have done a another one jiski shayd hume jaroorat thi 😉Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 13 years ago