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Posted: 27 May 2010 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
WOW....Clapreally GOOD job dear!!!ClapClap AWESOME...I mean loved it....Clap
 
1st one was WONDERFUL..very true....u described him really well!!!ClapSUPERB!
2nd one was a bit too long(obviously, cos its a story)..one needs patienece to read..but was worth reading! Good job i must say..Clap
 
Overall, Mind Blowing!!!Star
Keep up the good work BOY!!!Clap
Looking forward to many more creations from you...Big smile


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great work...................
thnks for 1 of the best posts in cid forum....ApproveThumbs Up

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Very good creations loved both. I cannot write poem like this. I cannot write one line in rhyme like this and you wrote whole story.  So I must say you did wonderful job. Keep up good work.

In first one description of Freddy was great. and second one (story) as said by Sagnika who need to have patience to read but was excellent enjoyed reading it.

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GR8 work yaar,i must say u are quite good at this both were good 1st one sweet and cute,2nd one awesome keep it up Thumbs Up

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thanks a lot guys.....really appreciate your efforts to read and comment.... Smile Tongue Wink
i know it could be better but as i am really busy in study and work so i could took just 15minutes for freddy part and 2 hours for story one continuously....i promise next time i will give better stuff Smile Wink Tongue

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