NEW FF-Tu hi re.MahaUpdt-Nakus rishta!Epi-15,Pg-51

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey people...!!I have come up with my own Fan Fiction TU HI RE....for Tasha...M totally in love with these two..please do read it and comment..your encouragement and comments are precious for me as this is my first ever FanFic...Thanku!!!and looking forward to a great interaction!!Please hit the like button if u appreciate the post!! 😊 😊 😊

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EPISODE 1----Page 1https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390
EPISODE 2----Page 2 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=2
EPISODE 3----Page 3 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=3
EPISODE 4----Page 5 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=5
EPISODE 5----Page 7 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=7
EPISODE 6----Page 10 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=10
EPISODE 7----Page 16 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=16

EPISODE 8----Page 20 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=20
EPISODE 9----Page 24 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=24
EPISODE 10----Page 30 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=30
EPISODE 11----Page 35 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=35
EPISODE 12----Page 40 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=40
EPISODE 13----Page 43 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=43
EPISODE 14----Page 47https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=47
EPISODE 15----Page 51https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1402390?pn=51

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

EPISODE 1

The initial setting: The leading man of the story,Dutta Shriram Patil is a Don and has many Mumbai centres under his influence like Malad, Borivili,Wadala,Chembur.He visits the slums of these areas once in a week alongwith his most trusted right hand man Bajirao and others.Bajirao is like a younger brother to him.

The leading woman of the story,Nakusha is the beautiful daughter of a housemaid named Babi.Nakusha's simple family consists of a drunkard father Ganpat and a younger brother Sethji.The family had been thrown out of the slums near the Goregaon.The estranged family has now moved into a new slum near Wadala.They are unaware of the fact that the area is under Dutta Shriram Patil.The settle down there.Nakusha is most of the time kept hidden in her house because of her beauty.Its one of those Sundays that Dutta and his men are on the rounds of the slum areas to see that the basic needs and amenities of the poor,dishevelled slum people are being met in a proper manner.Its also the day Nakusha sneaks out from her house with her brother Sethji for a funfilled day in absence of her mother.The drunkard father ganpat is sound asleep and dreaming of riches .I hereby proceed the story in first person:
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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

Scene 1
"Pathar pade tujhko..tera kabhi bhala nahi hoga keh deti hai main,yaad rakhna..,Babi shouts out at Malmal More,the notorious local" police inspector of the goregaon slum locality.He is throwing out Babi and her family out of their home because the slum land they are dwelling on needs to be removed for development of the new project. "Are ja ja!!! Bahut dekhe hai tujh jaise kide makode..kahi aur jakar yeh gandagi failana.Ab chal nikal yahan se aur le ja apne pure parivar ko…Itni sundar beti ka toh haath diya nahi tune..yeh mera badla hi samajh"..
BABI: " Haan ja rahi hai…ja rahi main aur mera pura parivaar…jis jagah tujh jaise rakshas ka saaya ho,waha main apni beti ko nahi rakh sakti..Chal Ganpat,chal naku..sethji ko bhi saath le le…"
Saying so,the family takes up its belongings and starts vacating the place.They ask some people and they suggest that they seek shelter in the slums of Wadala.So they set forth to Wadala…Where a new fate awaits them.

Scene 2
BABI:"Le pahuch gaye apne manzil tak…subah se kuch khaya piya nahi hai tum logon ne…chal abb jaldi se yahan koi acchi si chatt dhund lete hai aur phir se apni duniya basa lete hai…." Ganpat:"Haan chal chal..Aye…Babi dekh kitna rapchik ghar lagta yeh mere ko..chal puchte hai iske bare mien…Aye bhaiya..khali hai kya yeh ghar??" A passerby:"Haan khali hai..tumko lene ka kya??" Babi:"Haan haan…humko yahan abb hamesha ke liye rehne ka…" Passerby:"Toh theek hai ja samaan rakhle..yahan koi nahi rehta…."

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

Scene 3
Nakusha's family set all their belongings in the new home.Nakusha lights up a diya in front of Ganpati Bappa's idol.Babi smiles and looks affectionately at her daughter."Aye Naku…Kai zala??tere ankhon mein aasu..meri pyaari beti ke ankhon mein aasun ache nahi lagte.."Nakusha:"Aayi…janti hai..jab aaj mereko..tereko,hum sabko uss ghar se nikala na..jahan mein badi huyi…mereko itna bura laga…who Morey ji..woh mere se shaadi nahi kar paaye…isi liye humko nikala na..Aayi,mein hi tere har musibat ki jadd hu…"Sayin so,Nakusha starts crying and clings to her mother.Babi wipes of her tears and says,"Are pagli..nahi Naku rote nahi..tu toh meri takat hai…par sunn..yahan hum naye hai..yaha par main nahi chahti ki tu kisi se mile..isliye abb se ghar pe hi rehna.Tu bahar ki duniya ko nahi janti Naku…yeh bahut buri hai.teri sundarta ko dekhkar koi khush nahi hoga.Sab jalenge.Sab bas tujhe haasil karna chahte hai>isliye yaad rakh..jo tere sunar chehre nahi sundar dil se pyaar kare,usi ko apna yeh kimti dil dena..samjhi??" Naku nods her head.Ganpat interrupts :"Chal abb sab so jao..pura din ghum ghum ke jaan nikal gayi."

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

SCENE 4
"Aye Naku main jaati hu kaam dhundne..ghar par hi rehna haan…kahi matt nikalna..Sethji aur apne piyakkad baap ka dhyaan rakhna.." Naku giggles and says:'Rakhegi Aayi..ab tu araam se ja..bilkul chinta matt kar main sab sambhal legi"Babi smiles and leaves.

"Taaaaaaaaayyyiiii!!!"Sethji shouts,"Main ja raha hai bahar khelne..yaha ki basti toh pehle wale se bahut mast hai..khub saari jagah hai khelne maafik.." Naku:"Sunn….jaldi aa jana..main khana bana rahi hai abhi.Dopahar ke khane se pehle wapis aa jaana" Sethji"Haan haan chinta nako karo "Naku smiles and hugs sethji.Sethji runs and leaves the house.Naku starts cooking.

After sometime,Sethji returns back home huffing and puffing:"Taayyiiii!! Chal na bahar chal….dekh kitni sundar basti hai…"Naku:"Nahi sethji..abhi nahi..chal tu khana kahane baith abb chupp chap baad mein challenge.."Sethji:"Nahi taayi chal na abhi..soch sundar sundar khel ka maidaan..thodi duri pe samundar….Chana garam bechte huye log…Yeh baadi baadi imaratein…dekhna nahi chahegi tu taayi chal na..thodi der ka swaal hai"Naku starts imagining and then words of her Aayi comes backs Kahi matt jana and she says:'Par sethji..tu janta na Aayi ne mereko mana kiya bahar jaane ko..phir kyun zidd kar raha hai…aayi ko pata chalega toh kitni dukhi hogi..socha hai.."Sethji:"Arre taayi..tu kitna sochti hai…abb chodd yeh sab aur chal.Ayi ke aane se pehle aa jayenge hum.pakka..bol chalegi??"Naku nods her head,thinks for a while and then says:"Haaan chalungi!!"

Meanwhile,
"Bajiiii…Baji…."shouts Dutta Shriram Patil..the Don."Ayaa Bhau..kya baat hai…batao Bhau…itni chinta mein kyun lag rahe ho??"Dutta stares at Bakji,nods his head in amazement and then says:"Tu bhul gaya…aaj humein Wadala waale jhuggion ke chakkar katne hai…bhul gaya??"Baji scratches his head and says:"Arre haan bhau!!dekho na apun ko yaadich nahi raha!!lagta hai abb main bhuda ho chala hu..hahahaha"Dutta stares at him disbelievingly:"Yeh kyat ha baji"Baji stops laughing at his joke and says:"Joke maara Bhau…kyu accha nahi tha..??"Dutta nods his head and alights his car.."Chal abb bheja matt paka aur Wadala chal.."Baji:"Ji bhau jaisa tum kaho..main toh bas apne sense of humour dekha raha tha.."Dutta:"Baji…chale??"Baji sits near him and says:"chalo bhau!! "

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

PRECAP:Dutta and Nakusha to come face to face for the first time...

Hey ppl!!This was the episode 1....please do read and comment...Episode 2 will be updated shortly...Thanku!!! 😊

Link to the next episode,Episode no:2--->https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=2
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marie

@mariescott14

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey kritika enjoyed the first epi..

cant wait fir tasha to meet...hope you update soon

love,

marie

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mariescott14
hey kritika enjoyed the first epi..
cant wait fir tasha to meet...hope you update soon

love,

marie

Hey marie!! Thanku so much for appreciating my efforts!!!!Will definitely update episode 2 tommorow... 😊

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Kritika Prasad

@kritika4eva

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raziya56
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Aww!!!Thanku soo much Razia!! 😊 😳Edited by kritika4eva - 13 years ago

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SonyaBlade

@SonyaBlade

Goldie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it .... can't wait for the next episode. I never realized people were so talented with creating their own stories on the serials. This was a joy to read.

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