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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 6:04am | IP Logged
fabulous os!!
a very cute and unique story....loved it
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 6:45am | IP Logged
wow that was just awesome.
loved it.
u have written it really well.
keep writing more.

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divya_kaldivya

<font color="#ff00ff">Deepu.. beautifully written.. and i always love fairy tales....</font>

Hey divya di!!
Aww… thanks a lot! Your comment means a lot to me.
Oh! u love fairy tales… wah! There are really few people who believe in fantasies!...
I   DO!!


Originally posted by VampirePrincess

Whoah this was fab!
Beautifully penned! Clap
It was an awesome read for me
Loved Nupur's thoughts!
thnx for the pm:)

luv
ZeeJay!

Thank you so much zeeru! I m glad u liked it…

Originally posted by kirti123

wow lovely os loved reading it

Thank you kriti (ummm… that's ur name …. Right?)… thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by samiralovemayur

owesome OS dear
<div></div>thanks 4 pme

Thank you dearie!!

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arunabehere

Deepika ,

lovely part of ur life

obvious you deserve the credit no one else Clap
awww... thank you di!.... still credit goes to my destiny... its written with interesting phases too Wink

I loved the bits of this OS
thank you so much!
Confusion was too nice

even me was confused at one point
hehehe... that was all intentional to confuse readers first! u know... PLANNED PLOT! Wink

Nupur was such a sweet stupid ( indirectly )
well, in real life, i am as stupid as nupur was shown here. tabhi to itni confussion create hui thi... *sigh*
She was thinking about mayank and listening abt Sam

that was so sweet


I liked penning Micky mouse LOL


I just loved it to the core and the end was fantastic


Please write more and PM me pleaseeeeeeee
ok... will try to write more! or it wud be better if u ask the devils to be sad once again LOL(i don't mean it in seriously... )
yes will surely PM u dear! aap to pehle se hi PM list mein ho Smile

love ya
deepika

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurg2010

it was damn good
and the kiss that mayank gave to his girl was awesome.................
how cute he is.....


Thank you, thank you! Yes I agree! Mayank is the soooo cute *drool*


Originally posted by mayur_bigfan

hey deepika..
thnx fo d pm..
luved it..
really nyc Big smile Clap

Thanks a lot for commenting!

Originally posted by mehramanjeet88

u write vey well dear.....
awesome os
all dis happnd to u!!!!!!wowwww grt
luved it
n tnx for pm

Thanks! Yupp! Most of this happened with me! (plzzz not the kiss part yet!)
Thankyou for commenting!


Originally posted by cute-kanwal

hey...nice os
really enjoyed reading it..i had a huge smile while reading it...aww it was sooo cute.

I m glad that I was able to make u smile!... that was really gr8 compliment!
Thanks dear!


Originally posted by ght_sajan

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved your work

Thank you!

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahaklovesmayur

<font color="#ff0000">yaar yesterday was my coaching's first day and i was nervous as hell! so u r not the only one!

nervousness is my trait for sure!

hey! i too write my name in physics period......i so hate physics and the dreadful looking teacher!

lol......yeh mere saath jab jab hota hai.....main bhi yahi karti hoon.....bhale hi main dekh rahi hoon ya mujhe koi dekh raha ho.....meri nazrein turant neeche jaati hain!

but u liked samrat? i think u misterpreted mayank as samrat....

u r so like me.....if i dislike someone saying anything abt anyone....i mutter only in my mind.......but my goody goody nature doesn't let's me speak up.....ugh! i so wish that i can speak up like others!

but thank God i never liked any boy.....i don't actually believe in this.....i believe in arrange marriage.....and i have swared that my husband wud be the only one and the first one in my life.....

oh man! u must be so embarrassed that ur mother saw that ur frd is like this!

haaye re! ek baar i mistook someone for someone else and said something which i had to say to someone else but i told it to him....it was damn embarrassing!

yaar its so realistic!

he kissed? then she said aloud and he again confessed?

this was a brilliant oneshot!

loved it too much!

do write more and more of this sort......and i am in ur pm list only!

love,
Mahak


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Firstly I m so glad that u commented!

Oh! so you too living the life of boring coaching classes… poor you… na actually… studies ko chod ke everything is worth living Wink

Me too… I HATE physics! But my teacher was soooo cute. Hehehe. Maybe that's why I never missed a class!

Yupp… I misinterpreted mayank to be samrat! I never liked samrat but whole cofussion was because of my idiot friend u thought I was eyeing her boyfriend when I was drooling over his friend! (oops… di I revealed more then necessary?... sorry)

Personally I believe in arrange marriages very much but there's no harm having crush… just don't get in relationships…! I too will save myself for the one with whom I'll tie the knot Embarrassed

Actually that scene was cooked up! In real it was me alone who saw them coo-chi-cooing… it was just to add a bit!

Yupp… u'll always be in my PM list di!
Love you too
deepika

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shafoo

tht was soooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeee

Thank you soooo much!

Originally posted by rkmnsg

hey amazing OS
just loved it to the core!!

do write many more na
-Lina-

Hey! Lina!
Thanks buddy!
Thank you so much!
Oh ok! I'll try!


Originally posted by mina_18secret

Fabulous OS!!!

Loved it alot!!!


Tumhari life to amazing hai...


Love


Mina


Ahh… my life isn't that amazing!
Love
Deepika



Originally posted by prachi_mjht

Awesome dear

Thanks a lot!

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Posted: 26 May 2010 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rads14

awesome os..!!!
loved it..Smile

hey thanks a lot…


Originally posted by -Nabeeha-

awesome OS

thnx 4 the pm!!!

do write more!!!

hey nabeeha
thanks a lot…



Originally posted by sonali..

wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow

that was amazing!!

i m still not out of this stance of kiss Embarrassed    Embarrassed

Clap    Clap     Clap    Clap    Clap    Clap    Clap    Clap    Clap    Clap    Clap

i just loved it to the core

this was so realistic, so believable, so romantic.....

pure love in silence

its your life's part!! Shocked   of course without the kiss!!

we won't mind if the kiss was too a part of it!! hahahaha...

do write more..

with love till the end

sonali

hey sonali!
Firstly tha you for such a long wow!
Awww… that was sweetest compliment.
Hehehe… I wud mind if kiss was a part too!
I'll try…
thanks a lot…



Originally posted by nupur_sarkar

wooooooooooooowww...............simply superbbb............just luved it...by god....

hey Nupur!
Tum to Nupur ki tarah BY GOD bhi bolti ho LOL
thanks a lot…



Originally posted by fariaa70

Hi dear
awesome OS
it was really very nice
loved it
do write more
take care

hey faria!
thanks a lot lot…!
I'll try to write moreSmile
U too take care
Love
deepika



Originally posted by samratrocks

luved it to da core.. awesoeme fab part yaar.. do cont

hey thanks a lot… ummm… it wasn't a fff/ss… I have no continuation of this… sorry!

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