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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurg2010
it was damn good
and the kiss that mayank gave to his girl was awesome.................
how cute he is.....

Thank you, thank you! Yes I agree! Mayank is the soooo cute *drool*

Originally posted by: mayur_bigfan
hey deepika..
thnx fo d pm..
luved it..
really nyc 😃 👏

Thanks a lot for commenting!

Originally posted by: mehramanjeet88
u write vey well dear.....
awesome os
all dis happnd to u!!!!!!wowwww grt
luved it
n tnx for pm

Thanks! Yupp! Most of this happened with me! (plzzz not the kiss part yet!)
Thankyou for commenting!

Originally posted by: cute-kanwal
hey...nice os
really enjoyed reading it..i had a huge smile while reading it...aww it was sooo cute.

I m glad that I was able to make u smile!... that was really gr8 compliment!
Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: ght_sajan
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved your work

Thank you!

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
<font color="#ff0000">yaar yesterday was my coaching's first day and i was nervous as hell! so u r not the only one!

nervousness is my trait for sure!

hey! i too write my name in physics period......i so hate physics and the dreadful looking teacher!

lol......yeh mere saath jab jab hota hai.....main bhi yahi karti hoon.....bhale hi main dekh rahi hoon ya mujhe koi dekh raha ho.....meri nazrein turant neeche jaati hain!

but u liked samrat? i think u misterpreted mayank as samrat....

u r so like me.....if i dislike someone saying anything abt anyone....i mutter only in my mind.......but my goody goody nature doesn't let's me speak up.....ugh! i so wish that i can speak up like others!

but thank God i never liked any boy.....i don't actually believe in this.....i believe in arrange marriage.....and i have swared that my husband wud be the only one and the first one in my life.....

oh man! u must be so embarrassed that ur mother saw that ur frd is like this!

haaye re! ek baar i mistook someone for someone else and said something which i had to say to someone else but i told it to him....it was damn embarrassing!

yaar its so realistic!

he kissed? then she said aloud and he again confessed?

this was a brilliant oneshot!

loved it too much!

do write more and more of this sort......and i am in ur pm list only!

love,
Mahak

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Firstly I m so glad that u commented!

Oh! so you too living the life of boring coaching classes… poor you… na actually… studies ko chod ke everything is worth living 😉

Me too… I HATE physics! But my teacher was soooo cute. Hehehe. Maybe that's why I never missed a class!

Yupp… I misinterpreted mayank to be samrat! I never liked samrat but whole cofussion was because of my idiot friend u thought I was eyeing her boyfriend when I was drooling over his friend! (oops… di I revealed more then necessary?... sorry)

Personally I believe in arrange marriages very much but there's no harm having crush… just don't get in relationships…! I too will save myself for the one with whom I'll tie the knot 😳

Actually that scene was cooked up! In real it was me alone who saw them coo-chi-cooing… it was just to add a bit!

Yupp… u'll always be in my PM list di!
Love you too
deepika

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was soooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeee

Thank you soooo much!

Originally posted by: rkmnsg
hey amazing OS
just loved it to the core!!

do write many more na
-Lina-

Hey! Lina!
Thanks buddy!
Thank you so much!
Oh ok! I'll try!

Originally posted by: mina_18secret
Fabulous OS!!!

Loved it alot!!!

Tumhari life to amazing hai...

Love

Mina

Ahh… my life isn't that amazing!
Love
Deepika

Originally posted by: prachi_mjht
Awesome dear

Thanks a lot!

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rads14
awesome os..!!!
loved it..😊

hey thanks a lot…

Originally posted by: -Nabeeha-
awesome OS

thnx 4 the pm!!!

do write more!!!

hey nabeeha
thanks a lot…

Originally posted by: sonali..
wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow

that was amazing!!

i m still not out of this stance of kiss 😳    😳

👏    👏     👏    👏    👏    👏    👏    👏    👏    👏    👏

i just loved it to the core

this was so realistic, so believable, so romantic.....

pure love in silence

its your life's part!! 😲   of course without the kiss!!

we won't mind if the kiss was too a part of it!! hahahaha...

do write more..

with love till the end

sonali

hey sonali!
Firstly tha you for such a long wow!
Awww… that was sweetest compliment.
Hehehe… I wud mind if kiss was a part too!
I'll try…
thanks a lot…

Originally posted by: nupur_sarkar
wooooooooooooowww...............simply superbbb............just luved it...by god....

hey Nupur!
Tum to Nupur ki tarah BY GOD bhi bolti ho 😆
thanks a lot…

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi dear
awesome OS
it was really very nice
loved it
do write more
take care

hey faria!
thanks a lot lot…!
I'll try to write more😊
U too take care
Love
deepika

Originally posted by: samratrocks
luved it to da core.. awesoeme fab part yaar.. do cont

hey thanks a lot… ummm… it wasn't a fff/ss… I have no continuation of this… sorry!

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ak12
Hey all..

My mood did lighten up..

thanks so much for the care..

love you people..

Akansha

I m glad that u r fine now!
Devils have the ability to drive me crazy…. And break my promises too*melodrama continues*
Love you akku!
D

Originally posted by: ak12
Uh.. i forgot to mention..

@sam and deepika..

I LOVE physics....

really.. Physics is the only subject i loved with passion..

i didn't know why..

just had to mention..

And and.. D.. my phy prof was really young and handsome..😉

I never ever loved physics! I have always loved bio! But but but… pata nahi kahan se is non medical ke chakkar mein fass gayi *haaye re kismet*
Uhh… my professor too was so damn hot!! 😳 (oops… maybe I shudn't have said hot!... umm… okay guys, he was cute!)

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aishluvsmayur
Adorable story girl...!! You really should write more....
Awesome
Mindblowing
Superb!!!!

Aishwarya... Call me Aish or Aishu!

hey aish
thanks a lot! Those adjectives are too much to take in one go!
I'll come back to u 😉
Love
Deepika