Originally posted by: MagicalMaYur
Dear, I just cannot tell you how much it means for you to provide such constructive criticism! I am SOO happy to hear your honesty about the effects!😆😆 I admit, I did go over board with it and I will keep this in mind with my future VMs. Do expand on which one of the effects distracted you the most as I do not want to end up making the same mistake twice :)
Thanks alot though! U are probably one of my most honest viewers 😳 which is my FAV! Nd btw, I use Sony Vegas Pro 9.
~Puja~
Aww thank you so much for taking it well, and honesty is best policy right 😊
i wasnt sure to tell u, incase u got upset, since i dont know u, but u have a greattt attitude! keep it up!
well i will watch your vm again, and comment on which ones, but i think it was when the scenes were roughly on top of each other. Actually its hard to explain, so i will give timings of when i see some distracting effects, hope that is helpful 😊
Wow thats a pro software, did u get it for some project or something...
btw im a media student, i watch a lot of Vm's and am interested in these things in general 😊
Ill get back to you about the effects Puja,
effects paticularly obvious at:
2.26 = when you use this, the edges are too obvious, it doesn't look right, Also note, when the scenes flash more brightly with the rhythm (which btw i like this effect), these spaces, look a bit like blobs, lol, sorry, the shapes are obvious in them. But i think in some places you've used this effect, its fine, because the edges of the layers blend into each other. Or in the beginning when its symmetrical its also cool, its fine.
framing = you've used 2 kinds, a 3d effect one, and one which has black edges faded, personally i like the faded into black one. It's not a huge factor, but i think you should use one or the other (faded black one, is much better :))
3.24-3.42 = u've desaturated the colours in the scenes i guess, personally i prefer the colours at a natural level, or more vivid. But actually i dont mind this effect that much :)
4.18 = that fading away transition is ok, but a tiny bit distracting
5.35 = the three blocks, are kind of unnatural effects.. bit distracting
5.36 = the water effect i wasn't too sure about, but u know, its cool, i like it
and all other effects i havnt mentioned i kinda liked too :),
Actually your vm has a lotttt of variation of effects, which is good, but can also be distracting, as i feel like going oooh thats a cool effect, sometimes nt looking at Mayur or Sajan 😆
hey and as ive watched ur Vm again, ill tell you again, i loveeddd it!, the scenes youve chosen, at the right moment, and rhythm, it was really super, and as i said, ur vm would even rock with effects, which is gr8!
hope i hvnt been a pain, i was only trying to help you , just remember these are my personal opinions
😊
anyway looking forward to seeing more
Btw im Rue 😳
Edited by ruexangel - 13 years ago
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