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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Hiii Akansha,

Awesome update... I loved your style of writing, the way you describe things - the scenes as well as their thoughts - its just amazing...

So, Mayank and Nupur are heading for divorce due to their differences... Oh! Waiting to know how are you gonna reconcile them...

Pls do continue soon...
Thanx for the pm...

- Pooja

P.S. By the way, I really loved Forgive Me - your last ff.. I read its epilogue regularly as i just love Mayur and Arti in it.... You have written very well....

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nice part and thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 4:38am | IP Logged

Akansha ... thank god U r the writer,,,,LOL

Honestly I cant take any more pain for MN ROFL I m so tired and exhausted LOL

ok, coming back to the update, lovely as usual...I do hope to read more and soon :)

 

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 4:47am | IP Logged
awesome part dear..loved it to the core...hope evrything gets fine btw mayur...

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 4:52am | IP Logged
awsome!!!!!!!!1

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 5:55am | IP Logged
good start. loved it. continue soon.

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Nice start

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 6:02am | IP Logged
ress

will read at night dear!
abhi i m going!
cya later
love ya

*edited*
i'll kill u
not bcoz mayur are having divorce and shilpa aunty is having heart attack

because u made me cry again! i'll seriously kill u.... ok no i won't

that was so well written

par problem kya hui
divorce?!?!?! Shocked

ye kya hai? ye kyun hai??

ok, u can bring their wishes come true na.... plz do that asap.... na not asap.. but as the time needs... u know better :)

it was sad... but then life isn't a fairy tale.... i loved it.

awkwardness was well depicted:)

love

*d*

no p.s. this time... sorry...


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