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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

hey priya dear very beautiful story............. loved it..............they simple and very lovely.................thanxxxxx a lot DeepaBig smile
 
but i liked the para u added saying u wont make anything go bad.................lovely story................. actually yeh meri purani aadat hai...main jab bhi kuch likhti hun na...bich me aise NOTES post kar deti hun...!!!LOL

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Revolutionbreez

hi pri!!! Hiiiii ManaBig smile 
 
Wonderful Shot !!! shukriya...Big smile
 
and a very appropriate name !!! Clap Clap Clap Clap thanx...yaar...Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
Bhala ho Gauri ka jisne tumhein kasam di aur tumne yeh shot post kiya....warna...huh..! ha ha ha...task bhi usi ne hi diya tha ki...'letters' k upar fic likh...!!! ab tu hi bata...aaj kal letter koun likhta hai yaar...!!! ajeeb pagal ladki hai vohLOL
 
Gauri...agar aur bhi kuch likha hai inhone and if you know...then plzzzzzz feel free to give her the 'KASAM'....Tongue Hum sab ki bahoooot duayein milegi tumhe !! Wink use toh dua ki jarurat hi nahi hai...bal ki mere dande ki jarurat thi...jo use finally padd chuki hai...Tongue
 
coming to the shot....it was simply superb !! thanxxxxBig smile
 
All the feelings ....friendship, separation, love, pain...everything was described just perfectlyyyy !!! Clap Star Star is ka matlab 'PAPPU paas ho gaya na...???'Tongue thanxxxx yaar...Big smile
 
Aur kya kahu? yaar....really am short of words now... main teri BHAVNAYON ko samajh sakti hun...Big smile
 
haan...par tumhein apne DUSRE skills dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai okay? Mujhe pata hai...tumhein bahot ACHCHI EDITING karna aata hai...but isse tum apne shots par use karke prove mat kiya karo....
welll.... You can use your EDITING skills on your ENDLESS NOTES and USELESS EXCUSES for not updating your fics early....LOL LOL LOL arre ek hi kaam toh achha karti hun main...aur voh hai editing ka...aur tum kah rahi ho ki main use bhul jayun...nahiiiiiiiiiLOL LOL LOL
 
Chal ab aur khichai nahi karti tumhari.... chalo bach gaye...Big smile
 
And..... ab kya...Shocked
 
THANKS FOR THE PM !! Big smile tune kabhi kisi doc ko pura bandage me dekha hai kya...??? agar nahi...toh khud ko dekh lena...agar tune dubara PM k liye THANX kaha toh.....Angry
( 'Feel free to ignore it , if you are not interested'..huh! Yeh uske liye tha...) tu bhi na kya kya sochti rahti hai...!!! par kabhi kabhi sahi bhi sochti hai...LOL
 

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rituka7

great one
update soon

Thanxxxxx a lot Rituka...Big smile

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

Amazingly nice shot Priya.............superb Clap   Clap   Clap   Clap  Clap Thanxxxx a lot SiriBig smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile

ab kyun ki tere do fics khatam hone waale hai.........toh tu aur bhi shots likh sathi hai...........aisa nahi hai ki I don't want you to start on a new fic but still..........sochna jaroor...........Tongue
 vohi soch rahi hun...par pata hai bas negative thoughts hi aa rahe hain...Tongue

this shot is one of the best I have read till now............ sach me tumhe aisa laga...ya phir jhaad me chadha rahi ho...??? par koi baat nahi dost k liye toh jaan bhi hazir hai (hello...yeh jaan wala part seriously mat lena yeh bass aise hi kahte hain toh maine bhi kah diyaLOL) aur main tumhare liye jhaad par nahi chadh sakti...Big smile

and jaise Mana ne kaha hai...........THANX FOR THE PM!!
lagta hai tujhe bhi MANA ki hi company pasand hai...!!! fiqar not tum dono ko ek sath main hospital me admit kar dungi...!!! aur haan dubara PM k liye thanx kaha toh main pakka yeh samjhungi ki tumhe merii fic achhi nahi lagti tabhi tum aisa bol rahe ho...kyoun ki dubara tum ne PM k liye thanx kaha toh main PM hi nahi karungi... for sureAngry

and NO THANX FOR UR NOTE WITH IT !!Angry(agar agli baar aisi galthi hui tujhse toh anjaam bohuth bura hoga...........yaad rakhna........Evil Smile) kuch hints toh do...ki kitna bura ho sakta hai...!!! taki main taiyaar toh rahun...LOL

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by danish1

very very beautiful part.
nice oneClap
Thanxxxxxx a lot Afreen...Big smile

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Puri_2711

awesome Clap brilliant......Clap.............one shot.....very intresting........... thanxxxx a lot Puri...Big smile
 
bich bich mein dara bhi diya tha( by sending raj on border, 9 din mein suman ki shadi.....)............but by reaching the end......made me happy........Big smile....... ha ha ha...main bhi kya karun yaar...yeh meri bachpan ki bimari hai...LOL LOL LOL
really superbClap 
thanxxxx dear...Big smile

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Posted: 11 June 2010 at 11:32am | IP Logged

Pal me hi

Mujh ko mila

Pal naya

Kuch mila

Haan...kuch magar kho gaya....

 
Na jane kya hai dil ka irada

Thoda sa kam hai thoda sa jyada

Kuch na hai baki

Chahega kya dil

Dil ko mili hai

Manzil...

Tere aa jane se...tere aa jane se...tere aa jane se

Hooooooooooo...

 
Pal me hi

Mujh ko mila

Pal naya

Kuch mila

Haan...kuch magar kho gaya...

 
Ek khwab tera ek khawab mera

Ban sa gaya hai ek khwab apna

Hooooooo...ankhon se ankhen

Baton se batain

Rahon se mil gayi....rahain....

Tere aa jane se...tere aa jane se...tere aa jane se

Hoooooo....

 
Pal me hi...

Mujh ko mila

Pal naya

Kuch mila

Haan... kuch magar kho gaya....

 

                      PAL ME HI......Part:-1

 
main us ki un badi badi ankhon ko ek baar phir se dekhna chahta tha...par voh nazar utha hi nahi rahi thi...!!! maine phir se try kiya...
 
:- "hiii...
 
voh abhi bhi chup thi...
 
maine phir se kuch kahne ki koshish ki...
 
:- "mujhe laga tha yahan baht garmi hogi...par yahan par itni garmi hai hi nahi...!!!"
 
voh abhi bhi khamosh thi...
 
meri baichani badhti ja rahi thi...maine last try kiya...
 
"actually main aap se ek baat abhi se clear kar dena chahta hun...kahin aage ja kar aap ko mujhe le kar koi galat-faihmi na ho...!!! meri pahle se do biwiyaan hai...aur 12 bachhe bhi...lekin 12 ladke hi hain...jab ki mujhe toh beti chahiye...
 
us ne chaunk kar meri taraf dekha...
 
mujhe zor se hassi aayi...aur main ruka hi nahi...bass hassta raha...!!! voh sayad samajh gayi thi ki maine mazak kiya tha...us ne phir se nazr jhuka li...par main kamiyab ho gaya tha...us ki un badi ankhon ko dubara dekhne me...
 
us ne phir se nazr jhuka di...
 
maine kuch nahi kaha...bass us ki us saadgi se bhare khubshurti ko niharta raha...

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Rajeev...Rajeev...
 
dadi chilla rahi thi...par Rajeev blanket me sar se pair tak wrap kar k so raha tha...!!!
 
us ki dadi aa kar us k paas baithi aur kaha:- "dekh din chadh aaya hai...ab toh uth ja...!!! tu yahan mujhe dekhne aaya hai ya sone...!!!"
 
blanket k ander se Rajeev ne jhaank kar kaha:- "sone aaya hun dadi...!!! vahan tumhare bete aur bahu ne mere naak me damm kar k rakha hai...!!! har dushre din ek ladki ki tashveer dikhate hain...aur pasand karne ko kahte hain...!!! main agar use dekhne nahi jata toh voh use aur us ki family ko gahr par bula lete hain...!!! aur toh aur...pata nahi koyun par jo bhi hamare ghar aata hai na...voh SAMOSHE hi le kar aata hai...!!! aur kahte hain 'hamari beti ne apne hathon se banayi hai'...ab aap hi batayo dadi...SAMOSHE toh hath se hi banaye jate hain na...pair se thode hi na...!!! par sach kahun toh SAMOSHE ko dekh kar hi mujhe pata chal jata hai ki meri SAMASHYA badhnewali hai...!!!"
 
dadi:- "pata hai...par mere laal...din k 12 bajj rahe hain ab toh uth ja...!!! mujhe thoda mandir jana hai...mujhe le chal...!!!"
 
Rajeev ne apni dadi ko khincha aur bed par bitha kar un ki goad me sar rakh kar khud hi so gaya aur kaha:- "toh phir aap bhi so jayo...!!! 12 bajj rahe hain toh bhagwan ji abhi bz honge...hum kal ja kar unhe disturbed karenge...thik hai...???"
 
dadi jee ne use zor se maarte hue kaha:- "agar tu abhi 5 min me nahi utha na...toh main tujh par thanda paani dal dungi...
 
Rajeev ko laga ki sayad us ki dadi mazak karr rahi hai...!!! par use 5 min intezaar hi karne nahi pade...us se pahle us par ek balti paani daal diya us ki dadi ne...
 
Rajeev chilla kar utha aur kaha:- "dis is not fare dadi...aap ne kaha tha ki aap 5 min k baad dalogi...!!!"
 
dadi:- "ab nahana ho gaya...mandir chale...???"
 
kuch der baad dono mandir gaye...!!! Rajeev kafi chidha hua tha...ek toh dadi ne us par pani daal diya tha...jis ki wajah se use thand lag gayi thi...aur use cheenke aa rahi thi...aur dushra dadi ne 12 baje ka bol kar 7 baje use uthaya tha...
 
mandir ki seedhiyan chadh kar ander gaya...toh dadi jee ne kaha:- "beta ja kar thode se phul aur diye le aa...!!!"
 
voh gaya aur le kar aaya...
 
mandir ki seedhiyaan chadh hi raha tha ki kisi ne us par haldi paani daal diya...us ne gusse se dekha...ek ladki green salwar suit me thi...jo bhaag gayi...!!! Rajeev baht gusse me tha...voh bhi us k piche bhaaga...
 
ander aaya toh dekha...pujari jee khade the...us k dadi k paas hi
 
pujari jee:- "kya hua beta...???"
 
Rajeev:- "voh ladki...kahan hai...jo abhi abhi bhaag kar is taraf aayi hai..!!!"
 
pujari jee:- "koun si ladki...???"
 
Rajeev:- "us ne green colour ka salwar suit pahan rakha tha...???"
 
"is me meri galati nahi hai...!!! pujari chacha ne kaha tha...pure mandir me haldi ka pani daal do...taki sab kuch suddh ho jaye...!!! main toh vohi kar rahi thi...aap hi achnak samne aa gaye...aur maine galati se aap par bhi chidak diya...!!! vaise bhi aap bhi bahr se aaye hain na...toh haldi paani se aap bhi suddh ho gaye hain...!!!"
 
us k dadi k piche se us ne yeh aawz suni...toh us tarf dekha...ek ladki vahaan chupi hui thi...
 
do khubshurat aur badi badi ankhen dekhi us ne...us k dadi k piche khadi voh us ki taraf dekh kar kah rahi thi:- "sorry...
 
pujari jee aur us ki dadi hassne lage aur us k dadi ne kaha bhi:- :sahi toh kah rahi hai bachhi ki tu bhi toh bahr se aaya hai toh tujhe bhi toh suddh hone ki jarurat hai na...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "dadi tum bhi...
 
main jaise us ki un ankhon ka diwana ho gaya tha...!!! kuch toh khaash tha...kuch ajeeb si madhoshi thi us ki un ankhon me...jo baar baar mujhe un me jahaank ne ko mazbur karr raha tha...!!!
 
dushre hi din main us se milana chata tha...par pata chala ki voh apne ghar wapas ja chuki thi...!!! voh bhi apni chuttiyon me yahan pane aunty k ghar par aayi hui thi...
 
par meri baichaini ko dadi ki ankhon ne pakad liya tha...
 
kuch dino baad main bhi ghar wapas chala aaya...!!! mere mom dad mujhe dekh baht khush hue...!!! par mere pair chune se pahle hi voh dono bhaage fone k paas...'ohhh...no...phir se koi SAMASHYA....mere liye someshe le kar aayegi...'
 
par hairani ki baat hai thi ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hua...aur do din k baad Dadi yahan par aa gayi...
 
unhone mere liye koi ladki dekh rkhi thi unhone kaha:- "maine dekha hai us ladki ko...baht khubshurat hai...!!! baht shanshkari hai...aur samoshe bhi achha banati hai...!!!maine toh baat pakki kar li hai...!!! hum sunday ko chalege...vaise Rajeev...maine suna hai tera transfore Delhi me ho gaya hai...???"
 
Rajeev:- "haan...ho gaya hai...
 
dadi:- "phir thik hai...!!! is k jane se pahle in dono ki shaadi karwa lete hain...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "kya dadi...aap bhi...!!! maine us ladki ko dekha nahi abhi tak aur aap meri shaadi fix kar k aa gayi...!!!"
 
dadi:- "hum log sunday ko un k ghar ja rahe hain...nahi jayenge toh bura lagega...kyoun ki maine pahle se hi kah diya hai...!!! par tu fiqar mat kar...hamare lautne se pahle main unhe is rishte k liye mana kar dungi...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "sach...
 
dadi:- "bilkul sach...
 
Rajeev k chale jane k baad dadi mushkurayi aur Rajeev k father se kaha:- "shaadi ki taaiyari kar...!!! jaldi tera beta dulha bann ne wala hai...
 
Rajeev's father:- "par maa....
 
dadi:- "hmm...koi sawal nahi...bass meri baat sun le...!!! shaadi yahin fix hai...!!! ek baar Rajeev ne use dekh liya na...toh baat vohin khatam ho jayegi...
 
sunday ko sab un k ghar gaye...!!! Rajeev k ghar se 70 k.m dur ek chote se saher me tha un ka ghar...
 
jab car ruki un k ghar k gate k paas...toh kuch log vahan aaye unhe recieve karne...!!! Rajeev ko voh log kafi achhe lage...!!! kyoun ki voh log dikhava bilkul bhi nahi karr rahe the...!!! varna aaj tak voh jitni bhi ladkiyon se mila...sabhi ajeeb lage the use...!!! maa-beti dono do jewelery shop ki tarah lagte the use...!!! par yahan par sab kuch baht simple tha...
 
ek chota sa ghar...ghar k aage ek garden...jahan tarah tarah k flowers lage hue the...!!!
 
Rajeev ko sab kuch achha lag raha tha...yahan par...
 
par jab voh ladki ander aayi...toh voh use dekhta hi rah gaya...kuch bol hi nahi paya...kyoun ki yeh vohi mandir wali ladki thi...jis ne us par haldi ka pani phenka tha...!!! pahli baar Rajeev samoshe bhi kha raha tha...aur use achha bhi laga...!!!
 
dadi jee ne pucha us ladki ki maa se:- "samoshe kya aap ki beti ne banaya hai...???"
 
us ki maa ne kaha:- "nahi...maine banaya hai...!!!
 
us ki dadi ne sab ko ishara kiya bahar jane k liye...taki voh dono thik se baat kar saken...
 
sab k jane k baad bhi dadi baithi rahi...
 
Rajeev ne un ki taraf dekha toh unhone dhire se us k kaan me kaha:- "tu is ladki se jyada baat mat karna...!!! vaise bhi humain toh yeh shaadi cancel hi karni hai...!!! hai na...???"
 
voh mushkura kar chali gayi...
 
us din main us se jyada baat karr hi nahi paya...!!! main toh us ki ankhon me uljha raha...!!! aur na hi us ne mujh se kuch pucha...
 
voh sab wapas us hotel me aa gaye jahan par voh thaire hue the...
 
raat bhar Rajeev us ladki k bare me sochta raha...dushre din un k ghar dinner par jana tha...!!! aur subah hi us ladki k father aa gaye unhe saher ghumane le jane k liye...!!! Rajeev ne xpect kiya tha ki sayad voh bhi aayegi...par voh aayi hi nahi...!!! par us ne yeh soch kar tasalli kar li...ki raat ko mulakaat toh hogi hi...
 
RAAT ko un k ghar dinner par jana tha...achanak Rajeev ko kuch yaad aaya...!!! lekin sab k samne us ne kuch bhi nahi kaha...!!! jab ki us k ghar walon ko pata chal hi gaya tha ki use ladki pasand aa gayi hai...
 
phir raat ko un k ghar dinner par gaye...
 
voh bass us ladki se ek baar akele me milna chahta tha...par use mauka hi nahi mil raha tha...
 
dinner k baad sabhi baith kar batain karne lage...
 
Rajeev lawn me ghum raha tha...tabhi us ki nazar padi...chat par jahan us ne phir se us ladki ko dekha...
 
sab se choop kar voh chat par chala gaya...
 
voh akeli khadi ashman me dekh rahi thi...jab ki ashmaan me na toh ek bhi sitara tha aur na hi chaand...!!! phir bhi voh kuch dhundhne ki koshish karr rahi thi...
 
piche se kisi k aane ki aahat se voh chaunk kar turn kiya...
 
Rajeev ko dekh kar sahmi si us ne apne kadam piche kiye...
 
Rajeev kuch pal toh yun hi khada raha...phir kaha...: "mujhe tum se kuch puchna tha...!!!puchun...???"
 
us ne dhire se saar hila haan kaha...
 
Rajeev:- "actually...maine tum se abhi tak tumhara naam nahi pucha tha...isiliye......
 
us ne dhire se kaha:- "SHIPRA...
 
phir voh chali gayi...Rajeev ko kuch aur puchna baki rah gaya...
 
raat ko Rajeev apne dadi k goad me soya hua tha...us ne pucha:- "dadi...SHIPRA ka matlab kya hai...???"
 
dadi:- "yeh ek nadi ka naam hai...!!!"
 
sayad isiliye voh itni khamosh rahti hai..." rajeev ne dil hi dil me kaha
 
Rajeev:- "dadi voh itni khamosh kyoun thi...??? matlab sirf main hi baat karr raha tha...voh toh kuch kah bhi nahi rahi thi...???"
 
dadi:- "Shipra ko main bachpan se janti hun...!!! voh aisi hi hai...!!! shararati hai...par shararat bhi unhi se karti hai...jo us k apne hote hain...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "ya phir aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai na...ki main use pasand hi na hun...???"
 
dadi:- "toh tu us se puch le...!!! agar us ne haan kar di...toh kal shaadi ka date fix kar k hi jayenge...!!!'
 
Rajeev:- "par main us se kaise puchun dadi...???"
 
dadi:- ek baat bata...tujhe Shipra pasand hain ya nahi...???"
 
Rajeev:- "pasand hai...!!!"
 
dadi:- "sirf pasand hai...yaaaaa
 
Rajeev:- "bahhhhhhhhtttttt pasand hai...!!! ab aage ka idea bhi toh do na dadi...!!!"
 
dadi:- "us ka ghar yaad hai...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "haan...kyoun...???"
 
dadi:- "tujhe pata hai us ghar me us ka room koun sa hai...???"
 
Rajeev:- "nahi...
 
dadi:- "us k ghar k diwar k west side k upar jo khidki hai na...!!! vohi us ka room hai...!!!us k room k side par hi toh balcony hai...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "toh...???"
 
dadi:- "samajhdaar ko ishara hi kafi hai...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "dadi...aap mujhe peetwayoge...???"
 
dadi:- "agar Prithviraj ne bhi yahi socha hota toh Sanyogitha kisi ore ki ho jati...!!! tu bata tujhe zindagi bhar kunwara rahna hai ya phir is ladki se shaadi karni hai...???"
 
Rajeev:- "shaadi karni hai...aur voh bhi sirf Shipra se...
 
dadi:- "toh phir ek baat dhyan se sun le meri...pyar karnewale...peette nahi hai...balki sab ki ankhon me dhul jhonk kar...apna kaam hasil karr lete hain...samjha...???"
 
Rajeev:- "haan...
 
dadi:- "kya samjha...???"
 
rajeev:- "city hospital...bed no 12...patient ka naam 'Rajeev'...jo ek Egyptian mummy ki tarah pada hua hai...pure body me plaster lapet kar...!!!"

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voh us k room me khada tha...khidki k paas...voh door k paas khadi thi sar jhukaye...
 
Rajeev:- "sorry ...mujhe is tarah se tumhare room me nahi aana chahiye tha...!!! par jab se hum mile hain...tumhe hamesha khamosh paya...!!! kal mere parents shaadi aur sagai ka date fix karne aanewale hain...!!! isiliye main tum se tumhari rai puchnae aaya tha...!!! main agar tumhe pasand nahi hun toh tum bol sakti ho...!!!"
 
Shipra kuch der khamosh rahi...phir kaha:- "aisi koi baat nahi hai...!!! aur na hi mujhe is shaadi se inkaar hai...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "toh phir tum itna khamosh kyoun rahti ho hamesha...???"
 
Shipra:- "main aisi hi hun......!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "toh tum is shaadi se khush toh ho na...???"
 
Shipra:- "jee...
 
Rajeev ja raha tha...phir pata nahi kya socha...ruka aur turn kar k Shipra k kareeb aaya...Shipra piche ki ore nahi hati ...vohin khadi rahi...jo Rajeev ko yeh ehsaas dila raha tha ki voh us par bharosha karne lagi hai...
 
Rajeev us k kareeb aaya...aur kaha:- "kya main ek baar tumhara hath thaam sakta hun...???"
 
us ne ek pal k liye hairani se Rajeev ko dekha...phir nazrain jhuka li...jis ka matlab 'haan' hi tha...
 
Rajeev mushkuraya...us ka hath thaama...aur wapas chala gaya...!!!
 
Shipra ne apni khidki se jhaanka...toh dekha...voh ja raha tha...

             

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kuch hi dino me shaadi bhi ho gayi dono ki...
 
shaadi k din Rajeev ko bass ek hi baat ka dukh rah gaya...us ne Shipra ka chehra nahi dekha...!!! kyoun ki us ne ek lambi si ghughat oodh rakhi thi... (ab aap sab yeh soch sakte ho ki kahin maine dulhan badal toh nahi di hai na....!!! jaise ki aaj kal sare serials me hote hain...ha ha haLOL LOL LOL)
 
Rajeev bass use dulhan k livaas me ek baar dekhna chata tha...!!! phir us ne socha ki yeh hashrat toh raat ko bhi puri ho sakti hai...
 
raat ko jab voh apne room me pahuncha toh Shipra bed par baithi hui thi...par Rajeev ko dekh kar khadi ho gayi...
 
Rajeev ne kaha:- "main koi tumhar teacher hun jo tum mujhe dekh kar khadi ho gayi...???"
 
Shipra ne kuch nahi kaha...bass nazrain jhukaye khadi rahi...
 
Rajeev us k kareeb aaya aur kaha:- "ek baat kahun...bura toh nahi manogi...
 
Shipra ne sar hila kar mana kiya...
 
Rajeev:- "yaar...tum hamesha yeh 'sign language' me kyoun baat karti ho...??? bhagwan ne tumhe itne khubshurat honth diye hain...un ka ishtemal karo...!!! tumhari adhi baat toh mujhe samajh me hi nahi aati...!!!"
 
Shipra ne phir bhi kuch nahi kaha...
 
Rajeev:- "thik hai...agar tum ne yahi faishla kiya hai ki tum mujh se baat nahi karne wali toh...phir main toh yahi samjhunga na ki main tumhe pasand nahi hun...!!! aur agar yahi sach hai toh phir main yahan par rukun hi kyoun...!!! main chalta hun...!!!"
 
Rajeev ne turn kiya jane k liye toh Shipra ne us ka hath thaam kar roka...
 
Rajeev hairan bhi hua aur khush bhi...!!! us k honthon par ek mushkurahat bhi aayi...us ne turn kar k dekha toh Shipra ne kaha:- "main yeh kapde change kar lun...??? mujhe is me baht garmi lag rahi hai...???"
 
Rajeev:- "ek min ruko...!!!"
 
Rajeev ne us ka hath thaam kar balcony me le gaya...aur us ek jagah ruk ne ko kah kar us se thoda dur ja kar khada hua...aur kaha:- "main bass tumhe ek nazar dulhan k livaas me puri tarah se dekhna chata tha...!!!"
 
Shipra ne nazrain phir jhukayi...Rajeev us k kareeb aaya aur us ka chehra apne hathon se thaamte hue kaha:- "jab bhi main tumhare samne rahun na...tum meri ankhon me dekh kar baat karna...!!! tum sayad nahi janti ki tumhari ankhen kitni khubshurat hain...mujhe pyar hai in ankhon se...!!!"
 
achanak barshaat hone lagi...dono ghar k ander wapis aa gaye...
 
Shipra abhi bhi chup chap khadi thi...
 
Rajeev: "ab ja kar change kar lo...!!!"
 
Shipra jab change kar k wapis aayi...toh dekha...Rajeev apne khidki k paas khada tha...
 
Rajeev ne turn kar k dekha...ek baby pink colour k salwar suit me Shipra khadi thi...
 
Rajeev hairan hua...ki kaise har ek rang Shipra par achha lagta hai...!!! chahe voh kuch bhi pahn le...us me voh khubshurat hi dikhti hai...
 
Rajeev:- "Shipu...yahan aayo...tumhe kuch dikhana hai...!!!"
 
Shipra pahle toh apne is naye naam se hairan hui...phir Rajeev k kareeb aayi...
 
Rajeev:- "ahh tum se bina puche hi is naam se bula liya...!!! tumhe bura toh nahi laga na...!!! matlab agar tumhe yeh naam achha nahi laga ho toh bata do...main tumhare liye koi aur naam soch lunga...jo tumhe achha lage...!!! aur haan...jab hum akele honge na...toh main tumhe usi naam se pukarunga...!!!"
 
Shipra mushkurayi aur kaha:- "nahi...yeh naam mujhe pasand hai...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "thank God...ki tumhe yeh naam pasand hai...!!! kyoun ki jab se hamari shaadi tai hui hai na...main roz tumhare photo k sath isi naam se baat kiya karta tha...!!!"
 
Shipra ne hairani se dekha Rajeev ko...
 
Rajeev:- 'ab aise kya dekh rahi ho...yahan aayo na...???"
 
Shipra us k kareeb aayi...khidki k paas khadi rahi...!!! bahar se gile mitti ki khushbu aa rahi thi...barshat ki wajah se hawa me ek shaant si thandi basi hui thi...Shipra ko achha lag raha tha vahan par...us k chehre par apne aap hi ek mushkurahat aa gayi...
 
us ne dhire se Rajeev k chehre ko dekha...voh bhi mushkura raha tha...
 
Rajeev:- "pahli barshat me tum kya karti ho...???"
 
Shipra:- "har saal mujhe bukhar ho jata hai...!!!"
 
Rajeev:- "kyoun...???
 
Shipra:- "barish mujhe pasand hai...aur main pahli barshat me baht bheegti hun...isiliye shardi lag jati hai aur us k baad bukhar ho jata hai...!!! par phir bhi main har saal bheegti hun...mujhe achha lagta hai...!!! aur aap...???"
 
Rajeev:- "main...??? kuch khaash nahi...!!! vaise kya tum dekhna chahogi ki main pahli barshat me kya karta hun...???"
 
Shipra ne 'haan' me sar hilaya...
 
Rajeev:- "phir toh is k liye humain abhi bahar chalna padega...???"
 
Shipra:- "is waqt...???"
 
Rajeev:- "haan...kyoun...???"
 
Shipra:- "lekin sab ko kya kahenge...???"
 
Rajeev:- "kisi ko kuch kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...!!! hum dono chupke se nikal jayenge...aur kuch ghanto me wapas aa jayenge...!!!"
 
Shipra:- "par kisi ne pakad liya toh...???"
 
Rajeev:- "kisi ko pata chale tab na...!!! chalo mere sath...!!!"
 
Shipra ko kuch sunayi de raha tha...kuch yaad aa raha tha
 
"Aneesh chalo na...pahli barshat me bhi koi keetabon me muh gaad kar baitha rahta hai kya...chalo na plz...???" Shipra ne us ka hath thaam kar khincha barshat me jane k liye...
 
"dekho Shipra...!!! practical bano...yeh barish me bheegna...yeh sab filmo me achhe lagte hain...!!! haqiqat me nahi...!!! humain apni future k bare me sochna chahiye...!!! agar xams me achhe marks nahi aaye toh mera M.C.A me addmission bhi nahi ho payega...!!!"
 
Shipra:- "sirf kuch pal ki hi toh baat karr rahi hun na main...!!!"
 
Aneesh:- "tum nahi samjhogi Shipra...mere liye M.C.A karna kitna imp hai...???"
 
Shipra:- "mujh se bhi jyada...???"
 
Aneesh:- "be practical Shipra...!!! mere liye mere career se jyada aur kuch bhi imp nahi hai...!!!"
 
Aneesh ne apna hath Shipra ki hathon se khinch kar library ki taraf chala gaya...
 
"hello...kya sochne lagi...??? chale...
 
Rajeev ne khidki k paas khade ho kar Shipra se kaha...
 
Shipra ne dekha...Rajeev khidki k paas khada tha...
 
lekin kisi ne dekh liya toh..."Shipra ne darr kar pucha...
 
Rajeev:- "kuch nahi hoga...main hun na...sab sambhal lunga...
 
Rajeev khidki se bahr aaya...aur corridor me idhar udhar jhaanka...dekha kahin koi nahi tha...us ne Shipra ko aane ka ishara kiya...Shipra khidki k upar chadi...Rajeev ne use niche utarne me help ki...
 
dono k bahar aa jane k baad Rajeev ne phir se khidki band kar di...door toh ander se lock tha hi...
 
dono chupke chupke...niche aaye...dekha...sabhi so rahe the...andhera tha...aur ghar me baht sare mehmaan...isiliye kuch mehmaan gaddi bicha kar niche hi so rahe the...dono unhe cross kar k jane lage...
 
par Shipra kisi se andhere me takrai...
 
voh insaan chaunk kar utha...par sahi waqt par Rajeev ne Shipra ko pillar k piche khinch liya...Shipra dari hui thi...us ne bina kuch soche samjhe darr kar Rajeev k seene me apna chehra chupa liya...
 
voh insaan uth kar dekha...kahin koi nahi tha...phir se so gaya...
 
Rajeev ne dhire se Shipra k kanon me kaha:- "chalain...ya yahin isi pose me khade rahne ka iraada hai...???"
 
Shipra ne khud ko Rajeev se alag kiya...
 
Rajeev:- "ab main dushra risk nahi le sakta...???"
 
yeh kahte hue Rajeev ne Shipra ko apne bahon me uthaya...Shipra hairan hui...par Rajeev ne use apne bahon me uthate hue aaram se bahar aa gaya...
 
aur bahar aane k baad kaha:- "tumhari wajah se hum pakde jate...!!!"
 
Shipra:- "sorry...voh andhere me mujhe kuch dikhai hi nahi diya...!!! par aap itne aaram se kaise aa gaye...!!!"
 
Rajeev: "yeh toh apna roz ka hai...!!!"
 
Shipra:- "kya...???"
 
Rajeev:- "haan...!!! college k dino me bhi main raat ko aise hi apne frnds k sath ghumne chale jaya karta tha...aur subah hone se pahle wapas aa jata tha...!!! ab kya yahin khade khade mera interview logi...ya chalogi bhi...!!!"
 
Rajeev ne kaha...
 
Shipra aur Rajeev dono chalne lage...
 
barshat ho rahi thi...dhire dhire...ashman me chaand bhi tha...hawa dhire dhire bah rahi thi...Shipra k chehre par ek halki si mushkan thi...
 
Rajeev bich bich me use dekh khush hota tha...par dono khamosh the...dono hi ek dushre ka sath aur barshat ko sath me mehsus karte hue chal rahe the...
 
rashta sunsan tha...phir bhi Shipra ko kisi bhi baat ka darr nahi tha...kuch dino se voh kuch ghutan si mehsus karr rahi thi...aaj use lag raha tha...jaise sab kuch thik hai...ya phir jaldi hi sab kuch thik ho jayega...
 
ek jagah par Rajeev ne Shipra ka hath thaama...Shipra ne us ki taraf dekha...
 
Rajeev:- "tum 2 min k liye yahin ruko...main abhi aaya...
 
Rajeev bhaagta hua kahin chali gaya...Shipra hairani se dekh rahi thi...kuch hi duri par ek aadmi rainy-suit pahne diwar ki taraf muh kar 1 no karne me BZ tha....
 
Rajeev ne dhire se us k piche se us ki bike start kiya...voh jab tak apna pant thik kar k turn karta tab tak Rajeev us ki bike le kar ja chuka tha...voh piche se chilla raha tha....
 
Rajeev aa kar Shipra k paas ruka...
 
Shipra apni badi badi ankhon se hairan ho kar Rajeev ko dekh rahi thi...
 
Rajeev:- "agar mujhe jail me nahi dekhna chahti toh...jaldi se bike par baitho....!!!"
 
Shipra ko bhi yahi thik laga...voh kuch soche bina hi baith gayi...us bike par...
 
voh aadmi chillata hua un k piche kuch der tak bhagata hua aaya...par tab tak Rajeev ki bike us se kafi dur ja chuki thi....
 
Shipra ne piche turn kar k dekha...voh insaan baht piche rah chuka tha...
 
Rajeev:- "piche mat dekhna...agar us ne pehchan liya na toh mushibat ho jayegi...!!!"
 
Shipra:- "aap jante ho...use...???"
 
Rajeev:- "haan...aur kal subah tak tum bhi unhe jaan jayogi...!!!"
 
Shipra k chehre par ek khubshurat si smile aayi...jise Rajeev mirror k thrpugh dekh raha tha....
 
Shipra k dono hath...Rajeev k kandhon par majbuti se rakhe hue the...us ki ankhen band thi...honthon par ek smile...
 
barshat aur hawa...dono us k chehre chu rahe the...aur voh un dono ko mehsus karr rahi thi....
 
na toh use koi darr tha...aur na hi ghum....
 
us k chehre par ek sukun tha...jaise tapti dharti par abhi abhi barish ki boond giri ho....
 
bike ruki toh Shipra ne apni ankhen kholi...
               
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