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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 24 May 2010 at 12:31am | IP Logged
hi pri!!!
 
Wonderful Shot !!!
 
and a very appropriate name !!! Clap Clap Clap Clap
 
Bhala ho Gauri ka jisne tumhein kasam di aur tumne yeh shot post kiya....warna...huh..!
 
Gauri...agar aur bhi kuch likha hai inhone and if you know...then plzzzzzz feel free to give her the 'KASAM'....Tongue Hum sab ki bahoooot duayein milegi tumhe !! Wink
 
coming to the shot....it was simply superb !!
 
All the feelings ....friendship, separation, love, pain...everything was described just perfectlyyyy !!! Clap Star Star
 
Aur kya kahu? yaar....really am short of words now...
 
haan...par tumhein apne DUSRE skills dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai okay? Mujhe pata hai...tumhein bahot ACHCHI EDITING karna aata hai...but isse tum apne shots par use karke prove mat kiya karo....
welll.... You can use your EDITING skills on your ENDLESS NOTES and USELESS EXCUSES for not updating your fics early....LOL LOL LOL
 
Chal ab aur khichai nahi karti tumhari....
 
And.....
 
THANKS FOR THE PM !! Big smile
( 'Feel free to ignore it , if you are not interested'..huh! Yeh uske liye tha...)
 

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Posted: 24 May 2010 at 3:54am | IP Logged
great one
update soon

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Posted: 28 May 2010 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Amazingly nice shot Priya.............superb Clap   Clap   Clap   Clap  Clap

ab kyun ki tere do fics khatam hone waale hai.........toh tu aur bhi shots likh sathi hai...........aisa nahi hai ki I don't want you to start on a new fic but still..........sochna jaroor...........Tongue

this shot is one of the best I have read till now............

and jaise Mana ne kaha hai...........THANX FOR THE PM!!

and NO THANX FOR UR NOTE WITH IT !!Angry(agar agli baar aisi galthi hui tujhse toh anjaam bohuth bura hoga...........yaad rakhna........Evil Smile)

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
very very beautiful part.
nice oneClap

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
awesome Clap brilliant......Clap.............one shot.....very intresting...........
bich bich mein dara bhi diya tha( by sending raj on border, 9 din mein suman ki shadi.....)............but by reaching the end......made me happy........Big smile.......
really superbClap

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sun_423

priii this was so beautiful.. Thanxxxxx a lot SuriBig smile
 
the emotions were perfect, the turmoil, sentiments...love, pain, sacrifice...tears.. everything was present... it was just too good... the situation was very well put forth.. the moral of the story is the best part.. GODDDD...kuch choda hai tum ne...is SHOT k bare me ek hi line me sab kuch kah diya...thanxxxx yaar...Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
according to me the moral of this ff is 'Never hide your feelings from the one's you  love..Or may be there will be a time when you will be given no chance to explain'... raj & suman did get their second chance but life does not give everyone a second chance.. so one should never hesitate from telling what is in your heart.. it was very sweet... i really liked it very much....ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
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ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap kabhi kabhi main sochti hun ki tum kaise mere dimag ki baat jan leti ho...??? par sahi bhi hai...tum ne jo bhi kaha hai na...main bass vohi is shot me batana chahti thi...Big smile aur itni sare claps k liye main thanx nahi kahungi...kuch chizain chup kar rahen toh achha hota hai...Big smile Big smile Big smile samjhiBig smile Big smile Big smile
 
Do posts more shot ff's often.. would love to read them.... try karungi...matlab maine toh baht pahle se hi likhe hue the...par mujhe voh sab ajeeb lagte hain isiliye kabhi post karne k bare me socha nahi tha...Big smile
 
aur haan thank your cousin from my side kyunke because of her you have posted the wonderful one shot...Smile main us ki yeh baat kabhi bhi nahi maanti...agar us ne mujh se apne B'day par yeh promise nahi liya hota toh...!!! main toh bekar me fass gayi yaar...LOL LOL LOL

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhara_s

Nice one Priya...!!!! thanxxxx a lot Dhara jee...Big smile

Aise hi shots post karti rehna...!!!! tum sach me yeh chahti ho...Shocked??? pata hai mujhe kya lag raha hai...Tongue??? naaaahhhhhh...rahne do...main batayungi toh tum 'jo bole sau nihal' kah kar kripan le kar mere piche padd jayogi...LOL

And I loved the title...!!!! thanxxxx...last moment par yeh idea dimag me aaya tha...Big smile

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

awesome update priyaClap. loved it.

Thanxxxxxx a lot Rakhi...Big smile

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