Lamhein..With Rajeev(Shot fics)ud pg14 & siggy 1pg (Page 4)

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Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 24 May 2010 at 12:31am | IP Logged

hi pri!!!

Wonderful Shot !!!

and a very appropriate name !!!

Bhala ho Gauri ka jisne tumhein kasam di aur tumne yeh shot post kiya....warna...huh..!

Gauri...agar aur bhi kuch likha hai inhone and if you know...then plzzzzzz feel free to give her the 'KASAM'....

Hum sab ki bahoooot duayein milegi tumhe !!

coming to the shot....it was simply superb !!

All the feelings ....friendship, separation, love, pain...everything was described just perfectlyyyy !!!

Aur kya kahu? yaar....really am short of words now...

haan...par tumhein apne DUSRE skills dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai okay? Mujhe pata hai...tumhein bahot ACHCHI EDITING karna aata hai...but isse tum apne shots par use karke prove mat kiya karo....

welll.... You can use your EDITING skills on your ENDLESS NOTES and USELESS EXCUSES for not updating your fics early....

Chal ab aur khichai nahi karti tumhari....

And.....

THANKS FOR THE PM !!

( 'Feel free to ignore it , if you are not interested'..huh! Yeh uske liye tha...)

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rituka7

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Posted: 24 May 2010 at 3:54am | IP Logged

great one
update soon

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Posted: 28 May 2010 at 7:11am | IP Logged

Amazingly nice shot Priya.............superb

ab kyun ki tere do fics khatam hone waale hai.........toh tu aur bhi shots likh sathi hai...........aisa nahi hai ki I don't want you to start on a new fic but still..........sochna jaroor...........

this shot is one of the best I have read till now............

and jaise Mana ne kaha hai...........THANX FOR THE PM!!

and NO THANX FOR UR NOTE WITH IT !!(agar agli baar aisi galthi hui tujhse toh anjaam bohuth bura hoga...........yaad rakhna........)

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 3:26pm | IP Logged

very very beautiful part.

nice one

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 11:42pm | IP Logged

awesome

brilliant...... Clap

.............one shot.....very intresting...........
bich bich mein dara bhi diya tha( by sending raj on border, 9 din mein suman ki shadi.....)............but by reaching the end......made me happy........ Big smile

.......
really superb Clap

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 12:21am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sun_423

priii this was so beautiful.. Thanxxxxx a lot Suri

the emotions were perfect, the turmoil, sentiments...love, pain, sacrifice...tears.. everything was present... it was just too good... the situation was very well put forth.. the moral of the story is the best part.. GODDDD...kuch choda hai tum ne...is SHOT k bare me ek hi line me sab kuch kah diya...thanxxxx yaar...

according to me the moral of this ff is 'Never hide your feelings from the one's you love..Or may be there will be a time when you will be given no chance to explain'... raj & suman did get their second chance but life does not give everyone a second chance.. so one should never hesitate from telling what is in your heart.. it was very sweet... i really liked it very much....

kabhi kabhi main sochti hun ki tum kaise mere dimag ki baat jan leti ho...??? par sahi bhi hai...tum ne jo bhi kaha hai na...main bass vohi is shot me batana chahti thi... aur itni sare claps k liye main thanx nahi kahungi...kuch chizain chup kar rahen toh achha hota hai... samjhi

Do posts more shot ff's often.. would love to read them.... try karungi...matlab maine toh baht pahle se hi likhe hue the...par mujhe voh sab ajeeb lagte hain isiliye kabhi post karne k bare me socha nahi tha...

aur haan thank your cousin from my side kyunke because of her you have posted the wonderful one shot... main us ki yeh baat kabhi bhi nahi maanti...agar us ne mujh se apne B'day par yeh promise nahi liya hota toh...!!! main toh bekar me fass gayi yaar...

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 11:53pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Dhara_s

Nice one Priya...!!!! thanxxxx a lot Dhara jee...

Aise hi shots post karti rehna...!!!! tum sach me yeh chahti ho...??? pata hai mujhe kya lag raha hai...??? naaaahhhhhh...rahne do...main batayungi toh tum 'jo bole sau nihal' kah kar kripan le kar mere piche padd jayogi...

And I loved the title...!!!! thanxxxx...last moment par yeh idea dimag me aaya tha...

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 11:55pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

awesome update priya Clap

. loved it.

Thanxxxxxx a lot Rakhi...

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