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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gauri_s

very very very...angry with u di.....Angry Angry Angry 
 
tune is shot ka romantic part EDIT kyoun kiya...Angry Angry Angry
 
tu bahat buri hai...Angry Angry Angry
 
ab main tujh se kabhiiiiiiiiii baat nahi karungi...kattiiiiiii Angry Angry Angry


Oye Priya...mai to yahan comment karne ja rahi thi...par ye kya baat hui...kya edit kiya tune...unedited version post kar...jaldi...

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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 8:57pm | IP Logged

Hiiii Priya....

 Fabulous os dear Clap Clap  Clap   Clap   Clap   Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap   Clap   Clap  Clap

tune itni wonderful os likhi aur hum sab se chupayi...too bad ..thanks to guari ....because of  her kasam  u posted this os

 mujhe iski title bahut accha laga  yaar ..aur  Suman n  raj ki love story  bhi bahut beautiful  n sweet hain   ....their feelings, pain  every thing u described so beautifully...I loved all the scenes in this os....their first meet is so cute ...the song is so lovely,thank god raj sahi time pe suman ki father  se baat kiya  ..aur sab kuch tikh hogaya

 mujhe sab se jyada kya accha laga is os main pata hain...raj saying to suman in the last part  "main  tumhe apne se alag nahi karnewala aur jinhe bhi tumhari yaad aaye"...wo khudh aajaye...awesome yaar
 
i think tum meri is comment ke baadh samajgayi hogi ki mujhe ye os kitna accha laga...to  i hope tum  jaldi se another os post karke hum ko bore karogi
 
love
yogitha
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 



Edited by princessyogitha - 23 May 2010 at 4:07am

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Posted: 23 May 2010 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Firstly.....sabse mast hai iss topic ka title...."Lamhein wid Rajeev"....haiii!! Main to dekh kar hi khush go gayi thi Priya....lekin padhke mujhe bada gussa aa raha tha....I mean Bhagwan ne zuban diya hai....kuch to utilize karo....par nahi....baba adam k zamane se the dono....khat likhte rahe!! "I love you"....teen simple se shabd hai....inhe kehne k bajai....kya kya likhte rahe....haath dard nahi kiya kya??

Anyways....inpe gussa karke kya fayda?? Inhone wahi kiya jo aap ne unse karwaya madam!! Ek to itna gloomy start kiya fic ki....mera to dil dhak dhak kar raha tha....in anticipation....i thought ye Priya ne kuch gadbad to nahi kar dii...one shot likhte likhte!! But however I was glad ki u r still the lioness....and they had got sum brains knocked into them!! Achha hua Raj me mohabbat ka jazba aa gaya tha....warna ghor anarth ho jata!!

Waise I loved the way their story were portrayed....like how they came to knw each other....and how they grew fond of each other!! Wo song wala portion badhiya tha....it was veryyyy unique Priya!! I must admire u for that!! And then wo towel wala chhotu sa scene.....do I even need to say wat I was reminded of while reading that??

Khair...anth bhala to sab bhala....btw I liked Raj saying....jisko milna hai wo yaha aa jaye....tumhe jaane nahi dunga....now thats like the perfect husband!! Bas tum Raj ko thodi chhuttiya bhi dila dena....bechare se kitna kaam karwate hai....apni shaadi me bhi usse waqt nahi mila....hehe. Honeymoon pe bhej dena....pls....hehe.

Chalo....ab next shot bhi post karo....and hamein thoda aur bore karo....bye...take care!!

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Posted: 23 May 2010 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Edit????? Shocked Shocked Shocked

Madam....aap ne iss shot ko edit kiya??? Ek to tumne arse baad....gauri ki kasam ki wajah se....ye shot post karne ki zehmat uthayi....we so appreciate u for this...ab isme editing ki dikkat kyun uthayi yaar??? Itna jab bore hue hum....to thoda aur ho jate....AngryAngry....huh!! Me very gussa...Dead

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Posted: 23 May 2010 at 8:49am | IP Logged

@...Gauri, Suri, Suhana, Lipi, Guglu, Yogi, Rakhi, Sumi n all (jo bhi mujhe galiyaan dene k mood me hainLOL)

 
mujhe maaf karo yaar...!!! maine kuch parts is ka EDIT kiya hai...!!! actually aaj kal phones aur e-mail k zamane me koi kisi ko khat likhta hai kya...??? par Gauri ne mujhe ek Task diya tha...ki main is par ek SHOT likhun...!!! aur meri kahani ki suruwat toh rajeev se hi hoti hai...aur usi par khatam bhi...toh maine Rajeev par likhna suru kiya aur maine bakwaas likhna suru kar diya...hala ki natiza baht bura tha...mujhe saar peetne ka mann karr raha tha ise padhne k baad...!!!ab yeh sach hai ki is SHOT me ek romantic part tha...par mujhe laga ki kahin yeh kuch jyada na ho jaye...!!! mera dimag kuch jyada chalta hai...yeh toh aap sab jante hi hoge...isiliye...!!!
 
ab maaf bhi kar do...main us scene ko kisi aur SHOT me add kar dungi...agar aap log abhi bhi bore hona chahte hoge toh...!!!


Edited by Lion_Priya - 23 May 2010 at 8:50am

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Posted: 23 May 2010 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

@...Gauri, Suri, Suhana, Lipi, Guglu, Yogi, Rakhi, Sumi n all (jo bhi mujhe galiyaan dene k mood me hainLOL)

 
mujhe maaf karo yaar...!!! maine kuch parts is ka EDIT kiya hai...!!! actually aaj kal phones aur e-mail k zamane me koi kisi ko khat likhta hai kya...??? par Gauri ne mujhe ek Task diya tha...ki main is par ek SHOT likhun...!!! aur meri kahani ki suruwat toh rajeev se hi hoti hai...aur usi par khatam bhi...toh maine Rajeev par likhna suru kiya aur maine bakwaas likhna suru kar diya...hala ki natiza baht bura tha...mujhe saar peetne ka mann karr raha tha ise padhne k baad...!!!ab yeh sach hai ki is SHOT me ek romantic part tha...par mujhe laga ki kahin yeh kuch jyada na ho jaye...!!! mera dimag kuch jyada chalta hai...yeh toh aap sab jante hi hoge...isiliye...!!!
 
ab maaf bhi kar do...main us scene ko kisi aur SHOT me add kar dungi...agar aap log abhi bhi bore hona chahte hoge toh...!!!


Hmm....the last lines sounded better!! Kisi aur shot me.....hmm....I think it will do for me....waise agar tumne cut kiya hai.....may be it was for better!! Ek writer sabse zyada achhese samajhti hai na? Anyways....main na likhna bhul gayi thi.....wo poems/songs.....jo bhi the....they were beautiful!!!ClapClap Wink

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Posted: 23 May 2010 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

@...Gauri, Suri, Suhana, Lipi, Guglu, Yogi, Rakhi, Sumi n all (jo bhi mujhe galiyaan dene k mood me hainLOL)

 
mujhe maaf karo yaar...!!! maine kuch parts is ka EDIT kiya hai...!!! actually aaj kal phones aur e-mail k zamane me koi kisi ko khat likhta hai kya...??? par Gauri ne mujhe ek Task diya tha...ki main is par ek SHOT likhun...!!! aur meri kahani ki suruwat toh rajeev se hi hoti hai...aur usi par khatam bhi...toh maine Rajeev par likhna suru kiya aur maine bakwaas likhna suru kar diya...hala ki natiza baht bura tha...mujhe saar peetne ka mann karr raha tha ise padhne k baad...!!!ab yeh sach hai ki is SHOT me ek romantic part tha...par mujhe laga ki kahin yeh kuch jyada na ho jaye...!!! mera dimag kuch jyada chalta hai...yeh toh aap sab jante hi hoge...isiliye...!!!
 
ab maaf bhi kar do...main us scene ko kisi aur SHOT me add kar dungi...agar aap log abhi bhi bore hona chahte hoge toh...!!!
Hi Priya
Mujhe tumhe maarne ka mann nahin kar raha hai..u know main hinsa mein vishwaas nahin rakhti to shanti se edited part kabhi kissi doosre shot mein post kar denaBig smile
jaisa sumi ne kaha u r the best one to decide whether to keep or edit the scene in your fiction
 
ByeSmile

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Posted: 23 May 2010 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
hey priya dear very beautiful story.............loved it..............they simple and very lovely.................but i liked the para u added saying u wont make anything go bad.................lovely story.................

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