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prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
that was really good
plz keep updating such shots

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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
lovely

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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
Beautiful story
You should have posted it ealier
will be waiting to read more stories which you write

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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 11:24pm | IP Logged

Hi Priya

How r u???
This OS is one of the best I have ever read..U know aap bahut accha likhti hain.ClapClapClapClap I was so mesimerized after reading this...Smile
Raj n Suman ka pyaar unka itezaar bina kuchh kahe bhi bahut kuchh keh gaya..especially title bahut hi khoosurat tha..Big smile
 i really love this song..Lyrics is just so beautiful..
Raj aur Suman ki pehli mulakaatbahut cute thi..Raj is really very talentedTongueBig smile
Suman ne ragging ki wajah se hi sahi par propose to kiya tha..LOLWink
Shayad Bhagwanji ne unka ek doosre se milna likha tha.. Smile
tabhi to har baar door hokar bhi woh aur paas aate raheBig smile
par dono ne chup reh kar bhi pyaar ke har ehsaas ko jeeya..Mann mein dono hi jante the ki woh ek doosre se pyaar karte hain par shayad unke iss ehsaas ko lafzon ki zaroorat thi..
Suman ki shadi tai hone ke baad Raj to ek dum toot gaya... phir bhi kehte hain na jeet hamesha sacche pyaar ki hi hoti hai..Raj ne Suman ke baba se saari baatein keh di aur woh unke pyaar ko samajh bhi gayeBig smile
Saari mushkilon ke baad bhi Suman n Raj ek ho gaye..Smile
 
Yeh unedited version kaun sa hai??Kripya usko bhi postkareinBig smile
ByeSmile
 
 


Edited by suhana_dixit - 22 May 2010 at 12:21pm

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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged
beautiful story dear
keep writing such short fics on rajeev
luv u
bye

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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 12:27am | IP Logged
awsome OS
loved it
aise post karte raho
superb

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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 12:43am | IP Logged
bohot he sweet haai story
loved it
 
 

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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 6:49am | IP Logged
soooooooooooo  beautiful.................ClapClapClapClap

loved it completely........ClapClap


d way it began and till d end same tempo was der.......loved it.....ClapClap


awesome way of presenting suman and raj and also der parts in diff ways.....Clap


as usual ur dialogue part is always ur plus point.....aur haan bichme aapki kuch lines jaise yeh

(mujhe pata hai ki aap sab kya soch rahe honge...RAJ...border par jo gaya tha...matlab kuch BAHT BURA...LOL!!! come on guys...dis is Priya...bura toh kuch ho hi nahi sakta...aur agar kuch hua bhi toh main hun na...use thik karne k liye...)

 adds to the flavour......WinkSmile

was it poem or song dnt know..(sry for datOuch)...but it was beautiful...ClapClapClap


also kindly post ur unedited version as well....TongueSmile


keep posting such beautiful and wonderful creations by u.....SmileSmileSmileTongue

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