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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Chalo achha hua main aa gayi.....warna mujhe miss karne ke chakkar me ye shot UD nahi ho rahi thi....LOL aur nahi toh kya...tumhe pata hai main tumhe kitnaaaaaaaa miss karr rahi thi...
....khair jab maine tumhara PM dekha....main sach me uchhal rahi thi....arre cockroach dekh kar nahi.....khushi se....coz mujhe cockroach se darr nahi lagta.....LOLLOL.... mujhe bhi darr nahi lagta...par main aaj tak yeh nahi samajh payi ke kuch heroines cockroach se itna darti kyoun hain...jaise voh koi tiger ho ya phir dainasour...LOL
 
Now coming to the point.....which is Raj of course.....Wink Raj Kshipra ko nadi ke paas le gaya....and they had this wonderful chat jahan Raj ki har simple se simple baat.....mere chehre par muskaan laa rahi thiBig smileBig smile....Mind you....it was not just becoz he is Rajeev....but also becoz u had moulded this character like that!!!Tongue is matlab raj ke sath sath thoda sa credit mujhe bhi jata hai...ryt...Tongue!!!
 
Jab usne kaha....."mujhe aisi ladki se shaadi karni thi jisse SAMOSHE banana naa ata ho".....I loved him then and there....again!!WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink......and again Sunaina....janab ki camera.....LOL...he is soooo sweet na....Dadi se itna pyar karta hai ki unki dii hui camera ka naamkaran unke naam pe kiya....LOLLOLEmbarrassed actually na meri ek prob hai...jab main raj ko le kar koi scene likhti hun na...toh bas likhti hi jati hun...jo bhi dil me aata hai(mind you...tumhe pata hai yahan dimag ki kami hai...LOL)...aur pata nahi kaise...par tumhe hamesha achha lagta hai...
 
Kshipra ne finally Rajeev se Aneesh ke bare me baat kii....and Raj....being the smart guy he is.....usne jhat se samajh liya....that was mere attraction....Wink.....waise Aneesh ki soch par mujhe hassi aa rahi thi....wo bewkuf keh kya raha tha yaar???LOLLOL khud hi bewakuf kahti ho aur khud hi puch rahi ho...??? sahi naam diya hai na tum ne us ka BEWAKUF... toh aur voh bolega hi kya...
 
And I also liked the thing that u kinda differentiated btwn attraction and actual love.....which is of course far more divine and pure than the former one....WinkWink kahi sahi bola hai yaar...Big smile
 
Ab chalo dono ghar wapas aa gaye....and they had this sweet scene in the morning....they had become frnds....and Kshipra ne dost ke naate kuch mang bhi liya tha....waise I must say....I did doubt her at this very point....LOLLOL he he he...par maine full try kiya tha ke kisi ko bhi koi doubt na ho...phir bhi tum ne mujhe pakad liya......dimagless...sister...LOL
 
Phir Mamaji ne Raj ko Hrithik ke saath compare kiya....Yay!!! Coz I loved Dhoom 2Tongue....I love Hrithik as wellEmbarrassed....and u knw....main ladkiyon par dhyan nahi deti.....LOLLOL main bhi nahi deti...LOL
 
Phir Raj pipe chadke kitchen pe gaya....uski madat kii....how sweet was all that!! Kaafi achha trick chalaya....Big smile....see yaha bhi ye smart hai.....aur isliye hum writers Dimagless....LOL ha ha ha...raj smart hai aur hum dimagless...wajah bhi raj hi hai...LOL
 
And now they were bak....aur Raj ko pata chala dosti ka teesra rule....LOLLOL.....very lovely!!! Mujhe wo puri scene bahut achhi lagi.... thanqqqqBig smile
 
And then....Raj was to go to Shimla....and as Kshipra cudnt be without him.....she also accompanied him.....Wink....aur landslide...ne apna kamaal kar hi diya.....Khipra ko realize hua....wo Raj se kitna pyar karne lagi thi....and then their sweet confession....as always lovely....just like you yaar!!!Tongue are baht galat-fahmi hai tumhe...main lovely toh bilkul bhi nahi hun...!!! par tum kahti ho toh main maan leti hun...ha ha ha...thanqqqq...are mujhe lovely kahne ke liye nahi...confession scene ke sath mujhe link karne ke liye...Wink
 
I loved this shot a lot....Priya.....and u knw wat....U must be a very lovely person (waise to main tumhe jitna janti hu usse to guarantee hai hi phir bhi bata rahi hu yaar).....isiliye itne achhe shots likh pati ho....U do hav a beautiful heart!!!LOL heart missing hai...yaar...LOL...thanqqqq so much...arre meri itni sari tarif jo ki hai tum ne meri...TongueBig smile
 
And see....dhamki pe khatam nahi kiya....though it wud be kind enough of u....agar hamein aise achhe achhe shots milte rahe....Wink ek aur hai...par post karungi ya nahi...abhi socha nahi hai...baht sare confusions hain us me...LOL
 
Chalo abhi to maine bhi tumhare dimag ki dahi bana hi dii.....enjoy that!!Wink
 dahi dimag ke liye achha hota hai...tumhe nahi malum...!!! dimag ko thanda karta hai...aur tumhare comments toh mujhe aise lagte hain jaise main khud simla me ghum rahi hun...Big smile
Luv,
Sumi.Wink
Thanxxxxx Sumi...Big smile

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
hey priya !!!!!!!!Smile
i found your one shots very late but not to worry i read both the one shotsBig smileBig smileBig smile
they are very nicely written in terms of the feelings of raj in the shotsClapClapClap
both the shots are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!ClapClapClap
bye!!!!!!!

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreyamathur_18

hey priya !!!!!!!!Smile Hiii Shreya...
i found your one shots very late but not to worry i read both the one shotsBig smileBig smileBig smile ohkk...
they are very nicely written in terms of the feelings of raj in the shotsClapClapClap ab fic bhi toh usi k liye hi likha hai na...
both the shots are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!ClapClapClap ThanqqqBig smile
bye!!!!!!!

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