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Lamhein..With Rajeev(Shot fics)ud pg14 & siggy 1pg (Page 16)

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Posted: 28 August 2010 at 11:30pm | IP Logged




Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

lovely ..................... Clap ClapClapClapClapClapClap................. so many hearts EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed............. Big smilehum sab ka ek ek hai TongueTongueTongueTongueTongue.................
awesome work done............. Clap ClapClapClapClapClap


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Posted: 29 August 2010 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Hey
This Siggy is Superb....awesome...
loved reading it.
Kash har ladka Raj jaisa understanding hota
Waiting to read more of your stories.
Take care

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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
the siggy is superb yaar

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Posted: 02 September 2010 at 12:21am | IP Logged
nice siggy priya.
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Posted: 25 November 2010 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Puri_2711

hi Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile.......... Hiiii Puri....Big smile
firstly thanx 4 a update TongueTongueTongueTongue................... lo...is baat ke liye bhi koi THANX kahta hai kya...Tongue
its a lovely update ClapClapClapClapClapClap............ sweet ,simple............ Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile............... its been a smooth flowing story with not much twists & turns................ ThanqqqqqqqqqqEmbarrassed
& Rajeev  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed............. as usual it was really lovable........... Day Dreaming.........
loved how shipra & Rajeev's relationship progressed.............. Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile............. from strangers to frnds to lovers to husband wife............. Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile............. its been a slow & steady progression....... Big smileBig smileBig smile matlab yeh pappu toh paas ho gaya hai na...??? ab tum ne jo tarif kar di...main bench par khade hone se bhi toh bach gayi na...Big smileTongue

Really loved this happy go lucky...... lively Rajeev Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed....... he helping shipra in making kheer..... Big smileBig smileBig smile..... loved his character throughout............. Embarrassed ab fic Rajeev ki hai...toh main toh yehi koshish karunga na...ki rajeev ko BESTEST dikhayun...Wink

shipra too she has been the sweet simple girl............ Big smileBig smileBig smile....... & smart intelligent in her own way........ SmileSmileSmileSmile..... they were really made 4 each other... Big smile Big smileBig smile Shipra ka charac maine hum Rajeev FANS ke bare me sochte hue likha tha...!!! ab hum bhi toh intelligent aur smart hain ki nahi...Wink


overall its been treat to read Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile.................... so come up with a new one soon.......... yaar...kai sari short stories mere dairy me likhi hui hain...par unhe type karne me mushkil ho raha hai...
want to add one more thing............ Rajeev in ur fic married shipra coz use samose banane nahi aate............... matlab mera number kabhi nahi aata.......... LOL LOLLOLLOL................... mujhe samose banane aate hai............. TongueTongueTongueTongueTongue ab rajeev ko samoshe bhi achhe lagne lage hain yaar...tum fiqar mat karo...!!! voh toh ladkiyan dekh dekh kar chidh gaya tha...isiliye bol gaya...ab batayo bhala...SAMOSHE kise achhe nahi lagenge...??? in fact...Sunita William jab space me thi us ne bhi Samoshe ko miss kiya tha...LOL


will be waiting 4 a new1 Big smileBig smileBig smile
Embarrassed pahle xams toh khatam ho jaye...phir likhti hun kuch utt-patang OS....
Thanxxxxxxxxxx Puri....Big smile

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Posted: 05 December 2010 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
nice siggi dear.....................
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Chalo achha hua main aa gayi.....warna mujhe miss karne ke chakkar me ye shot UD nahi ho rahi thi....LOL aur nahi toh kya...tumhe pata hai main tumhe kitnaaaaaaaa miss karr rahi thi...
....khair jab maine tumhara PM dekha....main sach me uchhal rahi thi....arre cockroach dekh kar nahi.....khushi se....coz mujhe cockroach se darr nahi lagta.....LOLLOL.... mujhe bhi darr nahi lagta...par main aaj tak yeh nahi samajh payi ke kuch heroines cockroach se itna darti kyoun hain...jaise voh koi tiger ho ya phir dainasour...LOL
 
Now coming to the point.....which is Raj of course.....Wink Raj Kshipra ko nadi ke paas le gaya....and they had this wonderful chat jahan Raj ki har simple se simple baat.....mere chehre par muskaan laa rahi thiBig smileBig smile....Mind you....it was not just becoz he is Rajeev....but also becoz u had moulded this character like that!!!Tongue is matlab raj ke sath sath thoda sa credit mujhe bhi jata hai...ryt...Tongue!!!
 
Jab usne kaha....."mujhe aisi ladki se shaadi karni thi jisse SAMOSHE banana naa ata ho".....I loved him then and there....again!!WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink......and again Sunaina....janab ki camera.....LOL...he is soooo sweet na....Dadi se itna pyar karta hai ki unki dii hui camera ka naamkaran unke naam pe kiya....LOLLOLEmbarrassed actually na meri ek prob hai...jab main raj ko le kar koi scene likhti hun na...toh bas likhti hi jati hun...jo bhi dil me aata hai(mind you...tumhe pata hai yahan dimag ki kami hai...LOL)...aur pata nahi kaise...par tumhe hamesha achha lagta hai...
 
Kshipra ne finally Rajeev se Aneesh ke bare me baat kii....and Raj....being the smart guy he is.....usne jhat se samajh liya....that was mere attraction....Wink.....waise Aneesh ki soch par mujhe hassi aa rahi thi....wo bewkuf keh kya raha tha yaar???LOLLOL khud hi bewakuf kahti ho aur khud hi puch rahi ho...??? sahi naam diya hai na tum ne us ka BEWAKUF... toh aur voh bolega hi kya...
 
And I also liked the thing that u kinda differentiated btwn attraction and actual love.....which is of course far more divine and pure than the former one....WinkWink kahi sahi bola hai yaar...Big smile
 
Ab chalo dono ghar wapas aa gaye....and they had this sweet scene in the morning....they had become frnds....and Kshipra ne dost ke naate kuch mang bhi liya tha....waise I must say....I did doubt her at this very point....LOLLOL he he he...par maine full try kiya tha ke kisi ko bhi koi doubt na ho...phir bhi tum ne mujhe pakad liya......dimagless...sister...LOL
 
Phir Mamaji ne Raj ko Hrithik ke saath compare kiya....Yay!!! Coz I loved Dhoom 2Tongue....I love Hrithik as wellEmbarrassed....and u knw....main ladkiyon par dhyan nahi deti.....LOLLOL main bhi nahi deti...LOL
 
Phir Raj pipe chadke kitchen pe gaya....uski madat kii....how sweet was all that!! Kaafi achha trick chalaya....Big smile....see yaha bhi ye smart hai.....aur isliye hum writers Dimagless....LOL ha ha ha...raj smart hai aur hum dimagless...wajah bhi raj hi hai...LOL
 
And now they were bak....aur Raj ko pata chala dosti ka teesra rule....LOLLOL.....very lovely!!! Mujhe wo puri scene bahut achhi lagi.... thanqqqqBig smile
 
And then....Raj was to go to Shimla....and as Kshipra cudnt be without him.....she also accompanied him.....Wink....aur landslide...ne apna kamaal kar hi diya.....Khipra ko realize hua....wo Raj se kitna pyar karne lagi thi....and then their sweet confession....as always lovely....just like you yaar!!!Tongue are baht galat-fahmi hai tumhe...main lovely toh bilkul bhi nahi hun...!!! par tum kahti ho toh main maan leti hun...ha ha ha...thanqqqq...are mujhe lovely kahne ke liye nahi...confession scene ke sath mujhe link karne ke liye...Wink
 
I loved this shot a lot....Priya.....and u knw wat....U must be a very lovely person (waise to main tumhe jitna janti hu usse to guarantee hai hi phir bhi bata rahi hu yaar).....isiliye itne achhe shots likh pati ho....U do hav a beautiful heart!!!LOL heart missing hai...yaar...LOL...thanqqqq so much...arre meri itni sari tarif jo ki hai tum ne meri...TongueBig smile
 
And see....dhamki pe khatam nahi kiya....though it wud be kind enough of u....agar hamein aise achhe achhe shots milte rahe....Wink ek aur hai...par post karungi ya nahi...abhi socha nahi hai...baht sare confusions hain us me...LOL
 
Chalo abhi to maine bhi tumhare dimag ki dahi bana hi dii.....enjoy that!!Wink
 dahi dimag ke liye achha hota hai...tumhe nahi malum...!!! dimag ko thanda karta hai...aur tumhare comments toh mujhe aise lagte hain jaise main khud simla me ghum rahi hun...Big smile
Luv,
Sumi.Wink
Thanxxxxx Sumi...Big smile

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
hey priya !!!!!!!!Smile
i found your one shots very late but not to worry i read both the one shotsBig smileBig smileBig smile
they are very nicely written in terms of the feelings of raj in the shotsClapClapClap
both the shots are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!ClapClapClap
bye!!!!!!!

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