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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 11:01am | IP Logged
                                 Lamhein... (with Rajeev)
 
 
 
 
        *^(By...my Art Director YogithaLOL)
 
Index
 
1st Shot..........
 
Tere khushbu me  (pg 1)
 
2nd Shot.........
 
Pal Me Hi...... (pg 7) (1st part)
                       (pg14) Last part
 


Edited by Lion_Priya - 28 August 2010 at 7:59am

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                                Tere Khushbu Me......
 
 
Voh train me ja kar baitha...!!! us k sath us k father bhi the...par kuch khone ka ghum use sata raha tha...!!!
 
us ne khidki se bahar jhaanka...aapni udaas nazaron se...
 
achanak us k chehre par ek smile aayi...us ne apne father se kaha:- "papa...main abhi aaya...
 
us k father ne mana kiya bahar jane k liye kaha:- "kahan ja raha hai...abhi 5 min me train chutne wali hai....!!!"
 
us ne kaha:- "main bass 2 min me aaya papa...!!!"
 
voh bahar bhaagta hua gaya...!!! kuch aage bhaag kar jane k baad...voh ek jagah ja kar ruka...!!! ek ladki use back kar k khadi thi...idhar udhar dekh rahi thi...sayad kisi ko dhundh rahi thi...!!!us k hathon me kuch roses the...
 
us ne us ladki se kaha:- "Suman...tum yahan kya karr rahi ho...???"
 
jab ki voh janta tha ki Suman sirf usi se milne aayi hai...
 
Suman kuch kahna chahti thi...par voh sach bolna chahte hue bhi jhuth bol gayi:- "main apne ek frnd se milne aayi thi...!!! par lagta hai ki voh chali gayi...!!!"
 
us ne kaha:- "aur yeh flowers...???"
 
jab ki voh yeh bhi janta tha ki yeh flowes bhi usi k liye hi hain...phir bhi us ne Suman se pucha...
 
par is baar Suman ne jhuth nahi bola aur na hi kuch aur kaha...us ne bass voh flowers us k taraf badha diye...aur bass itna kaha" TAKE CARE"
 
voh samajh raha tha Suman k ankhon ki zubaan...lekin voh phir bhi kuch kah nahi paya...bass itn hi kaha ki"- "main tumhe vahan se apna naya pata bhejunga...!!! kya tum mujhe khat likhogi...???"
 
Suman k udaas chehre par ek khubshurat si smile aayi...us ne haan kaha...
 
train ne akhiri horn di...us ne kuch pal k liye Suman ka hath thama...kuch pal k liye dono ek dushre ko nazar me chupaya... aur voh phir se bhaagta hua...train k ander chala gaya...
 
train jane lagi...voh khidki k bahar jhaankne laga...tab tak voh Suman ko dekhta raha...jab tak voh us k ankhon se ojhal na ho jaye...!!! phir us ne un flowers ko dekha...yellow roses aur pink roses k bich me ek red rose tha...
                   
                           <<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>
 
us din se suru hua tha us ankahe rishte ki nayi suruwat...
 
har saal Suman do khat bhejti thi use...ek new year par aur dushra us k b'day par...
 
khat me kuch khaash nahi hota tha...bas...voh kuch khud k bare me...us k padhai k bare me...aur kuch saher me hue naye halchal k bare me likhti thi...!!! par phir bhi use Suman k har ek khat ka badi be-sabri se intezaar rahta tha...
 
na hi voh kabhi Suman se kah paya aur na hi Suman us se kabhi kah payi...par phir bhi un k bich ka rishta dhire dhire majbut hota ja raha tha...
 
dono k dilon k khamosh dhadkano ki awaz...dono mehsus toh karte the...par kabhi zuban par aa hi nahi paye...aur jab sachhai bahar aayi toh bahat der ho chuki thi...
 
aaj jo khat use mila hai...voh bhi har ek khat ki tarah khaash hai...kyoun ki aaj k baad use aur kabhi bhi Suman ka koi bhi khat nahi milega...
 
Raj......
 
bachpan se hum dost rahe...!!!!!! par pahle pyar ka ehsaas tab hua...jab zindagi kisi aur k sath judd chuki thi...!!! main toh hamesha se tumhara intezar karr rahi thi...par tum ne hi baht der kar di...!!!
 
sayad yeh mera akhiri khat hai...tumhare liye...!!! main tumhari baat maan nahi payi...ho sake toh mujh se sirf nafrat karna...!!! sayad isi bahane tum mujhe yaad kar liya karoge...!!!

 
29th june ko meri shaadi hai..!!! sayad jab tumhe yeh khat mile tab tak meri shaadi ho chuki hogi...
 
pata nahi...zindagi me hum phir kabhi mil payenge ya nahi...!!! nahi janti...kuch maangne ka haq hai ya nahi...phir bhi maang rahi hun...!!! ho sake toh mujhe kabhi bhulna mat...apne dil k ek chote se kone me mujhe chupaye rakhna...
 
main vohin se tumhara intezaar karungi...qayamat tak....sayad tub hum mil jaye...jab humain baandhne k liye hum se jude hue aur koi bandhan hi na ho......
 
ho sake toh mere sare likhe hue khat jala dena...mujhe sirf apne dil me rakhna...
 
main vaada karti hun...sayad zinda rahte toh nahi...par is jism se chtkara milne k baad...main tum se jarur milungi...hamesha hamesha k liye sirf tumhari bann ne k liye...!!! tum hi mera pahla aur akhiri pyar the...!!!
 
haan...ek sukun le kar jayungi ki jise maine pyar kiya hai...main hi us ki pahla pyar thi...!!!

                                          Suman

 
voh ganga k kinare baitha hua tha...!!! us k chehre par ek udaasi thi...jaise abhi abhi voh apne zindagi ki akhiri saansh le raha ho...!!! ankhon me anshu toh the...par na jane kyoun voh bah nahi rahe the...!!!palkon k bich me ruke hue the...aise jaise dil k dard ko dabane ki akhiri koshish karr rahe ho...
 
us ne apne hathon me dekha...naye purane...kai sare khat the us me...!!! na toh voh kabhi bhul paya hai...aur na hi voh kabhi bhul payega...sari galati usi ki thi...jis ki wajah se aaj Suman ki shaadi kisi aur se ho rahi hai...!!!
 
par voh kaise maan le...Suman ki baat??? kaise jala de us k in khato ko...??? kya koi bhi khud k zinda rahte...zindagi ko jala sakta hai...!!!
 
 
tere khushbu me base khat...

main jalata kaise...

pyar me dube hue khat...

main jalata kaise...

tere hathon k likhe khat...

main jalata kaise...

jin ko duniya ki nigahon se

chupaye rakha...

jinn ko ek umr kaleje se

lagaye rakha...

din jinn ko...jinhe imaan

banaye rakha...

teri khushbu me base khat...

main jalata kaise...

jinn ka har lafz mujhe

yaad hai...paani ki tarah

yaad the mujh ko jo

paigam-e-zubani ki tarah...

mujh ko pyare the jo

anmol nishani ki tarah...

teri khushbu me base khat

main jalata kaise...

tune duniya ki nigahon se

jo bach kar likhe...

saal ha saal mere naam se

barabar likhe...

kabhi din me toh

kabhi raat ko uth kar likhe...

tere khushbu me base khat

main jalata kaise...

pyar me dube hue khat

main jalata kaise...

tere hathon k likhe khat

main jalata kaise...

tere khat aaj main

ganga me baha aaya hun...

aag bahte hue paani me

laga aaya hun...

 
raat ko kafi der tak voh sochta raha...ander hi ander ghut ta raha...!!! par na toh khud ko samjha pa raha tha...aur na hi apne dil ko...!!! phir us ne ek faishla liya...
 
aaj se kuch saal pahle......
 
main...main Suman Sethi...apne baba ki pyari beti...!!! baht choti thi...jab meri maa ne mujhe aur baba ko akele chod kar kahin dur chali gayi...!!! sabhi ne baba se dushri shaadi karne k liye kaha...par...unhone tal diya...!!! mera chehra dekh kar mushkura dete...!!! meri hassi k sath un ki mushkurahat aur mere anshuyon k sath un k anshun...samil ho gaye...the...!!!
 
meri zindagi me sirf baba k alawa aur koi kabhi aaya hi nahi...sayad yeh kishmat ko manzur nahi tha...!!! voh sayad yeh chahta tha ki ...main bhi kisi k sapne dekhun...meri jeene ki bhi koi aur wajah ho...sayad isiliye us ne meri zindagi me Raj ko bheja...!!!
 
Raj...!!! koi khaash rishta nahi tha mera us k sath...hum dono sath me ek hi school me the...!!! voh mujh se senior tha...!!! hamare school ka sab se intelligent boy tha voh...!!! par school ka hero tab bana jab us ne water tank me girnewali...hamare principal k 7 saal k beti ko bachaya...!!!
 
hamare school ki har ek ladki use janti thi...par voh kisi bhi ladki me interested nahi tha...!!! time milta toh voh lybrary me dikhai deta...!!! hamesha keetabo me ghusha rahta...!!! us k dost use 'kitabi keeda' bulate the...!!1 voh hass deta...
 
voh us ka last year tha...aur school ka annual function chal raha tha...!!! mujhe song competition me participate karna tha...!!! rule yeh tha ki song original hona chahiye...koi filmy song nahi chalegi...!!! maine badi mushkil se...ek song collect kiya tha...aur us par baht practice bhi ki thi...!!! par us din main baht nervous feel karr rahi thi...!!!
 
shaam ko function chal raha tha...hamare school k ground me...!!! main school k ander thi...riyaaz karr rahi thi...lekin baar baar us song k lyrics bhul jati thi...!!! main distracted si apne song ka paper apne hath me thame...sedhiyon se utar rahi thi...tabhi koi bhaaagta hua upar ki ore aa raha tha...!!! hum dono takraye...mera paper udd kar...niche gira...vahan par sayad abhi abhi safai hui thi...par pani hone k karan...voh paper bheeg gaya tha...!!! mujhe aur bhi rona aaya...!!! us ladke par mujhe baht gussa aa raha tha...maine nazrain utha kar dekha...voh Raj tha...jo chup chap khada tha...maine us se kuch nahi kaha...vahan se chali gayi...aur corridor me baith kar rone lagi....!!! koi mere paas aa kar khada hua...maine dekha voh Raj hi tha...
 
Raj:- "sorry...maine tumhe dekha nahi tha...!!!
 
maine kuch nahi kaha...
 
us ne voh paper mujhe dikhate hue kaha:- "kya tum yahi gana ganewali thi...!!!"
 
maine phir bhi kuch nahi kaha...!!! voh paper gila ho chuka tha...bass kuch hi letters dikh rahe the...
 
us ne kaha:- "mere sath chalo...
 
main chup rahi...
 
us ne mera hath thama aur mujhe music room me le gaya...aur kaha:- "yahin baitho...main abhi aaya...!!!"
 
voh chala gaya...main vahin baithi rahi...!!! ab mujhe baith kar rona hi toh tha...toh music room me kya burai hai...!!! par voh thodi hi der me aa gaya...us k hath me ek paper tha...us ne mujhe diya...maine dekha...yeh vohi song tha...
 
maine pucha:- "tumhe yeh kahan se mila...???"
 
pahli baar maine us se kuch kaha...us ne mushkura diya...phir kaha:- "vaada karo...kisi se nahi kahogi....!!!"
 
maine "haan" kaha...toh us ne kaha ki:- "yeh song maine hi likha tha ek magazine k liye...!!!"
 
main hairan hui...phir bhi mera chehra udaas tha...
 
us ne kaha:- "ab kya hua...??? tumhe toh tumhara song mil hi gaya hai na...phir udaas kyoun ho...???"
 
maine kaha:- "mujhe is k bol yaad nahi rahte...aur jis sur k sath mujhe mere teacher ne sikhya tha...voh bhi yaad nahi rahte...!!!"
 
voh hassa...phir bola:- "phir bhi tum...compitition me participate karne chali aayi...!!!"
 
maine kaha:- "haan...mujhe yeh cup chahiye thi...!!! mere baba ka b'day hai aaj...mujhe unhe yeh surprise gift deni thi...!!! voh is function me bhi aa rahe hain...!!!"
 
us ne kuch socha...phir kaha:- "thik hai...abhi compitition suru hone me pura 1 ghanta hai...!!! hum phir se try kar sakte hain...!!!"
 
phir us ne mujh se kaha:- "main is song ko gata hun...tum is k bol ko yaad karo...!!! aur haan...yeh mat socho ki yeh gana kisi aur ne likha hai...bal k yeh socho ki yeh gana tumhara hai...tumhara dil ga raha hai...!!! bass yahi soch kar is k bolon ko yaad karo...!!!"
 
phir voh gane laga...
 
 
kyoun lag raha hai

sab kuch naya sa

yeh dil na jane...bin pahchane

hain...baichain...

zindagi me kya mod aaye

kuch paa liya hai...kuch chod aaye

koi juda hai...koi hai paas

khush dhadkanain hain

dil hai udaas...

kaisa safar hai...kaisi dagar hai

yeh dil na jane...bin pahchane

hain...baichain...

kyoun lag raha hai

sab kuch naya sa

soch k jabb bhi maine dekha...

ek dikhi hai mujh ko rekha

is paar khilte dilon ka hai rang

us paar beete dilon ka hai sang

kis ko chunu main

kis ko bhulu main

yeh dil na jane...bin pahchane

hain baichain

kyoun lagg raha hai

sab kuch naya sa...

 
main bass use dekhe ja rahi thi....us gane ko mehsus karr rahi thi...!!! ek ghante kafi the...phir bhi main nervous thi...us ne kaha:- "yeh zahir si baat hai...!!! par yaad rakho ki tumhe yeh cup kyoun chahiye...!!! agar manzil ka pata ho...toh rashta khud b khud mil jata hai...!!!"
 
hairani ki baat thi...par yeh sach bhi tha ki maine voh compitition jeet li...!!! voh sare students k bich baitha mujhe dekh raha tha...!!! jab mujhe cup mila...toh us ne mujhe dur se "congrats" kahne k liye apna thumbs up kiya...!!! us k baad voh mujhe aur kahin dikha hi nahi...!!!
 
baba ko un ka yeh gift baht achha laga...mere liye nayi scooty kharida gaya...!!! par mujhe ise chalane ki izazat nahi thi...!!! mujhe bass baba thoda thoda sikha rahe the...!!! baba ne kaha ki jab main college me jayungi...tab se ise chala sakti hun...!!!
 
main roz apne cycle se school jaya karti thi...!!! us din spl class tha...kareeb 6:30 baje khatam hua...!!! us din halki halki barshat ho rahi thi...!!! hum sabhi class khatam kar k bahar aaye toh dekha...ki meri cycle puncture ho gayi thi...!!! mere sare frnds chale gaye the...!!! school k thode hi duri par ek cycle repairing ka shop tha...maine vohin apna cycle repaire karne ko diya...aur vohin khadi rahi...!!!
 
tabhi vohin se Raj apne scooty se gujra...!!! maine use dekha tha...par sayad us ne mujhe nahi dekha...!!! kuch der baad voh vahan wapas aaya...aur pucha:- "kya hua...???"
 
maine us se kaha...
 
toh us ne kaha ki : "barish badhnewali hai...agar tum kaho...toh main tumhe tumhare ghar tak chod sakta hun...!!! cycle tum kal le jana...!!!"
 
maine dekha ki Raj sahi kah raha tha...!!! thode jhijahk k sath main us k scooty k piche baithi...!!! pure rashte me us ne mujh se kuch khaash baat nahi ki...bass....ghar ka rashta hi pucha karta raha...!!! ghar k paas us ne mujhe jab choda...toh maine kaha k:- "barshat kafi badh gayi hai...tum kuch der k liye yahin ruk jayo...!!! barish tham jaye toh chale jana...!!!"
 
voh mushkuraya aur kaha:- "mujhe barshat pasand hain..aur bheegna bhi...!!!"
 
voh ja raha tha...par pata nahi kya soch kar ruka...aur mujh se kaha:- "tumhara naam 'Suman' hai na...???"
 
maine 'haan' kaha...toh voh mushkura kar chala gaya...!!!
 
phir meri us se kabhi mulakat hi nahi ho payi...!!! kab us ka xam hua aur voh school chod kar chala gaya...mujhe pata hi nahi chala...!!! main use dil hi dil me dhudhti rahi par voh ja chuka tha...!!!
 
phir mere bhi board xams khatam ho gaye...main baht khush thi ki ab main college me padhungi...!!! is bich baba ne naya ghar kharida...aur hum dono vahan sift ho gaye...!!! 2-4 din rahne k baad...vahan meri Swathi didi se mulakat hui....jo hamare ghar k kuch hi duri par raha karte the...!!!
 
maine B.Sc me addmission le liya tha...!!! us din mere college ka pahla din tha...!!! xcited toh thi...par thoda dari hui bhi thi...ragging ki wajah se...!!!
 
main jab college me pahunchi...toh kuch ladke aur ladkiyoun ne mujhe gher liya...tarah tarah k ajeeb sawal puche...mujhe baht rona aa raha tha...!!!
 
tabhi ek ladke ne mujhe ek red rose diya aur dur khade ek aur ladke ki taraf ishaara karte hue kaha:- "jayo...use yeh flower dena...aur I love u bol na..!! aur khabardaar jo hamara naam liya toh...varna baht bura haal karenge tumhara...!!!"
 
main rone lagi...toh ek ladki ne kaha:- "rona band karo...aur jo kaha hai voh karo...aur agar yeh nahi kya toh tumhe sab k samne dance karna padega...!!!"
 
mere paas aur koi option nahi tha...main voh rose le kar us ladke k paas gayi...!!! voh mujhe back kar k khada tha...us k samne do aur ladke khade the...jin se voh kuch baat karr raha tha...!!! main chup chap us k piche khadi rahi...us k ek dost ne sayad kuch ishaara kiya use...us ne turn kar k meri taraf dekha...
 
aur phir kaha:- "tumhe kuch kahna tha...???"
 
maine us k chehre ko nahi dekha...bas us ko voh flower dete hue 'i love u' kaha...aur phir rone lagi...!!!
 
us ne kuch nahi kaha...voh rose us ne mere hathon se liya...aur mera hath thaam kar mujhe kahin le jane laga...main itna dari hui thi ki us k chehre ki taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha...!!!
 
voh un senior students k paas ja kar ruka aur kaha:- " agar Suman ya kisi aur ko phir se is tarah se ragging karte hue dekha...toh main principal se kah kar tum sab ko college se nikalwa dunga...!!!"
 
main us k zuban par apna naam sun kar hairan hui...use dekha toh voh Raj tha...aur mujhe baad me pata chala ki voh college ka president tha...!!!
 
college me roz toh us se mulakaat nahi hoti thi...par jab bhi kabhi hum aamne samne hote toh voh mushkura deta tha...aur us k smile ka jawab main bhi apne smile k sath hi diya karti thi...!!!
 
zindagi aise hi beetne lagi thi...na toh jyada khushi thi aur na hi jyada ghum...!!! bass zindagi aise hi gujarne lagi thi...!!!
 
ek din Swathi didi ne mujhe un k ghar par bulaya...!!! hamare ghar se kuch hi duri par un ka ghar tha...!!!
 
voh Sunday tha...jab main un k ghar gayi...sham k 6 bajj rahe the...!!! Swathi didi mujhe dekh kar baht khush hui thi...aur mujhe apne parents se bhi milwaya...!!!
 
phir Swathi didi ne mujhe apne room me le kar gayi...achanak ghar ka fone baja...!!! voh fone uthane chali gayi...!!! main vohin khadi...diwar par lage hue kuch paintings dekh rahi thi...achanak...mere piche se ek door khula...maine turn kar k dekha...voh Raj tha...ek towel me...sayad wash room se bahan aa raha tha...!!! mujhe dekh kar...phir se ander chala gaya...!!! baad me mujhe Swathi didi ne Raj se bhi introduce karwaya...voh un ka chota bhai tha...!!! hum dono ek dushre ko jante the...par phir bhi pata nahi kyoun hum ek dushre k samne ajnabiyon ki tarah mile...!!!
 
main kabhi kabhi Swathi didi k ghar jati thi...kabhi kabhi voh bhi hamare ghar aati thi...hum dono me baht achhi dosti bann gayi thi....!!! kabhi kabhi main jab un k ghar jati toh door Raj hi kholta...mumhe dekh kar mushkurata...par kuch nahi kahta tha...!!! Par us k nazar me kuch toh khaash tha...jise main mehsus karti thi...!!! mujhe us k nazar ki pahchan hone lagi thi...!!! kabhi kabhi aisa lagta tha ki jaise us ki ankhen mera intezaar karr rahi thi...!!! phir bhi pata nahi kyoun kabhi bhi hum ek dushre se khul kar baat nahi karr paye...!!!
 
phir ek din achanak Swathi didi ki shaadi tai ho gayi...!!! sagai aur shaadi jaldi me karni padi...kyoun ki swathi didi ki shaadi jiss se ho rahi thi...unhe new york me job mil gayi thi...aur shaadi k turant baad hi unhe jana tha...!!!
 
main un dino Swathi didi k sath hamesha raha karti thi...!!! shaadi k do din pahle sagai thi...!!! aur main aunty ko kitchen me help karti rahi...!!! Raj bhi kaam me baht Bz tha...!!! us ne Army join kar li thi...!!! shaadi k turant baad use I.M.A jana tha...!!!
 
sagaiwale din...dawat k waqt...main kitchen me thi...jab voh vahan aaya tha...mere hathon se sweets ka trey lete hue...ek baar mere chehre ko dekh mushkuraya tha...!!!
 
us din kai baar hum dono ki nazrain mili...aur ek dushre me ulajhti rahi...!!! kabhi kabhi main use...mujhe chup k chup k dekhte hue paya...!!! par jab bhi hamari nazrain mili...voh kuch kahte hue chup ho jata tha...!!!
 
raat bhar me thik se so nahi payi...!!! har 15 min me chaunk kar ankh khul jati thi...aisa lagta tha...ki jaise main kuch kho rahi hun...aur kuch pal baad aisa lagta tha...mere paas kuch anmol hai...!!!
 
raat bhar neend nahi aayi...toh main chat par chali gayi...!!! Swathi didi ka chat...hamare chat se dikhai deta tha...!!! maine hairan hui Raj ko vahan dekh kar...jo pareshan sa lag raha tha...aur raat bhar chat pe tahal raha tha...!!!
 
phir Swathi didi k shaadi wale din...ham dono pandal k paas...sath sath khade the...!!! phir us ne chup k se mujhe kaha ki :- "Dehradun jane se pahle mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai Suman...!!!"
 
par hum dono chah kar bhi mil nahi paye...kyoun ki shaadi me kuch hungama ho gaya...aur us k baad use us k behn ko chodne us k sasural jana pada...!!!
 
par jab voh Dehradun ja raha tha...tab main gayi thi us se milne...station par...!!! voh bhaag kar aaya tha mere paas...!!! mere hathon se phul liye...aur kaha ki main use khat likhun...!!! maine us ki baat maani...use khat likhe...voh bhi un ka jawab bhejta tha...!!! apne acadamy k bare me...aur apne bare me likha karta tha...!!!
 
un khaton me kuch khaash toh nahi hota tha...par phir bhi voh mere liye baht khaash hua karti thi...!!! isi tarah se kuch saal gujar gaye...hum sirf dost bann kar rah gaye...!!! is bich meri padhai khatam ho gayi...aur baba ne meri shaadi tai kar di...!!!
 
main yeh baat use khat me likh kar batana chahti thi...!!! phir bhi nahi bata payi...mujhe laga ki sayad jo main use le kar feel karti hun...sayad voh mere bare me aisa kuch nahi sochta ho...!!! aur agar maine aisa kuch bhi likha toh sayad main us ki dosti bhi kho dun...!!! isiliye main chup rahi...baba ko bhi kuch nahi kaha...!!! voh ab jyada khush rahne lage the...!!! aur baba k chehre ki ek bhi mushkurahat k liye main puri zindagi anshuyon k sath beetane k liye taiyaar thi...!!! us saal maine sirf new year par use wish kiya tha...aur us k baad meri shaadi tai ho gayi thi...!!!
 
phir achanak ek din Swathi didi apne husband k sath ghumne aayi...aur un k aane k do din baad Raj bhi aaya...!!! main ab un k ghar jyada nahi jati thi...!!! kya faida...khud ko taklif de kar... voh bhi ek aise rishte k liye...jo ulajhte hue jazbaton me kaid ho kar rah gaye the...!!!
 
Ek din Swathi didi hamare ghar aayi...mujhe un k sath movie dekhne jane ka zidd kiya... maine mana kiya...par voh nahi maani...baba ne bhi Swathi didi k sath jane ko kaha...!!!hum log film dekhne gaye...
 
raj drive karr raha tha...us k paas us k jeeja ji baithe hue the...aur piche main...swathi didi k sath baithi hui thi...!!! raj barbaar mirror k through mujhe dekh raha tha...main ignore karti rahi...aisa lagg raha tha ki jaise koi mere dil par hathode se vaar karr raha ho...
 
hall me Raj mere paas hi baitha hua tha...!!! film k bich me us ne sirf ek hi baar mujh se kaha tha ki:- "kya tum is shaadi se khush ho...???"
 
maine koi jawab nahi diya...chup rahi...!!! mere khushi aur ghum ka thikana mujhe hi nahi tha...toh main use kya jawab deti...!!!
 
movie khatam hui toh Swathi didi ne dinner ka plan banaya...!!! par maine yeh kah kar mana karr diya ki mera fast hai aur main bahar kuch nahi kha sakti...!!! voh udaas ho gayi...par Raj ne ek plan banaya...us ne kaha:- "di...tu jeeja ji k sath dinner par chali ja...!!! vaise bhi main aur Suman kabab me haddi kyoun bane...!!! hum dono taxi le kar ghar chale jate hain...aap apna dinner khatam kar k aa jana...!!!"
 
phir sabhi ko yahi thik laga...!!! main aur Raj...taxi me ghar aaye...voh rashte bhar chup tha...kuch bhi nahi kaha us ne mujhe...dushre hi din use wapas jana tha...!!! maine bhi us se koi baat karne ki koshish hi nahi ki...!!! tabhi Baba ka fone aaya ...un k kisi frnd ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho gayi thi...voh unhe le kar hospital ja rahe the...!!! mere paas ghar ki dushri chabi hai ki nahi ...vohi puchne k liye fone kiya tha...!!!
 
jab mera ghar aaya toh Raj vohin utar gaya...mere sath...aur kahne laga:- "mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai...!!!"
 
raat kafi ho chuki thi...maine use ander aane ko kaha...!!!
 
hum dono ander aaye...maine use baithne k liye kaha...par voh nahi baitha...!!!
 
kafi der tak mujhe yun hi dekhta raha...phir mujhe se kaha:- "is shaadi k liye 'haan' karne se pahle kamm se kamm ek baar mujh se puch toh leti...???"
 
maine us ki ankhon me dekha...ek dard tha us me...ek bebasi...ek tanhai nazar aayi mujhe...
 
maine dhire se jawab diya:- "kyoun...??? main kyoun puchti tum se...???"
 
Raj...thoda kareeb aaya mere...aur mujh se kaha:- "tum janti ho is ka jawab...phir bhi...puch rahi ho...???"
 
Suman:- "main kuch bhi nahi janti Raj...kuch bhi nahi janti main...!!!kya rishta hai mera tum se...yeh nahi janti...kis rishte se main tumhe khat likhti hun...yeh bhi nahi janti...aaj tumhe apne kareeb dekh kar dil kyoun ro raha hai...yeh bhi nahi janti...!!!"
 
main khud ko sambhal nahi payi...apne hathon se apne chehre ko chupa kar rone lagi...be-tahasha rone lagi...!!!
 
voh baitha...mere paas...mere hathon ko thama...mere anshun poche...aur kaha:- "hamara rishta kabhi kisi naam ka mahotaz nahi tha Suman...isiliye sayad is baat ko main kabhi ehmiyat nahi de paya...!!! par sach toh yeh hai ki main tum se baht pyar karta hun...
 
Suman:- "par main tum se nafrat karti hun Raj...!!! kyoun nahi kaha tab...jab mera khud par haq tha...!!!aur kab tak main tumhara intezaar karti...
 
Raj:- "abhi bhi der nahi hui hai...sirf sagai hi toh hui hai...!!! main tumhare Baba se baat karunga...!!!"
 
Suman:- "nahi...ab baht der ho chuki hai...!!! main baba ko achhi tarah se janti hun...ek baar kisi se commitment kar liya toh voh use jarur pura karenge...!!! hamesha usoolon k sath rahte aaye hain...aur voh unhe baht pyara hai...!!! sayad voh tumhari baat maan jayenge...par aage ki zindagi voh ek ghutan k sath jeeyenge...!!! aur main unhe is tarah se nahi dekh sakti...!!! jis din meri shaadi hogi na Raj...us din is Suman ki maut ho jayegi...ek dushri Suman...is majbur zindagi ko jeeyegi...aur jab us ki voh zindagi bhi khatam ho jayegi na...tab voh in aashmano me kahin tumhara intezaar karegi...aur mujhe yakeen hai...tab hum jarur milenge...!!"
 
Raj ne mujhe samjhane ki koshish ki...baba se baat karna chata tha voh...par main dari hui thi...Baba k reaction ko le kar...un k alawa is duniya me mera aur koi tha bhi toh nahi...
 
dushre hi din use wapas jana tha...jab voh mere ghar k samne se gujra...main apne khidki k paas khadi thi...dono ki nazrain mili...dono ki ankhon me dard tha aur anshun bhi...!!! ek baar dil ne kaha ki sare bandhan tod kar us ki ho jayun...!!! par us k baad Baba ka kya...???voh hamari akhiri mulakaat thi...!!!
 
us din bhi baht zoron se barshat ho rahi thi...main apne khidki se bahar jhaank rahi thi...sirf 9 din bache the meri shaadi ko...ghar me rishtedaar bhare hue the!!! barshat mujhe hamesha achhi lagti thi...par us din mujhe barshat dard de raha tha...
 
 
bahar andhera tha...!!! achanak maine dekha..koi...gate khol kar hamare ghar aaya tha...!!! main niche gayi...baba candel jala kar baithe hue the...!!!
 
 
maine un se kaha:- baba...main door par koi hai...!!!"
 
 
tabhi darwaze par dastak hui...baba torch le kar gaye...darwaza khola...tabhi current bhi aa gaya...!!! par main hairan thi...door par Raj khada tha...pura bheega hua...us k chehre se lagg raha tha...jaise voh ander hi ander koi jung ladd raha hai...
 
 
us k baad...mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi...kya hua...kaise hua....!!! bass itna yaad hai ki Raj ne hum dono k us ankahe rishte k bare me baba ko bataya...sare rishtedaron k samne...!!! baba ko pahli baar itna dukhi dekha maine...!!! voh dukhi the meri wajah se...kyoun ki maine yeh baat un se chupayi thi...
 
unhone kaha:-"tune aaj mujhe paraya karr diya beta...bilkul paraya...!!! tune yeh kaise soch liya ki tere pyar k sath main khush nahi rahunga...!!! jiss bachhi k honthon par ek mushkurahat lane k liye maine apni sari mushkurahat us k naam kar di ho...us ki mushkurahat cheen kar kya main kabhi bhikhush rah payunga...??? kya itna hi samjha hai tune apne baba ko...??? mujhe aaj dukh ho raha hai...ki na toh tu mujhe kavbhi samajh payi aur na hi main tujhe kabhi samajh payi...!!! agar tu Raj se pyar karti hai toh tujhe... khud mujh se kahna chahiye tha...!!!par tune toh... mujhe pal bhar me hi paraya bana diya...!!!"
 
 
aur aaj....pure 6 mahine baad...!!! baba ko phir se dukhi dekh rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki main un se dur ja rahi hun...!!!
 
 
sab kuch itna jaldi jaldi hua ki pata hi nahi chala...!!! meri shaadi dushrehi din ho gayi RAJ se...!!! kyoun ki voh sirf ek din ki chutti le kar aaya tha...use raat ki train se wapas jana tha...!!! isiliye mere baba aur us k father ne mil kar jaldi se sara arrengement karwaya...aur hum dono ki shaadi karwa di gayi...!!! hamari shaadi khatam hui sham k 7 baje aur Raj ka train tha shaam k 8 baje...!!! hum dono toh thik se ek dushre se baat bhi nahi karr paye...!!!
 
 
Raj ki posting ho chuki thi border par...use jald se jald jana tha...isiliye bina kisi humgame k shaadi kar di gayi...mandir me...!!! humain bhi tym hi nahi mila...ek dushre se baat karne k liye...!!!
 
 
raat ko 8 baje thi us ki train...!!! vaise bhi voh achanak aaya tha...aur achanak ja bhi raha tha...!!! main bass...us k room khadi use dekh rahi thi...!!! voh apna luggage pack karr raha tha...
 
 
us k jeeja ji ne awaz diya...jaldi chalne k liye...
 
 
us ka kaam bhi khatam ho chuka tha...
 
 
us ne meri taraf dekha...maine kuch nahi kaha...apni nazrain jhukayai...voh mere kareeb aaya...aur kaha:- "yeh raat aisi nahi honi chahiye thi...par...hum jaldi milenge...!!! I love u suman...pata hai ki maine yeh kahte hue baht der kar di...vaada karta hun...ab koi galati nahi karunga...!!!"
 
 
maine mushkurate hue...us ki ankhon me dekha...par voh mera dard samajh raha tha...meri anshunyon se...
 
 
us ne dhire mujhe apne kareeb lata hua kaha:- apna khayal rakhna...!!!"
 
 
us ne Suman k cheeks ko kiss kiya aur chala gaya...!!! maine khidki se jhanka...voh car me baith chuka tha...akhiri vaar us ne mujhe hath hilate hue 'bye' kaha...!!! mere ankhon me anshun abhi bhi the...
 
 
us k baad Raj kabhi kabhi hi mujhe fone kar pate the...vahan se network baht bz aata tha...!!!! aur aaj 6 mahine baad......
 
 
sab kuch badal chuka hai...mehendi ka rang bhi nahi raha...par voh khushbu abhi tak baki hai...!!! kisi k intezaar me in ankhon ko ek sukun ki talash hai...

 

(mujhe pata hai ki aap sab kya soch rahe honge...RAJ...border par jo gaya tha...matlab kuch BAHT BURA...LOL!!! come on guys...dis is Priya...bura toh kuch ho hi nahi sakta...aur agar kuch hua bhi toh main hun na...use thik karne k liye...)

 

train ruki...main utri...apna saman niche rakha...idhar udhar dekha...kahin koi nazar nahi aa raha tha...!!! piche se kisi ne mere kandhe par hath rakha...maine turn kiya...voh RAJ the...

 

mujhe kuch kahne ki jarurat hi nahi thi...!!! us ne mujhe kafi tightly hug karte hue bass itna hi kaha:- "love u SUMAN...!!!aaj se hum kabhi alag nahi honge...!!!"

 

Dehradun me Raj ki posting ho chuki hai...!!! jitna main baichain thi...us se kahin jyada baichain voh tha...mujh se milne k liye...!!! use chutti nahi mili...toh mujh se kaha ki main hi aa jayun...!!!

 

aaj hum sath hain...aur baht khush bhi...!!! ek galati ki thi hum ne...ek dushre se kabhi kah nahi paye the...apni dil ki baat...!!! sayad yeh mohabbat ka jazba tha...jis ki wajah se raj ne yeh himmat ki aur baba se baat ki...varna sayad hamari zindagi yun na hoti...!!! kabhi kabhi khamishi...zindagi bhar ka dard ban jata hai...!!!

 

Suman...khidki k paas khadi...bahar jhaankte hue...apne zindagi ki puri kahani soch rahi thi...!!! piche se Raj aaya...use hug karta hue kaha:- "baba ki yaad aa rahi hai...???"

 

Suman mushkurayi aur kaha:- " aaj hui thi un se baat...achhe hain voh...main thik se pahunchi ya nahi yeh jann na chate the...!!!"

 

Raj:- "un se milne ka mann toh nahi karta hai na...kyoun ki main tumhe apne se alag nahi karnewala...!!! jinhe bhi tumhari yaad aaye...voh khud aajaye tum se milne...!!! ya phir voh wait kare...tabb tak....jab tak mujhe chuttiyan nahi mil jati...!!! mujhe tum se baht kuch kahna hai....baht kuch sunn na hai...!!!"

 

Suman mushkurayi...aur kaha:- "mujhe bhi tum se baht kuch kahna hai Raj...!!!"

 

she hugged him...n he kissed her forehead...

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plz do comment...ya phir Vijay bhaiya ka best option toh hai hi..."LIKE" button ka...use ishtemal karo...Big smile

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maaf karna yaar...maine yeh shot yahan par bhejne ki gushtakhi ki...!!! actually maine aise hi kuch SHOTS last year likha tha...jab mujhe viral infection hua tha...!!! par baad me mujhe inhe padh kar laga...infection dimag par hua hai...isiliye maine ise post nahi kiya tha...!!! par meri czn sis Gauri ne mujhe kasamm de di ise post karne k liye isiliye karr rahi hun...!!! ab plz naraz mat hona...galiyan mat dena...dena hai toh us ko do...!!!
 
ab bura lage toh jamm kar khinchai karna...jaisa ki aap sab ko karna achha lagta hai...!!! agar achha lage toh bol na...phir se bore karungi...varna........LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
love u all
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priii this was so beautiful.. the emotions were perfect, the turmoil, sentiments...love, pain, sacrifice...tears.. everything was present... it was just too good... the situation was very well put forth.. the moral of the story is the best part.. according to me the moral of this ff is 'Never hide your feelings from the one's you  love..Or may be there will be a time when you will be given no chance to explain'... raj & suman did get their second chance but life does not give everyone a second chance.. so one should never hesitate from telling what is in your heart.. it was very sweet... i really liked it very much....ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapDo posts more shot ff's often.. would love to read them....aur haan thank your cousin from my side kyunke because of her you have posted the wonderful one shot...Smile


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Nice one Priya...!!!!

Aise hi shots post karti rehna...!!!!

And I loved the title...!!!!

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awesome update priyaClap. loved it.

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very very very...angry with u di.....Angry Angry Angry 
 
tune is shot ka romantic part EDIT kyoun kiya...Angry Angry Angry
 
tu bahat buri hai...Angry Angry Angry
 
ab main tujh se kabhiiiiiiiiii baat nahi karungi...kattiiiiiii Angry Angry Angry

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Originally posted by Gauri_s

very very very...angry with u di.....Angry Angry Angry 
 
tune is shot ka romantic part EDIT kyoun kiya...Angry Angry Angry
 
tu bahat buri hai...Angry Angry Angry
 
ab main tujh se kabhiiiiiiiiii baat nahi karungi...kattiiiiiii Angry Angry Angry


pri ab yeh kya baat hui... chalo post the unedited version.. abhi post karo.... i'am waiting....

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