Joined: 19 February 2010
hey kajenians, kasuians, kashians, KSGianz simple evrbdy who loves karan singh grover and jenni winget and are ardent fans of AR!!!
i have been spending my tym reading the lovely FF'z posted in india forums and i must say tht all those lovely peices are very commendable. this is my 1st tym writing fiction as i am an non-fiction writer!! i just wanted to bring out my POV....i am not half as gud as the other fictioners, so plzz bear with me!!
AND PLSS DO KEEP TELLING ME HW BAD IT IS OR HW I CAN DO IT ANY BTTR....OR EVN SO THT DO U WANT ME TO CONTINUE OR NOT???PLS...
the karva chauth is done with and ARMAAN thought tht it was disastarous for unifying aid-riddhima. sid as usual blamed riddhima , shook his head in disgust and moved on......riddhima broke down unable to understand wht had gone wrong???
Armaan couldnt tear his eyes away from her, she was the one person who meant the world to him and there she was crumpled on the floor, sobbing her heart out!!! if it was before he would never have let her cry lyk tht. but, today was obviously different coz things had changed drastically. it was just a few days ago tht it had finally sunken into him tht riddhima was no longer his. she wasnt anymore the person he ever knew. as riddhima had said his BASKET was no more. the only he could now see was mrs.riddhima modi. but, it was also true tht even today his heat throbbed only for her!! he could do anything for her happiness, he was ready to lose everything for her.
he now blamed himself for everything. if only he hadnt come back, if only he had died, today riddhima would have been a much happier person. then, he told himself now is your turn to make things better, unite sid and riddhima.they are destined to be and as riddhima had said ARMAAN is her PAST and SID is her PRESENT. mayb......just mayb......they were destined to be together!!!! now, there was nothing more to be said and explained........the message was CRYSTAL CLEAR.........
"HE HAD TO LEAVE SANJEEVANI, HAD TO GET OUT OF HER LYF!! FOR HER TO BE HAPPY AGAIN!!"
and now tht was exactly wht he was going to do. just as he was thinking so, his phone rang. he checked the ID....it was dr.kirti. he wondered why she was calling him now??? he received the call.......
dr.K: hello, dr.armaan
armaan: yes, mam
dr.K: aapko aur dr.riddhima ko abhi sanjeevani aana chahiye, yahan ek bahut badi emergency hogayi hain.
armaan: i will be ther dr.Kirti, but i have no idea abt dr.modi
dr.K: its ok....pls start soon, there are no other senior doctors here to assist me...
armaan: but, dr.kirti who is the pateint???
dr.K: vo, media tycoon vinay chopra ki beti hain, pls jaldi kijiye. condition bigadti hi jaa rahi hain!!
armaan: bas 5 minute mam, mein raaste mein hu.......
armaan was driving as fast as possible. dr.kirti certainly sounded very tensed on the phone. wht was the complication that dr.kirti was worried abt?? he reached sanjeevani, went to his locker picked up his belongings and hurried towards the reception where he was supposed to meet dr.kirti for breifing.
the reception was abuzz with the news of the tycoons daughter being admitted there. armaan went to sister stella and enquired
armaan: sister stella
s.s: ji, dr.armaan bataeinen......
armaan: aapko koi idea hain ki mujhe dr.kirti kahan milegi???
s.s: vo yahin aa rahi hain. unhon ne mujhe bola ki mein aapko yahi unka wait karne ke liye kehdu
armaan: ji, teekh hain. THNXX
dr.kirti spotting armaan at the reception moves towards him to breif abt the case
dr.K: thynx dr.armaan for reaching here so soon
armaan: its ok mam, kya emergency hain??case kya hain???
dr.K: mein dr.riddhima ki wait kar rahi hu.vo abhi pahunch thi hi hogi.mein dono ko saath mein bata dungi.
armaan: yes, mam( wondering in wht state ridz would be)
dr.K: ye lijiye, vo bhio aagayi.pls both of u follow me.
they follow dr.kirti to her cabin. in the meantime armaan glances at ridzi to check if she was ok. looking at her only he could make out tht she was broken on the inside but as always her pateints came 1st for her and hence, she had come.
dr.K: yeah actually yeh ek neurology ka case hain. hamari pateint media tycoon vinay chopra ki beti sara chopra hain. vo 20 saal ki hain, she has selective amnesia and a state of mind in which vo dheere dheere apna manasik santulan kho sakthi hain.
armaan: ye.....yeh.......kaise hua??
dr.K: she met with an accident. external injury zyada nahin hain. par kyunki ye ek brain injury hain isiliye kuch keh nahin sakte!!
ridzi: mam, agar ye neurology ka case hain toh how can i be of any help??
dr.K: dr.riddhima abhi doctors ki kami hain so for the tym being aapko mujhe assist karna padega.
[ armaan is lost in his own thoughts, this was the exact same thing tht had hapnd to him. he felt sorry for the young girl. the thoughts of getting through the disease tormented him]
dr.kirti noticing armaans soft expression and knowing exactly wht he might be thinking of softens a little and goes to armaan and places her hand on his shoulder.
this shakes both armaan and riddhima out of their thoughts. ridzi is surprised to see dr.kirti's concern for armaan and dsnt understand why???
armaan snaps out of his thoughts and smiles sadly at dr.k, she nods conveying tht she understands.
dr.K: dont worry dr.armaan, hum saath mein inhe teekh kardenge, inhe ek nayi zindagii jeene ka hosla denge.
armaan: ji, mam
dr.K: maine issi vagah se chaha ki aap iss case mein rahe kyunki aap ko hi inka hosla bhadaana hoga. aapko unke saath relate karna hain.mujhe pura bharosa ki aap inkon jald hi teekh karenge. apne toh yahi thana tha na ki kisi aur ko aap jitna dard na sehna pade aur isse ladkar jeetna hain!! toh aap hi iss kaam ko sahi anjaam de sakte hain!!
armaan: ji, dr.kirti aapne sahi kahan. jab mein teekh hua tha tabb meine apne aapse wada kiya tha ki kisi aur ais emareez ko meri zaroorat pade toh mein duji baar na sochte hue uska madad karunga.mein apni poori koshish karunga!!
dr.K: mujhe aapse yahin umeed thi. mr.chopra ne canada se kisi specialist ko bulaya hain aap unke saath kaam karenge. until then dr.riddhima aap iss case par hain. unke aana ke baad aap apne duties resume kar sakthe hain!!
ridzi: yes, mam
dr.K: toh chaliye, hamare pateint se milte hain!!!
coming up: who is this sara chopra??
ridzi'z regret and armaan's thoughts........
Joined: 19 February 2010
PART 1-PG 1
PART 2- PG 4
PART 3- PG 6
PART 4 - PG 8
PART 5- PG 10
PART 6- PG 13
PART 7- PG 17
PART 8- PG 19
PART 9- PG 21
PART 10- PG 25
PART 11- PG 27
PART 12- PG 29
PART 13- PG 31
PART 14- PG 33
PART 15- PG 36
PART 16- PG 40
NOTE- PG 45
PART 17- PG 47
PART 18--PG 49
PART 19-PG 54
NOTE- PG 57
PART 20- PG 58
PART 21- PG 60
PART 22-PG 63
PART 23-PG 67
PART 24- PG 70
PART 25- PG 72
PART 26- PG 75
PART 27-PG 78
PART 29- PG 86
PART 30- PG 89
PART 31-PG 92
PART 32- PG 96
NOTE- PG 100
PART 33- PG 105
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