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Time-short story

Time'sometimes its good sometimes its bad'.sometimes its favourable sometimes it's not'.when we want the time to run slow'that we can treasure the moment for a long period'we feel like the time is flowing too fast. And when we want the time to run fast as we don't want are bad moments to stay for long time we feel that the time has stopped'Time never listen to us. It is independent as it does whatever it feels like. Times always play games with us. But it also gives so many good moments that we forget the bad ones. Charles Dickens once wrote, that "time and tide waited for no man." Time is so important in our lives. I realized it when I shifted to New York and met someone who is a sweet beautiful lovely brat with whom I got married "accidentally" and my life changed'.

Jab We Met

31st December 2008,The new year party was going on and everyone was getting highly drunk. I never thought with the end of the year everything would change in my life. I met Riddhima a sweet beautiful girl'.We both went with our best friends'Riddhima with her friend Muskaan'and Me with Rahul. We all were seriously not in our senses as we had THE VODKA DRINKING COMPETETION. We all participated. I never thought that a girl like Riddhima could drink so much that we became JOINT WINNERS ?.We four started to roam the whole city. We all were talking about our life partners'like who is our dream person..Seeing Riddhima I don't know what happened that I unconsciously proposed Riddhima by a ring which I was wearing. She accepted it. As we all were in a drunk state'.including Rahul and Muskan. Rahul and Muskan recorded our so called marriage video and then we went to a hotel nearby as we were too tired'we booked two rooms' In one room Rahul and I and in the other room Muskaan and Riddhima'..and atlast we retired to bed'.

A New Year A New Day A new Morning And A new Life'..

We got up late afternoon'our head was aching badly. I just remembered that I got married to Riddhima the girl I met yesterday. Shit. I m no more a bachelor. Holy crap. What did I do'shit shit shit 'urghhhhh. I felt so frustrated. I went down and saw Riddhima having coffee'I went up to her and said " ummmm HI'"..first time I was nervous while talking to a girl..I could understand that she was also nervous . She replied "hello"'I don't know seeing the ring in her hand I felt angry "you know something we shouldn't have drink'Its like it was your fault more as you came close to me'see whatever happened yesterday please forget it"'..i could see her face colour turning red in anger " Armaan you B@#$%^&. I m so not interested in you'It was not only my mistake but yours too'I give a damn to this marriage'..you are such a dog MR.ARMAAN MALLIK..".."Same to you B@#$%" replied armaan angrily. "Give me the coin I want to play in casino'as it was all your fault that I left my purse in the club yesterday"'he gave her 200$ coin to Riddhima.and said "GOODBYE YOU BRAT"

Muskaan and Rahul were shocked to see them like that..Muskan and riddhima went inside to gamble in the jackpot machine'.Armaan and Rahul also went inside'Riddhima put the coin into the machine while Armaan came to her and said "Listen Riddhima'no one should know about the marriage as I know you will tell it to everyone as you know that I m a rich handsome and a Well known person'.you will be after me'so just get lost OK"'..Riddhima was shocked'she was fuming in anger'She said" you F*&^%$# A@#$%^&... you B#$%^&*'you BLAH BLAH BLAH" Using the dirtiest slangs he screamed to armaan in front of everyone'She pressed the enter button of the jackpot machine and started to leave'..as she thought it was useless to stay there'Armaan also started to walk away but DHANTANNA.."SOUNDS"'3 million DOLLAR JACKPOT'riddhima went towards it'and armaan also did the same'It was armaan's coin by which Riddhima played and it was Riddhima who played the game she went towards it'both won the money'They both together was given the CHEQUE as they were married. But Armaan and Riddhima individually wanted the full amount of money. They were quarrelling like Tom and Jerry. Riddhima said "you have to give me the money".."FINE..TAKE IT BECAUSE I M NOT LIKE YOU RIDDHIMA'."'..Riddhima got the money'.but she felt bad how Armaan said her'..she needed the money or else the ORPHANAGE she handles will be broken and the land will be taken by someone else who wants to make a mall'.the money was so important to her and there was NO TIME left'as she had to submit it to the land owner by 2nd January'' but she was not in any mood to explain all this to Armaan'..HE IS NO ONE TO HER'Both moved in their own ways'..and went back to their OWN OLD LIFE.


Precap- Coincidental or Incidental meeting''

Note- this was supposed to be a one shot'but I didn't get time to write'I have not written the next part yet..so I will change this to a short story'and please do comment'DO NOT expect me to update soon'because I m very lazy'..and my brain too is lazy''so till then
read this




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Edited by choco_pie92 - 26 May 2010 at 4:49am

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Posted: 15 May 2010 at 9:27am | IP Logged
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Woah di!!! What a start!!!  ClapClapClap Loved it
I hope you will give a happy ending to this.....
N haan update soon I don't care if you are lazy. Such an interesting start n you expect us to wait? Angry
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
So it means in clear words....
UPDATE SOON
Thanks for the PM
Take care....

P.S: Don't mind but...........Update soon LOL


Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 May 2010 at 9:34am

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reserved,...will comment after reading it

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hey this is the story from what happens in vegas isnt it????
anyways wud lov reading it abour AR!!!
continue asap..........and do pm me!!
 
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Originally posted by armaanrox

hey this is the story from what happens in vegas isnt it????
anyways wud lov reading it abour AR!!!
continue asap..........and do pm me!!
 
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the introduction is similar but the entire story is different

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hey
great concept
would love to read more  Smile
cont soon
love shai


Edited by addicted_93 - 15 May 2010 at 9:45am

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