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Posted: 14 May 2010 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Hula Friends,SmileWinkBig smile
 
This is My First OS On Siddhima.I thank all the Siddhimaholics on I-F coz without your support ,motivation & inspiration,I would'nt had written this OS.This OS is really close to my Heart.
Hope you all like it!!!
 
The OS goes this way.
Riddhima is upset with Sid's behaviour & Anger & she decides to leave Sid's house.
Riddhima is leaving Sid's house & Sid this time is not  trying to stop her.He is still angry on her.
Riddhima leaves Sid's house.She goes to her house to stay with her mom & dad.
Sid is now alone in his house.
Riddhima is also feeling bad in her own house.She does'nt show her emotion but she is missing Sid.
Sid is feeling Alone now.The Aloneness(tanhai) is eating him up now.
Meanwhile,Junior TJ (Tamanna) is feeling very sad in lonavla.
She is missing Sid & Riddhima.
 
It's Night time.
TJ calls Sid on his cell no.
Sid picks up the phone.
TJ :- Hello Sid bhaiyya.
Sid :- TJ.
TJ :- Kaise ho Sid bhaiyya?
Sid :- Main theek hu. Par tum kaise hoo?itni raat ko phone kaisey kiya?Sab theek toh hai naa?
TJ :- yahaan sab theek hai Sid bhaiyya.bas aapki aur Riddhima didi ki yaad aa rahi thi.isliye phone kiya.
TJ :- Aap Riddhima didi ke saath mujhe milne kyon nahi aaye?mujhse naraaz ho kya?
Sid :- Main wahaan aaya tha,TJ.
TJ :- agar aap yahaan aaye toh mujhe bina mile chale kyun gayye?
Sid :- Wahaan jo kuch bhi dekha,woh dekh ne ke baad ek pal ke liye bhi ruk ne ki himmat nahi hui.
TJ :-Par aisa kya dekha aapne Sid bhaiyya jo aap bina batayein hi chale gayye?
Sid :-Kya batata.yeh ki meri Riddhima ko koi aur utha raha tha.
TJ after listening this is crying on phone.
Sid :- Kya hua TJ,ro kyun rahi ho?
TJ :- Sab meri galti hain.
Sid :- Tumhari galti.Kaunsi galti?
TJ :- Naa hi main Riddhima didi ko jungle main leke jaati ,naa hi aate waqt woh uss Mud-Pond main gir jaati,naa hi unke pair(leg) ko mooch aa jati aur naa hi Armaan unhe aisa utha raha hota.
Ye sab meri wajah se hua.Iss sab main Riddhima didi ki koi galti nahin hain.
Sid :- Kya keh rahi hoon,TJ?
Sid is shocked & surprised to hear all this.
TJ :- Mujhe maaf kar do Sid bhaiyya,I'm  Sorry.
Riddhima didi toh aap se bahut pyaar karti hain.
Sid :- Kya Riddhima ne tumhe aisa kahaan ki woh mujhse  pyaar karti hain?
TJ :- Sab bhi bateein kehne se hi pata nahi chalti.
Maine Riddhima didi ki aankhon main aap ke liye pyaar dekha hain.
Sid :- Main bhi Riddhima se bahut pyaar kata hoon.TJ.
TJ :- Sid bhaiyya, ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena aur Riddhima didi ko hamesha khush rakh na.Main ab phone rakh thi hoon.Jald hi aap aur Riddhima didi mujh se milne aana.main aap dono se bahut pyaar karti hoon.Bye.
Sid :- Thanks TJ.Main hamesha tumhara shukra guzar rahoonga.Main aur Riddhima jald hi tumhe milne aayenge.I love you TJ.Apna khayal rakh na .B-Bye!!!
The Phone convo b/w Sid & TJ ends.
 
MeanWhile Sid is feeling bad that he did'nt trusted Riddhima.
Sid is saying to himself,"Kyun Riddhima main har baar tumhe galat samaj leta hoon.Kyun maine tum pe bharosa nahin kiya?Maine hamesha tumhe takleef di hain,par ab nahin.Main aa raha hoon Riddhima tumse milne,Main aa raha hoon.
Sid puts up his shoes ,takes the keys of his car & is coming to meet Riddhima.
This time Sid is looking more focussed & determined than before.
Sid arrives at Riddhima's house.
It's late Night.
Sid :- Mujhe har haal main aaj tumse milna hain Riddhima.Bahut mushkil se himmat juta paaya hoon.chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye,aaj tumhe mile bagair main yahhan se nahi jaaonga.
Sid Rings the bell.
Riddhima is in her room & Shashank & Padma are sitting in hall.
Shashank & Padma are worried that itna raat ko kaun aaya hain?
Shashank opens the door.
Shashank :- Sid tum.itni raat ko.Sab theek toh hai naa.
Padma :- Kya baat hain Sid beta.
Sid :- Aaj se sab kuch theek ho jayega.Main Riddhima se milna chahta hoon.
Shashank :- par  kya Riddhima iss haalat main tumhari baat sunegi.
Sid :- Agar aaj Riddhima ko apne Dil ki baat nahin keh paya toh kabhi nahin keh paaonga.Aap chinta mat kijiye mom & dad.Main sab kuch theek kar doonga.
Shashank :- Jao Sid,Riddhima se milo aur apne dil ki baat keh do.
 
Sid comes to Riddhima's room.Riddhima sees him.
Riddhima :- kyun aaye hoon yahaan?chale jaao.mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.
Sid :- chala jaaunga Riddhima.Par aakhri baar jo main kehne aaya hoon woh sun toh lo.
Sid :- Maine hamesha tumha galat samjha.Tum par shaq kiya.par aaj mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hain Riddhima.Tumne hamesha iss shaadi ko aur mujhe dil se apnaya hain.Mujhe TJ ne sab kuch bata diya hain.
There are tears in Sid's eyes at this moment.He fells down on his knees.I'm sorry Riddhima.Ho sak toh mujhe maaf kar do.
Riddhima itni der se bahut gusse me thi but after seeing Sid's tears & Sid on his knees,Riddhima's Anger is fading away.
Sid is very Guilty of his acts & The Guilt was being noticed by Riddhima in Sid's eyes.
Riddhima :- Main tumhe maaf karti hoon Sid.Tum mere pati hoon aur tum mere liye possesive hona  ye natural hain.
Sid :- I'm proud of you,Riddhima.Garv hai mujhe tum par.I'm so lucky that tum meri zindagi main aayi.
Riddhima :- Main bhi bahut lucky hoon Sid jo tum meri zindagi main har waqt mere saath the.
Mujhe iss baat ka garv hai ki tum mere pati hoon.
Sid & Riddhima both Hug each other.
Sid :- Ghar chale Riddhima.
Riddhima :- Haan Sid.
Riddhima & Sid pack Riddhima's bag & come out of room.
 
Shashank :- kya hua,sab theek hain.
Sid :- Sab theek hain  mom & dad.Main aur Riddhima hamare ghar jaa rahe hain.Aaj se hum apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat karne jaa rahe hain.Humhe Aashiwad dijiye.
Shashank & Padma give them blessings.
Shashank & Padma are so happy for Sid & Riddhima.
Sid & Riddhima are leaving now.
 
Siddhima now have reached their house.
Sid is opening the lock.Finally the door is open.
Riddhima stops Sid.
Sid :- Kya hua Riddhima?
Riddhima :- Hum dono kuch bhool rahe hain.Hum apni shaadi ki nishaaniya bhool rahe hain.
Riddhima Sindoor nikalti hain.This is the same Sindoor which Sid's mom had given her.
Sid Riddhima ki maang main Sindoor bharta hain.
Sid Riddhima ko mangalsutra pehnata hain aur saath main Riddhima ke haath main shaadi ka chooda bhi pehnata hain.
Riddhima :- Ab mujhe lag raha hai ki main aaj kuch hoon.I'm proud to be Riddhima Siddhanth Modi.
Sid is very happy.
Sid & Riddhima come very closer to each other & Sid touches Riddhima's face with his both hands & Riddhima closes her eyes.Sid puts his lips on her & this is their first kiss.
The night was very special.It was their Consummation night.
Iske aagey jo kuch bhi uss raat hua,I'm not going to write coz it's censored & Pati aur Patni ke beech kuch bateein private ho toh accha hain.LOL
But  That night was very Romantic coz  Siddhima had waited for years to live that moment.
 
The next morning Riddhima is getting ready for going to hospital.Sid wakes up by hearing sweet sound of Riddhima's bangles.
Riddhima :- utho sid.hospital nahin jaana.
Sid :- Nahin.Kyunki hum apne Honeymoon pe jaa rahe hain.
Riddhima is Surprised & happy.
Riddhima :- par Sid hum bina leave application ke.............
Sid :- kal raat tumhare ghar aane se pehle maine hum dono ke leave applications file kar diye hain.
Humhe 15 din ki chutti mili hain.
Riddhima :- Tum bade badmaash nikle Sid.You are so Romantic.
 
Sid & Riddhima are going to Panchgani for their Honeymoon.
They arrive at panchgani.
Perara's are really happy to see Siddhima happy & smiling.
Siddhima room main jaate hain.
Sid keeps his hand on Riddhima's waist and  Riddhima says,
"You & I ,may Together do we end up time,
Promise i will never let you go,
Now then i know you love me".
 
In the Night there are some showers in Panchgani.
Sid & Riddhima are Dancing in the rain on the song "Gale lag jaa" from " De Dana Dan."
Perara's Sid aur Riddhima ko dekh kar ek doosre se kehne lage ki inn dono ko dekhkar humhe apne Honeymoon ki yaad aa gayi.
Well Siddhima enjoy the honeymoon this time & now they're leaving & saying Thanks And Bye to Perara's.
Siddhima leave from there.
 
 
Sid :- Riddhima main soch raha  hoon ki  hum lonavla jaaye aur TJ se mile.
Riddhima :- Sid ek baat kahoon.
Sid :- haa kahoon.
Riddhima :- TJ ne hamare liye bahut kuch kiya hain.Kya hum TJ ko Adopt kar le?
Sid is so happy listening this.
Sid :- Main bhi yehi soch raha tha Riddhima.
They both Arrive Lonavla.TJ is happy to see them.
TJ is shouting:-Sid bhaiyya aur Riddhima didi.Aap aa gaye.
Siddhima to TJ :- hum tumhe lene aaye hain,TJ.Kya tum hamari beti banogi?
TJ is happy & Siddhima are completing all the formalities & Now Siddhima have legally adopted TJ.
Sid,Riddhima & TJ are very Happy.
All three now arrive at Sanjeevani.
Sid & Riddhima tell everyone that they have adopted TJ as their child.Everyone is happy.
 
After 6 months,
Riddhima's reports are positive.She's pregnant.Sid & TJ are so happy for Riddhima.
 
After another 6 months,
Today it's Riddhima's delivery.Riddhima has gave Birth to a child.
Everyone is there.Sid,TJ,Shanky,Padma,Sue,Yuna,JP & Jiggy are very happy.
Sid to Riddhima :- Main aaj bahut khush hoon Riddhima.I love You.
JP & Jiggy to Sid :- Kaash apne aaj toh bhabhi ko I Love You bol diya warna humko toh laga tha ki aap apne bacchon ki shaadi pe bhabhi ko I Love You kahenge.LOL
Everyone is Happy.Joy is all around.WinkBig smileLOL
Now,
Aal izz Certainly Well b/w Siddhima & now they live happily with their two children from here onwards.
 
This is DMG's Ending in my way.
 
Siddhima Modi Forever!!!Heart
 
It's a very long OS coz i have tried to include all the emotions in it.
Hope you all like my Work.
I want the views of all Siddhimaholics.
Hope you enjoy it!!
Sorry for Typos,if any.
 
Love You All!!
Live Your Dreams!!!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by JATINTHAKKAR - 17 May 2010 at 3:51am

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ok! so I'm a AR fan.......but I really appreciate ur effort and I must say its a FAB OS although while reading it I got tears coz I was thinking of AR! but still hope SR fans will not go through wat I'm.........GR8 OS!

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Originally posted by AttractiveAdya

ok! so I'm a AR fan.......but I really appreciate ur effort and I must say its a FAB OS although while reading it I got tears coz I was thinking of AR! but still hope SR fans will not go through wat I'm.........GR8 OS!
Thanks very much for Appreciating.
I think i have written my heart out.
No intentions of hurting Anyone.


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Great jobClap And you are saying its your first OS??

Aal will certainly be well between SR

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