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Update was very nice.
The conversation between Raj and Nandini is very cute. She is surprised to know that Raj had brought arjun along so that he could meet her.
Sagai ka naam sunte hi Raj ki neend uda jati hai. His mother knows him too well.
Waiting to see what excuse Raj comes up with
please continue soon
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Everyone started BF'.when aditya asked raj 'raj tum kal raat ko kaha gaye the??
Raj who was drinking juice, choked'''spat out juice'.had coughing fit'''.
Veena all concerned'. Raj kitni baar kaha hai'nashta aaram se khaya kar'''..
Raj just composed himself'main thik hoon mumma'
Now his dad asked again'adi kya keh raha hai Raj'tum raat ko kahi bahar gaye the'
Raj'dad woh..main'.(looks at arjun 4 help, who is cooly eating BF.)
Adi'Raj yeh woh main kya?? Arjun tum batao raj kahi gaya tha??
At same moment Raj & arjun said
Raj glares at arjun then answers his dad'dad..woh..main nahi arjun lekar gaya tha..
Now its arjun turn to choke on his coffee..
Raj continues'dad, actually, arjun ko nind nahi aa rahi thi toh hum dono drive par gaye the' haina arjun..
Dad'par tumhari mom toh keh rahi thi tum log office ka kaam kar rahe the'
Raj'haan woh hum kaam khatam hone ke baad gaye the'..
Adi'par raj' he was abt to ask something more when Raj's bhabhi came
Neelu'aditya tum bhi na, subah subah sawal puchne lag gaye' sabko jaldi se nashta karne do'sagai ka itna kaam pada hai..hum sabko taiyaar bhi hona hai'
Adi'acha ji 'ab apke pyaare devar se kuch nahi puchunga khush
Raj mouthed a silent thank you 2 his bhabhi'as only she knew where he actually went'.
Dad'thik hai toh sab BF karke '. Taiyaar ho jana 11 baje tak hum log niklenge'
Here, in kapoor house'.nandini woke up much early' & prepared BF 4 everyone'& went to nana nani's room to serve their morning tea..
Nandini'gudmrng, pap aapki garama garam chai, aur aaj ka newspaper..
Nana'thank you beta, par tujhe mana kiya tha.. aaj teri sagai hai..abse tu ghar ka kaam nahi karegi'akhir do din mein shadi hai..
Nandini'papa, atleast aaj toh main kaam kar hi sakti hu'kal se nahi karungi' happy'
Nana'tu kisi ki nahi manegi'
Nandini ' mummy kahan hai'chai thandi ho jayegi,
Nana'abhi aati hogi' woh puja kar rahi thi'
Nandini ' main yahi rakh deti hu, main mamu ko chai de aati hu varna unki neend nahi khulegi....
Nandini goes upstairs to his mama's room' she enters & sees him sleeping' all books open, with his reading glasses on' she smiles' & keeps tea on side table & closes his books, takes out his glasses'. & moves to open curtains'. That makes jai wake up'
Nandini'gudmrng mamu, aapki chai, aur aaj aap fir padhte padhte so gaye'.aur sari kitabein aise bikhere padi hai'.sab papers aise faile hue hai'.(she keeps on rambling & goes on arranging everything)
Jai'main sab kar lunga, 5min mein , tu yeh sab chod, aur mumma ne mana kiya than a tujhe aaj se kaam karne ke liye'
Nandini ' plz mamu'ab aap same chiz mat repeat karo, abhi papa bhi yahi keh rahe the'''.
Jai'acha baba, yaha aa'
Nandini comes near & sits beside jai'when jai asks
Jai ' tujh se ek baat puchni thi
Nandini ' kya?
Jai'tu khush toh haina'
nandini looks at him & slowly nods in yes'
jai ' guddo, koi prblm hai, kuch kehna hai'
nandini'nahi, kuch nahi,
jai ' par teri aankhen kuch aur keh rahi hai'.kya baat hai,
nandini'aisa kuch nahi hai, main khush hoon mamu, raj bahut ache hain, I trust him'
jai ' toh koi aur pareshani??
Jai ' kya hua,
Nandini ' mujhe samajh nahi aa raha mamu, sab acha lag raha hai, main khush bhi, par ek ajeeb si udasi bhi hai, mujhe pata hai raj humesha mujhe khush rakhega, par in sab khushiyon ko dekh kar dar bhi lagta hai'aur'.
Nandini keeps silent
Jai again asks ' nandini, aur kya??
Nandini looks down & slowly whispers Mr. dixit'
'''''.to be continued'''..
Here fifth part ends'.hope u like it'
As always comments are welcome'..appreciation, criticism, suggestions''..whatever, but comments are necessary'''.
next update'may be on thursday '''..
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