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sab se pahle toh main tum se baht gussa hun...!!! ab agar yeh pucha ki kyoun gussa hun...toh pakka peetogi mujh se...!!! Angry

 
kitni khubshurat fic likhi hai tum ne aur voh bhi Rajeev par...!!! par mujhe inform karr rahi ho 3rd part k baad...!!! ab tum se gussa na rahun toh kya karun...???Angry
 
isiliye tum se KATTI...Angry
 
par haan is fic k writer k bare me toh kuch na kuch kahna hi padega na...ab itna achha jo likha hai unhone...Clap Clap Clap
 
yeh part toh baht hi mast tha...bole toh romantic n cute...Clap Clap Clap
 
raj baht pyar karta hai nandini se...varna sagai k pahli raat is tarah se aa kar apni demands puri nahi karta...!!! aur toh aur use jo sunn na tha voh bhi sun liya us ne nandini k muh se...!!! hala ki us k liye use solid RED xplanations dene pade...LOL Wink Embarrassed!!! par banda akhir raj hai toh sab kuch awesome hi karega...Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
yahan par toh raj baht helping nature ka bhi hai...dekhona...sagai se pahle pahunchne ki baat karr raha hai...nandini ko help jo karni hai use...!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue 
 
raj kitna sweet hai...yeh bhi batana chahta tha...par sahi tym ko cell fone ne bigad diya...!!!! vaise mujhe raj ka last line kafi achha laga...Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
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thanx.................4 commenting & liking the update.....................Hug.......................me back...........so here comes the next part...............................

Part--4


He was about to kiss her.........when his cell rang......... he looked the number & groaned...........picked up the call before he could say hello..........

Voice -- kya kar raha hai???5min kehkar gaya tha??? 20 min already ho gaye....aaj wapis aaega na .....ya wahi par ghar jamai banne ka irada hai???

Raj--tu mujhe bolne dega ????main thodi der mein aa raha hoon

Voice--mujhe kuch nahi sunna tu abhi aa, tere romance ke chakar mein meri neend kharab ho rahi hai....tu aaja varna main ja raha hoon..jab aunty mujhe poochegi raj kaha hai, main keh dunga bhabiji ke sath........

Raj--acha acha thik hai....yeh blackmail karna band kar main aa raha hoon..

& he disconnected the call..

Nandini who was listening to conversation--arjun tha..

Raj--haan..thodi der wait nahi kar sakta tha

Nandini didn't understood...wait?? Matlab..dont tell me woh tumhare sath aaya hai.....kaha hain?

Raj--bahar car mein......

Nandini shocked????what..Raj tum sachmuch pagal ho gaye ho....use bhi sath laye.........bechare ko itni raat ko tang kar rahe ho..

Raj--vo koi bechara nahi hai.....aur maine bhi uski kai baar madad ki hai.........tum vo sab chodo..... itna mat socho...Sochna hai toh tum humari shadi ke bare mein soch sakti ho, honey moon ke bare mein soch sakti ho...........

Nandini smacked his arm..

Raj--kya, main toh keh raha tha ki.....ab maine tumhe nahi bataya ki hum honeymoon pe kaha ja rahe hai toh tum socho hum kaha ja sakte hain, u can guess the place..(teasing her).waise tumhe kya laga main kya sochne ko keh raha hoon.....

Nandini ---mujhe kuch nahi laga..aur raj... now I seriously mean it ab tumhe jaana chaiye kafi raat ho gayi hai..tumhare ghar mein tumhe dhund rahe honge..........

Raj--thik hai.. main chala jaunga.......par hum kuch kar rahe the???. & again moved closer....to which nandini pushed him.......

Nandini---hum kuch nahi kar rahe the..ab tum jao..........

Raj --ok ok fine ja raha hoon.....& he moved towards window with nandini walking behind.. before leaving he turned...... ab tum bhi so jana......dobara blog likhne mat baithna......waise maine padh liya..... (nandini got shocked'she glared at him)

Raj smiled .......Gussa mat karo..mujhse kya chupana...waise it was really sweet....... ok..gudnyt & kissed her cheek.....

Nandini smiled--ok

He was about to leave when nandini stopped him--raj..

Raj---kya? nahi jau..

She didn't said anything but moved closer to remove lipsrick mark 4m corner of his lips-- ab jao.....

He left smiling....

Nandini lied on bed & thot about what happened in past few minutes & felt happy & slowly fell asleep

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next morning in Mehta house..........

Raj's mom veena just completed morning prayer when Raj's father... came to her

Alok Mehta--kya baat hai aaj akele akele pooja ho rahi hai.........apke sahabzade kaha hain??

Veena--raj shayad raat ko der se soya tha......isliye aaj jaldi nahi utha.........varna voh roz jaldi uth jata hai....keh raha tha arjun ke sath kuch office ka kaam pura karna tha....fir to vo kuch din ki chuti lega office se..

Alok--oh!! Acha par ab to use utha do 9 baj gaye hain.. 11 baje nikalna hai...... pata chale raj apni hi sagai mein late pahunche

Veena--thik hai..

Veena goes to raj's room to find him sleeping peacefully

veena tried to wake raj up.......but he just turned to other side & slept again...........

Veena--raj.....uthna nahi hai.........

Raj--mumma bas 5 min.....abhi thodi der aur........

Veena---tere 5min main janti hoon.........chal jaldi uth ja......sab nashte pe tera wait kar rahe hai..

Raj just hummed'aap chalo mumma main aa jaunga..

Veena sighed & was about to walk out of room but she turned & said--waise raj 9 baj gaye hain.......aur sagai ke liye 11 baje nikalna hai......aur abhi bahut se kaam baki hain..tujhe aur sona hai to main tere papa ko keh deti hoon ki hum thoda late niklenge

That made raj jerk out of sleep & sat straight on bed .....kya 9 baj gaye aapne pehle kyun nahi bataya main abhi 5min mein niche aata hoon..........

He hurriedly got up 4m bed.....to get ready..........

Veena --- arre aram se......badi jaldi hai sagai ki....... tujhe toh nind aa rahi thi........

Raj knew her mom was teasing him--kya mom.. main toh isliye jaldi kar raha hoon kyunki aapne kaha na sab breakfast ke liye wait kar rahe hai aur mujhe bhi bahut bhookh lag rahi hai........

Veena smiled......acha.. chal jaldi taiyaar ho kar niche aaja....

After freshening up when raj came down he saw everyone at BF table, including Arjun too.......who was constantly yawning..... Raj wished gudmrng to everyone...when riya....came running to him......chachu.....aaj main aapke saath nashta karungi

Raj  smiled & made her sit in his lap.....ok princess as u wish..

Aditya (raj's bro) -- riya tum roz toh raj ke sath nashta karti ho'fir aaj kya special hai???

Riya-- kuch nahi....... aise hi......

Everyone started BF..when aditya asked raj ......raj tum kal raat ko kaha gaye the??

Raj who was drinking juice, choked........spat out juice.....had coughing fit

........to be continued..............

 

Here fourth part ends.........hope u like it...........

 As always comments are welcome......appreciation, criticism, suggestions.......whatever, but comments are necessary.......following updates will be much sooner....hopefully after 2- 3 days....... will try to be as regular as possible....... as now after exams I'm quite free.........so sooner the comments..sooner the updates.......

Njoy reading




Edited by Puri_2711 - 22 June 2010 at 1:05am

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nice update dear

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the up is good nandini ko raj kiss karne baala hota haai when his mobile rings sach mein yeh arjun thore dar bad phone nahin kar sakta tha very bad waise raj ko lips nahin toh cheek pe mila kiss nice

plz cont soon and thanks for the pm

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hi ,the part is really superb Smile
raj aur nandini convo is sweetTongue and romanticEmbarrassed raj arjun ke help leekar aaya he is a nice friendSmile
 
raj sagai ka naam sun ke he utth gayaa LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
plz cont soon and do pm me

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very cute part.............raj is too sweet..................the room scene was cute..................cont soon..............

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damn cool
superb
great part
update soon

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Update was very nice.
The conversation between Raj and Nandini is very cute. She is surprised to know that Raj had brought arjun along so that he could meet her.
Sagai ka naam sunte hi Raj ki neend uda jati hai. His mother knows him too well.
Waiting to see what excuse Raj comes up with
please continue soon

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