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Kitni Ajeeb Hai Zindagi RajeevFF-Link pg 153 (Page 4)

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 Part--3


Nandini disconnects the call'' & says to herself--main tumhe kabhi shabdon mein nahi keh payungi''ki main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon''''tum mere liye kya ho?......yeh tum khud bhi nahi jante''..really love u'''.

When she hears a voice behind'Love u too'.

Nandini turned back to find Raj standing behind her



Out of shock she shouted 'tuuuummmmm'''.

Raj immediately came closer & covered her mouth with is hand''..

Raj'kya kar rahi ho--chilla kar pure ghar ko jagane ka irada hai??

Nandini  shook her head in NO'..

Raj--tum toh aise shock ho rahi ho jaise apne boyfriend ko nahi kisi bhoot ko dekh liya ho''.

She again shook her head'''

Raj--tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi''..??

Nandini smacked on Raj's hand on her mouth'.

Raj realized & removed his hand--oh sorry'. Ab bolo..

Nandini'Raj yeh sab kya hai''.tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??

Raj'maine kaha tha--Jo main sun na chahta hoon tumne nahi kaha to main aa jayunga'..toh main aa gaya'.

Nandini--Raj u are too much'.itni raat ko tum yaha''.have gone mad??

Raj'kamal ki girlfriend ho yaar'.tumhe toh khush hona chaiye'ki main tumse milne aaya ulta mujh par gussa ka rahi ho''.. thoda toh credit diya karo'

Nandini---credit??? Tumhari is harkat ke liye'.?? Kisine tumhe yaha dekh liya toh, tum khud toh fasoge mujhe bhi fasaoge''.

Raj..enclosing nandini in a hug--relax nandu aisa kuch nahi hoga 'sab so rahe hai''. Aur waise bhi yeh tumhara room hain'..aur yaha hum dono ke alawa koi nahi hai''..

Nandini--voh sab mujhe nahi pata 'is waqt tum jao yaha se'

Raj gave her the most saddest look---ajeeb GF ho yaar'.. main itni muskil se tumse milne aaya aur'.tum mujhe bhaga rahi ho'ek toh waise hi tumse itne din se nahi mila'..

Nandini shocked-- itne din se??? Raj agar tum bhul rahe ho , hum kal saath mein shopping gaye the na'..

Raj'haan toh vo to kal gaye the na'.. us baat ko 24 ghante guzar gaye'.aur sath mein mumma bhi thi..

Nandini---Raj'.tumse baton mein koi nahi jeet sakta har baat ka jawab hai tumhare paas''

Raj'vo toh hai''afterall I'm smart'..

Nandini---toh Mr. smart'ab aap mujhe bataenge aap yaha se jane ka kya lenge??

Raj with a naughty glint in his eyes---are u sure mujhe milega???

Nandini'aisa kya chaiye'??

Raj---ek sweet..goodnight kiss'.

Nandini---what??

Raj teased her'isme itna shock hone ki kya baat hai ?? jaise pehli baar karogi..

Nandini blushed & smacked her arm'Raj..

Raj'kya Raj?? Sach hi to kaha..waise main tumhe kehna bhul gaya..

Nandini--kya?

Raj---Red really suits u..

Nandini looked down at her red nite dress'& smiled'

Raj--sirf tumhari dress ka red nahi'

Nandini 'phir?

Raj moved closer'red on ur nose jab gussa karti ho..(brushed his lips on her nose) red in ur eyes jab tum raat bhar nahi soti'of course mere bare mein sochti ho'.. red on ur cheeks jab sharmati ho..(brushed his lips on her cheeks) ' he slowly brought his lips closer to hers'.& kissed her'.what started as a soft kiss turned into a deeper passionate kiss.. with each other pulling closer'. She was forced to take support of wall behind her.. as kiss turned more & more passionate with passing time'' after few minutes when both parted.. breathing heavily' nandini gone all shy'.rested her head on his chest..& Raj to enclosed her in a hug.. they didn't spoke..as they didn't want that magical moment to end'.

After few minutes nandini spoke'I love u Raj..

Raj'dekha akhir tumse bulwa hi liya''

Nandini'tum kabhi mujhe chodkar to nahi jaoge na'.

Raj looked down & saw how seious nandini was '. He made her sit on the bed & asked..

Raj'achanak yeh sawal'

Nandini'tum jante ho'mujhe shuru se rishton se dar lagta hai'. Itne saal akele rehne ke baad..ab akelepan se dar lagta hai'tumhare saath ki adat si ho gayi hai'tum pehle kyun nahi aaye meri zindagi mein ..main itni khush kabhi nahi thi'..par itni khushiyon se dar lagta hai'. Tumse door hone ke khayal se dar lagta hai''

Raj put fingers on her lips'shhh'. Bahot zyada sochti ho' main tumhe chodkar kahi nahi jaunga'. Humesha tumhare kareeb tumhare ,sath rahunga'tumhari har khushi, har gum mein sath dunga...

Nandini just hugged him tight..

Raj saw how serious she became so just lighten the moment he further said'pata hai mein tumhare har pal sath rahunga.. itna ki tum mujhse tang aa jaogi aur mujhe door jane ko kahogi..

Nandini---aisa kabhi nahi hoga

Raj'acha aur abhi thodi der pehle mujhe bhaga rahi thi '

Nandini'voh toh aise hi..

Raj--acha mujhe tang kar rahi thi..

Nandini giggled---haan, but I meant it, tumhe itni raat ko nahi aana chaiye tha..

Raj--tum yeh sab chodo, main tuse kuch puchne aaya tha..

Nandini'kya??

Raj'kal tum kya pehan rahi ho??

Nandini 'what? Tum yeh puchne aye ho?

Raj---ofcourse mujhe pata hona chaiye, ab batao??

Nandini 'jaise tumhe nahi pata.. wohi saree jo tumne select ki thi

Raj---oh that pink one..matlab mujhe sagai ke time se thoda pehle aana padega..

Nandini confused---kyun?

Raj---arre, us din jab tum saree try kar rahi thi.. toh pehnane maine help ki thi, tumne kaha tha na blouse bahut complicated hain toh'

Nandini started smacking raj on his arm'Raj u are too much..

Raj---arre, main toh tumhari help karne ke liye jaldi aana chahta hoon.. aur tum mujhe mar rahi ho..

nandini---how thotful raj..so sweet'

raj---hoon na main sweet, toh tumhe nahi lagta I deserve something 4 being sweet & winked at her..

nandini---deserve , kya??

Raj' aise hi batau ya karke batau & he started moving closer.. waise tum karke batane se zyada achi tarah samajhti ho'.

He was about to kiss her when his cell rang  he looked the number & groaned''.picked up the call before he could say hello...

Voice ' kya kar raha hai'5min kehkar gaya tha' 20 min already ho gaye' aaj wapis aaega na 'ya wahi par ghar jamai banne ka irada hai???

''..to be continued''..

 

Here third part ends'.hope u like it'

 As always comments are welcome'..appreciation, criticism, suggestions''..whatever, but comments are necessary'''.next update when??? Completely clueless.. hopefully on 9th evening'so'till next time bye'.

Njoy reading

Cya'''.

Love purnima

Edited by Puri_2711 - 22 June 2010 at 1:03am

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very cute part...................liked it..................raj is too much romantic..............and i liked the last lines................very funny..............cont soon..............

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nice part

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up is nice raj nandini se milne jaate haai uske ghar nice raj n ko kiss karta haai wow raj is very nice i loved it plz cont soon

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Raj is very romantic....he loves nandini very much and wants to be with her all the time.
Nandini is lucky to have him in his life.
please continue soon

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Awe....Raj is soooooooooooooooooo sweet yaar!! Itna sweet hoga to kaise chalega?? Mujhe diabetes ho jayega na.....lolz!! Jokes apart....this was a lovely romantic part on the couple....and I truly loved it a lottttt!! And the last lines were very cool....hehe. Pls continue soon.

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nice part. very sweet

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up is good raj is really very sweet he always wants to be his love nandini raj finally woh 3 magical words sun he leeta haai nandini se plz cont soon and thanks for the pm

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