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Kitni Ajeeb Hai Zindagi RajeevFF-Link pg 153 (Page 2)

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Posted: 12 May 2010 at 11:38pm | IP Logged

Kitni ajeeb hai zindagi''..

Part-1    

An old lady sitting on a relaxing chair'.. observing the decorations in the house''but she is lost in her own thoughts when'' savitri'tum yaha ho? Tumhe doctor ne aaram karne ko kaha hai na'.

Savitri--ek baar yeh kaam nipat jaye phir aaram hi to karna hai'' itna khushi ka din hai''..jo sapna itne dino se dekha tha'.vo aaj se teen din baad pura ho jayega'.

Nishikant--haan'.yeh to sach hai'ek waqt lagta tha yeh humara sapna kabhi pura nahi hoga''par jaha sapna pura hone ki khushi hai'.vohi dukh bi hai'

Savitri--yeh to is samaj ka niyam hai''jise hum nahi badal sakte'.beti ko apne ghar jana hi hota hai''

Nishikant--'yeh to hai'..par maine sach mein umeed chod di thi 'ki yeh din kabhi dekh paunga''

Savitri--sahi kaha ji aapne''.par shayad bhagwan ne humari sun li'.. aur ab yehi dua ''..ki guddo ki zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaye'.

 Nishikant'--haan'..waqt kaise beet ta hai' 24saal jis beti ko apne sath rakha kuch palon mein parayi ho jayegi'fir to aankhen taras jayengi use dekhne ko''shayad apni zindagi mein itni busy ho jayegi '.kya pata hume hi bhul jaye''..

Savitri--'haan ji''.

Voice'--bilkul nahi'..

Both look back to see a b'ful young girl holding'..medicines & water in her hand'..

Nishikant'--nandini''

nandini--aisa kabhi nahi hoga papa''.vo din kabhi nahi ayega''jab main aap sabko bhul jayu'

Nishikant--hum jante hain''.par beta shadi ke bad'..halaat badal jati hai'zimmedari badh jati hai'''.. ladki apne maa baap se zyada'apne saas sasur ka, apne pati ka, apne parivar' ka dhyan rakhti hai'..aur rakhna bhi chaiye''..

Savitri--haan''hum tumse bhi yahi umeed rakhenge'

Nandini--main janti hoon''aur main puri koshish bhi karungi ki apki har umeed puri karu''. Par main apse yeh wada bhi karti hoon'.ki jab bhi apko meri zarurat hogi'''main humesha apke paas aa jaungi'''.

Savitri'--theek hai beta''

Nandini'--vaise aap abhi tak jag kyu rahi hai ''.apko to sona chaiye'.. aapne aaj pura din aaram nahi kiya''

Nishikant'--maine kaha than na'''guddo aate hi yeh kahegi..

Nandini--'papa'yeh main aapko bhi keh rahi hoon''..aapko bhi aaram ki zarurat hai'..raat ke 11 baj rahe hai'.aap dono abhi tak jag rahe hai''chaliye'..aur mummy apki dawai'''

She gives her medicine''..& took both nishikant & savitri to their room'''wishes them goodnight''.

Nandini returns back to her room''.. & opens her laptop to write today's blog'''as today she didn't got chance to write'.

Kal sagai, fir mehndi'..aur phir shadi''. Inhi kuch rasmon se  puri zindagi badal jayegi''' naye rishte jud jayenge'ek nayi pehchan''.naya paivaar, nayi zimmedariyaan''..dar lagta hai'' main sab kuch nahi sambhal payi toh''aaj tak'akele jiya hai'..sirf apne bare mein, apne mummy papa ke bare main socha hai'''par ab yeh naye rishte''..

Kabhi nahi socha tha meri zindagi mein yeh din bhi ayega'''main akeli khush thi'akele rehna acha lagta tha'.par ab akelepan se darr lagta hai'''darr lagta hai itni khushiyan dekhkar'itni khush kabhi nahi thi'darr lagta hai'.kahi yeh sapna to nahi'main aankhen kholungi''.aur' 

When her cell rings'..

 

'''.to be continued'''..

Here first part ends'.hope u like it'sorry''no hero in this part''.he'll surely make entry in next few parts'.

As always comments are welcome'..appreciation , criticism, suggestions''..whatever,  but comments are necessary'''.

Njoy reading

Next part''..i think will be updated''on 25th  ya 26th  May''.me off to Mumbai''will return on 23rd''.. so till then bye '''

Cya''.

Love purnima'

 



Edited by Puri_2711 - 13 May 2010 at 4:02am

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Posted: 13 May 2010 at 1:13am | IP Logged
nice part dear
missing rajeev very much in this part
pls make his entry soon
u beautifully describe the cute moments of a very cute family.
very gud attempt dear
pls cont soon and pls try to write a bit longer part if u can
bye
 take care!!!

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Posted: 13 May 2010 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinky901

nice part dear
missing rajeev very much in this part
pls make his entry soon
u beautifully describe the cute moments of a very cute family.
very gud attempt dear
pls cont soon and pls try to write a bit longer part if u can
bye
 take care!!!

Hug............ thanks 4 liking.................. Rajeev will definately come soon.............. he is busy getting engaged LOL LOL LOL.................. will make an entry soon...........Embarrassed Embarrassed.........
Embarrassedmy first attempt................. so thanx.........Big smile Big smile..............
next time may be a little longer part coz it will be updated late.............
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Posted: 13 May 2010 at 3:38am | IP Logged
super part
add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 May 2010 at 9:24am | IP Logged
hey purnima.......................
wow another Raj ff....................am very happy.................very interesting start.....................and i liked the prologue very much................well i will imagine the female lead as Aamna.....................missed raj in this part...............thanks for the pm and cont soon dear......................
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Posted: 14 May 2010 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Puri_2711

Originally posted by pinky901

nice part dear
missing rajeev very much in this part
pls make his entry soon
u beautifully describe the cute moments of a very cute family.
very gud attempt dear
pls cont soon and pls try to write a bit longer part if u can
bye
 take care!!!

Hug............ thanks 4 liking.................. Rajeev will definately come soon.............. he is busy getting engaged LOL LOL LOL.................. will make an entry soon...........Embarrassed Embarrassed.........
Embarrassedmy first attempt................. so thanx.........Big smile Big smile..............
next time may be a little longer part coz it will be updated late.............
Big smile Big smile
Big smile


this line "hes busy getting engaged" is reminding me of our Rajeev Khandelwal.................................LOL

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Posted: 15 May 2010 at 12:03am | IP Logged
very nice part but i want to know that its a ra fic rn fic plz clear it and thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 May 2010 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Hey Puri...nice part....and nice and a very nice intro...of course Raj k entry k bina mujhe achha nahi lagta....yet intezaar ka fal mitha hota hai na...and yeah....I am glad u r writing an FF on Rajeev....and guess tumse bhi heroine choose nahi hua....hehe. Doesnt matter....will be w8ing for the next part....though I donno bina laptop k reply kaise dungi...hehe.

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