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"Layak hi nahin ho!" A Riddhima (DMG) one shot.

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Hey guys!

Just wrote a one shot on Ridz...its a fun topic so please dont take it other wise!Smile


Disclaimer - The characters belong to Cinevistaas but the story and concept belongs to me. Ofcourse the line, "Layak Nahin Ho!" belongs to Cinevistaas!


Layak Hi Nahin Ho!


Riddhima made her way to the clothes store and started trying out salwaar-kameez but whenever the she put one on, her mind would scream... "Yeh mere layak hi nahin hai!" and this went on and on and on...and on...and on...yawns...aaaannnddd oooonnnn!!!!

 

Finally she decided to go to the sales person and ask for his advice. The sales person got two jodis of salwaar kameez out and displayed them infront of Riddhima but to his utter shock, the lady infront him went beserk and shouted..."Yeh dono mere layak hi nahin hai!" and ran out of the store, hand against her mouth. The sales person shuddered.

 

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After the stupid incident at the store, Riddhima decided to cool off with an ice cream and chose Vanilla and Strawberry double scoop. As she took a seat and brought the cone near her mouth, her nostrils flared and she yanked her hand away from her face and throwing the ice cream down, muttered, "Yeh dono mere layak hi nahin hai!" and ran away from the ice cream parlor, leaving behind a confused shop keeper and customers.

 

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Now that her break was over, Riddhima was back at Sanjeevani and looking through the cases when Dr. Kirti interrupted her and asked her opinion on 2 cases but was completely taken aback at Riddhima's reaction ... "Who dono mere layak nahin hai!" and with that Dr. Riddhima stalked off and Kirti steadied herself by balancing against the wall!

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Finally, Riddhima was in bed, neatly tucked in and lost in the dream world. Anjali was on the other bed, having returned from the lala land of the old DMG cast.

 

Anjali moisturized her hands and kept the bottle on the side table and turned off the lamp, just as her head was about to touch the pillow, she heard a distinctive ... "Mere layak hi nahin hain!"

 

She rolled her eyes and muttered back, "Goodnight to you too, Ridzi!"


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So how did you find it? Please, its supposed to be a fun topic but I am sorry if I hurt anyone.

Mods, can close this topic if they find anything hurtful or problematic about it. Smile


My other ffs - 

Zindagi (A short AR ff) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1376412


Zindagi Spin Offs (Spin-offs based on 'Zindagi') - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1501770


Lullaby (A sad AR one-shot) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1393951


Bas...Yun Hi... (AR short fic) - 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1401989&PID=30482021&#30482021


Aaj Main Bhi Khushi Chunoongi (AR two-shot) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1508457





Edited by AngelTeen - 23 March 2011 at 3:48am

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
ROFL  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL 
omg this OS is funny
 
one thing for sure, way after this show is over
Ridz will be remembered just cuz of this line

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by supercool3

ROFL  ROFL  ROFL  ROFL 
omg this OS is funny
 
one thing for sure, way after this show is over
Ridz will be remembered just cuz of this line


Glad you like it!Smile

Ridz ne iss line ko amar kar diya hai!LOL

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Oh my god. I think even when DMG is over and JW moves on to do other roles this statement of hers is gonna be in people's memory for long time. I really liked this fun OS. Especially when Riddz says to Dr.Keerthi regarding the patients that they are not worthy of her. Dream on Riddz.

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
awesome shot
loved it
haha mere layak hi nahi hai
lmao
too gud

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL"Mere layak hi nahin hai"

Sach mein... this line from Ridzi toh hamesha yaad rahegi...

 LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL mere layak hi nahin hainn... LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

loved it.... your an awesome writer... LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhruvikaluvsKSG

awesome shot
loved it
haha mere layak hi nahi hai
lmao
too gud


I am glad you liked it!Smile

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deadly-kiss

LOL"Mere layak hi nahin hai"

Sach mein... this line from Ridzi toh hamesha yaad rahegi...

 LOL mere layak hi nahin hainn... LOL

loved it.... your an awesome writer... Clap


Thank you sooo much!Smile

Its just that that line gets on my nerves!LOL

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