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sonam961986

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Hi everyone .... i am Sonam .... i generally write on aC .... but recently i read some beautiful ffs here ... so just posting a ff i wrote sometime back .... just posting the first part ... if you all like it ...i will continue further .....

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Making Memories Of Us : MayUr (Finished)

Baatein : MayUr (Finished)

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Kuch Pal Aur ....


Index:

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 1

Part 3 - Page 2

Part 4 - Page 2

Last Part - Page 2


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ZINDAGI .... iske har pal mein ek kahaani chhupi hai ... har kahaani mein ek ehsaas chhupa hai ... ehsaas ... pyaar, khushi, dard, doori, aansun, aanhein, himmat, jazba har ehsaas ki alag kahaani .... ek ant se ek nayi shuruaat ki kahaani hai ...... har pal ki ravaani hai ye ... jo pal chhut gaye hai ab ... unki zabaani hai ye .... bas yahi gam hai ... ki dil aaj bhi us lamhe se yeh kehta hai ... kaash ... KUCH PAL AUR ....

Mayank as Aarav
Nupur as Pooja ....


A 65-year old woman, was standing near the window .... peeking in her past ....

Pooja - Aarav, main kab se wait kar rahi thi .... kahaan the?
Aarav - Sorry, traffic mein phas gaya tha ...
Pooja stares at him ....
Aarav - Acha acha, der se utha tha ... sorry ... tumhe pata kaise chalta hai ki main tumse jhoot bol raha hun ....
Pooja (smiles) - Jaani, hum tumhaari aankhein padh lete hai ....
Aarav - Haye ... teri isi ada ke to deewane hai hum, jaaneman ...
and both laugh and hug each other ....


The old woman smiles .... her eyes little wet .... she was drowned in her past when ....
Maid - Madam, breakfast ready hai ...
Pooja - Haan ... room mein le aao .....
Maid - Sure ma'am ...

Aarav and Pooja were in the car ....
Pooja - Aaj weather kitna acha haina ...
Aarav - Hmm ... fresh .... to bataao kahaan chale?
Pooja - Hmmm ... CCD chalte hai ....
Aarav - As you say madam ....
Pooja laughs ......


Maid - Ma'am breakfast ...
Pooja - Hmmm ... rakh do .... aur mere liye garam coffee bana do ....
Maid - Yes ma'am ...... anything else .....
Pooja - Nahi ....

Pooja sits .... her eyes ... now have lost the twinkle .... her face has lost the glory .... yet she is beautiful ...
Wo dhundhli aankhein ab bhi un palon ko saaf- saaf dekh sakti hai ..... shayad isliye ... ki aankhein dhundhla sakti hai ... par kisi ki yaadein nahi .....

Aarav - Pooja, mujhe ek meeting ke liye London jana hai ...
Pooja - London ....
Aarav - Haan ... jaldi aa jaaunga ....
Pooja - Kitni jaldi?
Aarav - ahm ... ek mahina ...
Pooja - Ek mahina! main kya karungi?
Aarav - Arrey, ek mahina jaldi se nikal jaayega ...
Pooja - Tum jaante ho na ... main ek pal bhi tumhaare bagair nahi reh sakti ... phir bhi hamesha chodke chale jaate ho ....
Aarav - Arrey baba ... main jaanbujhkar chodkar ja raha hun kya?
Pooja - Phir bhi ...
Aarav - hmm ... ab jab aaunga to kabhi chodke nahi jaaunga ....
Pooja - Matlab?
Aarav - London se aate hi main tumse shaadi kar lunga ... phir tumhe kahin akela nahi rehna padega ....
Pooja - SACH!
Aarav - Jaaneman ... tumhaari kasam ...
Pooja (laughs) - Main tumhara intezaar karungi ....
Aarav - Main jald se jald waapas aane ki koshish karunga ... i promise ....


Pooja's eyes were lost in the world that was lost now ..... her eyes were wet as she admired her past ....

Maid - Madam ...
Pooja (comes out of her thoughts) - Hmm ...
Maid - Madam, aapki dawaai ka waqt ho gaya hai ...
Pooja - Haan, dedo ... aur suno ... aaj khaane mein kuch spicy banaana ... roz ke khaane se main bore ho gayi hun ...
Maid (smiles mildly) - Yes ma'am ... kya khaayengi?
Pooja - Kuch bhi ... bas spicy hona chaahiye ...
Maid - Yes madam ....

Maid takes a leave ... and then Pooja yet again drowns herself in the past moments ..

On Airport -:
Aarav - Apna khayal rakhna ....
Pooja - Tum bhi ....
Aarav - Jald waapas aa jaaunga ...
Pooja hugged him tight .....


Pooja slowly touched her heart and closed her eyes ... a drop of tear came from her eyes ...




Edited by sonam961986 - 19 August 2010 at 1:04pm

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sonam961986

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i think no one is quite interested in reading a sad story .... i guess i'll close it ....

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 9:16am | IP Logged
dear............its an awesome concept dear.....but this ff is based on whom?????

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 10:49am | IP Logged
achoose, sry don't knw ur name ..... it's based on MayUr - Mayank and Nupur ....

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dear...my name is aswathy...i am a great fan of mayur.......so pls continue soon...........

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I am glad at least someone liked the concept .... thanks achoose (sry don't knw ur name) ... i am definitely continuing it ... :)

One month later -:
Pooja opened the door, no one was there ... as she turned to come inside ... saw Aarav on his knees in front of her ...
Aarav - Pooja Sharma, kya aap Aarav Khanna ko apna jeevan saathi banaayengi ....
Pooja (smiled) - Haan ....
and fell on her knees and hugged him ....


Pooja slowly touched her arms and felt the emptiness ....

After a month to their marriage .... Pooja was in the kitchen, when Aarav came quietly and held her by her waist ... kept his chin on her shoulder and pinched her waist ....
Pooja - Aarav .... chodo naa ...
Aarav - Bilkul nahi ....
Pooja - Tang mat karo naa ...
Aarav slowly kisses her cheeks ... Pooja stares at him ...
Aarav (clicking his tongue) - Sorry ... sorry ....
Pooja smiled to herself and kissed his cheeks .... Aarav widened his eyes and turned her towards him ...
Aarav - I love you ....
Pooja (came in his arms) - I love you too ...


Pooja slowly touched the frame that was hanging on the wall ... tears were flowing from her eyes ... she slowly wiped them away remembering ....

Pooja and Aarav were lying on the bed ... Pooja's head on his shoulder while his arm around her ...
Aarav - Pooja ...
Pooja - hmm ...
Aarav - Agar kabhi main tumse door chala gaya to ...
Pooja - Matlab ...
Aarav - Kabhi main tumse itna door chale jaaun ki phir kabhi laut ke naa aaun ton ...
she kept her hand on his lips ...
Pooja - Aarav! aisi baatein mat karo ... main kabhi tumhe khud se door jaane hi nahi dungi .... Aarav - Phir bhi ... mujhse ek vaada karo ... ki tum kabhi nahi tootogi .... kabhi aansun nahi bahaaogi ..... agar royi to khushi se mujhe yaad karke ... mere gham mein nahi ....
Pooja - Aarav ...
now he kept his hand on her lips ...
Aarav - Waada karo ....
Pooja - Main waada karti hun ....



And the promise is not yet broken ......
Maid - Ma'am ...
Pooja - Hmm ...
Maid - Doctor aaye hain ... check-up karne ...
Pooja - Haan, use andar bhej do ... par use pata nahi chalna chaahiye ki main spicy ... samajh gayi na ... warna phir bahut daatega ....
Maid - Ma'am don't worry, main chup rahungi ...
and she zips her mouth ... both laugh a little ...
Doctor - Aunty, main andar aa sakta hun ....
Pooja - Aao na ....
Doctor - Kaisi hai aap?
Pooja - Perfect .... doc shaadi kab kar rahe ho?
Doctor - Aunty, i promise jab karunga pehla invitation aapka ....
Pooja - Jaldi karlo warna kahin ...
Doctor - Aunty!

After check-up he leaves ... and a memory flashes in her mind ...

It was Aarav and Pooja's first anniversay ... Pooja went to collect her reports from the doctor .... her pregnancy reports .....
Doctor - Pooja, i have seen your reports .... they are positive ... you are pregnant!
Pooja - Really!!! oh doc ... it's the best first anniversary gift ... thankyou so much .....
Pooja left the clinic ...
Pooja - Aarav ko phone karke bataati hun ... ahm ... nahi shaam ko ghar aayega na ... tab ... bataaungi ... mujhe uski reaction dekhni hai ... oh ... i am so happy ...
Pooja didn't leave any stone unturned to make that evening special ... she decorated the house with Aarav's favourite flowers ... the blue orchids ... she cooked his favourite dishes ... music of his choice and everything he loved ... she was on cloud 9 ........ She called him at 6:30 PM ...
Aarav - Hi, jaaneman ...
Pooja - Aarav, kya kar rahe ho?
Aarav - Kuch nahi, files complete kar raha hun ... bahut kaam hai aaj ....
Pooja - Mujhe kuch nahi pata ... 8 baje tak ghar aa jaana ...
Aarav - Acha baba ... 8 baje banda aapki khidmat mein haazir hoga, ab khush ....
Pooja - Bahut ... bye ...
Aarav - bye ....
Pooja had a bath ... she dried her hair ... wore a dark blue sari which Aarav had gifted her in the morning ...
Pooja - Aarav, jaldi aao ... main aur intezaar nahi kar sakti .... jaldi aao ....

It was 8:30 pm ...
Pooja - Hamesha late ... Aarav kabhi to time par aaya karo ...
Pooja burnt the candles all over .... the scent of the orchids was very much in the air ....

It was 9:30 pm ...
Pooja - Aarav ko itni der kyun ho rahi hai .... shayad traffic mein phas gaya hoga .... apni anniversary ki raat bhi koi late hota hai kya ....

It was 10:00 pm ...
Pooja - Itni der kyun ho rahi hai .... mera dil ghabra raha hai ... Aarav ko phone kar leti hun .....

It was raining heavily .... Pooja called Aarav .... rings were going .... but nobody picked the phone ... finally ... Inspector saw the phone ringing ....
Inspector - Jaaneman ....
he picked the phone ...
Inspector - Hello ...
Pooja - Aarav! kahaan ho?
Inspector - Aap kaun bol rahi hai?
Pooja - Ji .... main Aarav ki wife ... Pooja ... aap kaun ... aur Aarav kahaan hai? use phone dijiye .... Inspector - Poojaji ... main Inspector Sawant ...
Pooja - Inspector .... Aarav ... ko ... phone ... dijiye na ...
Inspector - Poojaji ... Aaravji ka accident ho gaya hai ... wo ...
Pooja - KYA? ACCIDENT? Aarav kaisa hai ... wo theek to hai ... kis hospital mein hai ... main abhi wahaan aati hun ... aap kuch bolte kyun nahi?
Inspector - Poojaji ... Aaravji ab ... is duniya mein nahi rahe .....
Pooja's breath stopped ... phone slipped from her hands .... she sat on the chair .... tears rolled from her eyes .....
Inspector - Poojaji ... Poojaji ... aap sun rahi hai ....

Pooja cried aloud ... her dreams were shattered in just a few moments .... in just a few moments ... she lost verything ... her love ... her life ... everything ....
With the wind .... all the candles blowed away ... Pooja was sitting in dark .... her pain was now in air .... her screams, her cries ..... the best day of her life turned into a nightmare ... she never wished to see ... never even thought about it ....
Pooja (screamed) - AARAV!! AARAV!! nahi ... aisa nahi HO SAKTA!! tum mujhe chodke NAHI JAA SAKTE!! nahi .... AARAV!!! nahi .......... AARAV!!!!!!!
She lied on the floor ... her cries were echoing in the air ... the pain was miserable .... her eyes turned red .... tears did not stop even once .... she kept crying the whole night on the floor .... calling his name .....
As she was crying .... she touched her stomach .... and remembered about the baby that was in her ...... before this,she wanted to kill herself .... but now she couldn't do that too ... her eyes slowly closed ....


Pooja opened her eyes ... they were filled with tears .... but they didn't come out .....
Pooja - Aarav, I love you .....

One month later ...
All the colours from Pooja's life were gone ... one rainy night had snatched everything from her ... her life, her love, her smile ... everything, in just a moment ..... she was waiting for him for minutes and hours ... but now the wait had grown into a lifetime .....


Pooja was standing near the window .... I always needed time on my own .... Tears came out from her eyes ... she slowly wiped them .... I never thought I'd, need you there when I cry .... She was sitting with their album .... admiring every picture ... And the days feel like years when I'm alone ... She was lying on the bed ... and touched the side where he always slept .... And the bed where you lie is made up on your side ... She remembered the time, he always went for meeting abroad and she would wait for him here ... When you walk away, I count the steps that you take .... She touched her stomach .... Do you see how much I need you right now .... She tried to control herself ... but could not and broke down .... When you're gone, the pieces of my heart are missing you ... She remembered how he always smiled at her .. When you're gone, the face I came to know is missing too ... She remembered his words of care, of love .... When you're gone, the words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it okey, i miss you ... She was sitting on the beach alone ..... I've never felt this way before .... She was cooking when she remembered how he used to disturb her .... Everything that I do, reminds me of you .... As she cleaning the room, she remembered how he used to throw his clothes on floor ... And the clothes you left, they lie on the floor ... She hugged his shirts .... And they smell just like you ... She remembered how he used to wake her up by kissing her cheeks ... or how he used to play with her hair ... I love the things that you do ... She remembered how everyday, he would leave for office in mornings and how she waited for him at dinner ... When you walk away, I count the steps that you take ... While remembering him, she hurt herself by mistake, it pained and reminded her of how he would kiss her every wound and scar .... Do you see how much I need you right now ... As she went for check-ups etc ... she felt empty without him ... When you're gone, the pieces of my heart are missing you ... Whenever she closed her eyes, she saw his face all with blood ... and brought tears to her ... When you're gone, the face I came to know is missing too ... Sometimes she would hear his words in air and it would leave her in pain ... When you're gone, the words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it okey, I miss you ... As she went for exercises and saw how all the husbands were there for their wives, she would feel lonely .... she remembered their pillow-fights ... We were made for each other ... She remembered their honeymoon ... Out here forever ... She remembered the long drives, how he made her sit on his lap and held her in his arms ... I know we were, yeah ... She remembered how he used to scare her, kiss away her tears ... how she couldn't tell him that she was pregnant ... All I ever wanted was for you to know ... With tears in her eyes, she knitted a sweater for the baby ... Everything I'd do, I'd give my heart and soul ... She stood lonely in the balcony, when she felt as if Aarav just kissed her tears again ... she looked everywhere but could not find him ... I can hardly breathe I need to feel you here with me, yeah ... It was her ninth month, she neede his support, his love but nothing was with her ... When you're gone, the pieces of my heart are missing you ... She would continuously stare at his snaps ... When you're gone, the face I came to know is missing too ... She was now in the hospital .... When you're gone, the words I need to hear to always get me through the day ... She gave birth to a baby girl .... nurse gave the baby in her arms ... and make it okey, I miss you ......

Finally Pooja got the reason to smile ... the reason to live life again ... to shower her love on someone .... Aarav's last memento ... AVNI ...

Maid - Madam, khana ready hai ...
Pooja - hmm ... le aao ...
Maid brings the food ....
Pooja - Suno ... aaj tum mere saath baithkar khana khaao ... theeke ....
Maid (smiled) - Yes ma'am ....
both talked, laughed and had a wonderful lunch together ....

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Thanks ... salma009 and farrda01 for liking the post .....

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:38pm | IP Logged

brilliant concept!

i loved the update
i m feeling bad 4 pooja
cont. soon
plz add me to ur pm list Smile

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