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Posted: 03 September 2010 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Thanx for reading the stories Chinnu, well about the first story I involved Purvi in it jus because I wanted to show Abhi sir tried to keep his promise but things didnt work out LOL waise my first story according to me was bad and involving purvi in it was bad idea and about the second story well i tried to put in all the emotions in it after all it was about Asha yaar anyways m grateful ou liked both the stories.  

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Posted: 04 September 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Finally read it. Its good one after watching yesterdays epsiode this was a relief for me. Clap.  Little lengthy but story demand was such so its ok and some what more emotional drama but main thing was center plot. Its nice you tried upon social crimes prevailing.

Your story's main charm was Asha. I was imagining all dialogues. wow. Story has everything, Freddy was shown the way we want to see him.Big smile. very good distribution of work




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Posted: 04 September 2010 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Sneha dii replying late so sorry was busy throughout the week but finally took time and read it !! First of all I'd say thanks for this story !! It was a great relief after yesterday !!

The story was very good & touching !! Emotional Drama thoda zyaada tha but I like it !! I mean kabhi kabhi emotional parts padhne mein bahut achcha lagta hai,investigation wise superb and mainly the theme of your story was excellent !!

Now coming to Asha Hug Hug for you !! I know how much you miss her !! So do I,she was my favourite and seeing her in your story was indeed a treat for me !! I want to thank you for than
All in all a very nice story !!

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Posted: 04 September 2010 at 1:46am | IP Logged
sneha <3 ed both of ur stories very much....
2nd case was d best according to me
congo diiii

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Posted: 04 September 2010 at 3:36am | IP Logged
@Sunny well yeah the story was actually very long, it was 19 word pages, I wasn't sure people would indulge their time in reading it. But I am overwhelmed by the response. Well emotional drama toh ho gaya got senti after bringing back Asha. Now talking about the social crime, I was little unsure to post the story with regards to the crime. I hope I have given proper justice to the crime.

@Bhavana and @Sonia I am grateful Thanx for liking the story dear

Guys I would love to know the drawbacks of the story also, Also If you could tell me the scenes you liked in the story. And thanx a lot for liking the story guys thanx a lot

Edited by sneha_fighter - 04 September 2010 at 3:37am

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Posted: 04 September 2010 at 4:04am | IP Logged
wow it's really nice story Smile

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Thanx buddy for liking the story
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Posted: 04 September 2010 at 7:22am | IP Logged
About scenes I liked. I liked the Asha entry scene no doubt.
The scene I liked was when Daya tell them to attack means no one knows why exactly they are attacking (  they came to know later on).  The actual plan was to attack later  but they trusted his decision to attack. I know they trust him but still one always think why I am doing this when actually one don't know why s/he is doing this. Just loved it I don't know why but liked this scene alot.

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