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Posted: 29 April 2010 at 12:14am | IP Logged
nice one,i really liked the best part was the end where Daya ignores Purvi,she doesn't deserve a man like DAYA anyways keep it up Thumbs Up
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Posted: 29 April 2010 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap Clap............ brilliant effort Big smile.............. started with daya sir Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed........... & ended tooBig smile Big smile..................... as a whole story was gripping....................... also....... all characters were given equal importance Big smile.....................
but missed...daya sir during investigation...................Big smile.........no problem u'll do it next time Big smile Big smile.........
continue writing  Big smile
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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:02am | IP Logged
It is a nice story yaar sneha. Keep writing please.  You are a very good crime story writer.Thumbs Up

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hey thanx a lot guys for your response, but it was my first attempt so please do tell me my flaws too so I can avoid them in my next story
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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 3:45am | IP Logged
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the story was too gud

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Posted: 03 May 2010 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Woooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww......... very good story keep it up.....

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 9:44am | IP Logged
great strory ...

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