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Hey Hey My lovely Jeran-ians. I finally wrote the Jungle shot. Seqal to Rain romance.


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1375633



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..:: SR stuck in a Jungle ::..



The night wasn't going to drift away so soon, they had to find there way back. "Sid kuch karo." She slowly slipped her hand threw his as he walked around the street drenching in the rain. "Liken yahaan koi light, koi insaan kuch bi nahi hai?"

Ridhima placed her head on his wet shoulder hugging his arm for comfort and some warmth from his body.


His arms wrapped them selves around her petite body pulling her closer and into his chest. "Lets go over there."

He pulled her along to the trees which seemed burned and acient by the darkness. Both of them sat under the tree, holding on to eachother, watching the rain pour and feeling safe in eachothers arms.

"Sid wahaan deko!" she pointed towards lights coming right behind the trees. "Mabye someone there can help us." Sid got up staring at the light.

"Mabye! You wana check it out?" Ridz nodded grabbing his hand as both of them headed towards the jungle.


The Trees, The rain, the animals and the mud was disgusting. Ridz let go his hand and sat on the rock. "I am tired Sid." He turned slightily and smile at her babiysh complains. "You want me to carry you?" He bend his kness in front of her, as she smiled.

"If you wana keep going ... then Yes!" Sid shook his head with a slight laughter. He raised her right arm and placed it around his neck, placing his hand on her waist and one between her kness.

 Taking her weight on his he stood up. Ridhima smiled staring at Sid who tried his best not to slip.


She placed her head on his half bare chest, holding on to him tightly.

It seemed like a never ending path, Ridz didn't know how long they walked for but it had been quite a while. "Sid, you place me down now i am okay."

"Sure?" Ridhima nodded and Sid placed her on the ground.

As soon as she stepped on the ground, placing her feet on the rock on and heel in mud twisted her ankel making her stumble. For some balance she caught Sid's shoulder, but her force pushed him down.

Sid grabbed her wiast as they both fell down and rolled over and over eachother until finally they hit a wet wall of a hut in the middle of the jungle.

Sid moved him self off Ridhima pulling her up. "Teeak tu hoo?"

He asked in concern as he wiped the leaves off his body. Ridhima tried not laughing, confusing Sid. "Kya hua?"


Ridhima moved forward holding his hand. She took out leaves that were stuck in his. Sid smiled when Ridz showed him.

"Well we can stay here i guess?" He said walking inside the hut when the rain finally stopped. There was some dry hay and woods. "I guess"

Ridhima sat down on the hay running her hands threw her hair. "Today was amazing don't you think?" Sid asked as he lowered down beside her placing his head in her lap.

 Ridhima smile cressing his forehead. "Hum saath thaay tu acha hi hai."


Sid moved up kissing her lower jaw. "Since when are you so romantic."

 Ridhima pinched his arm. "Nice way to ruin a moment." Sid took a hold of one of her hands kissing the palm. "But today was perfect." Ridz could feel smile while he lips stayed on her palm.


Lowering her head Ridhima placed her cheek on his forhead and hand on his chest. "iloveyou."

"Thats why we're here." He looked up to see her staring at him.

Moving up Sid let go of Ridhima. He placed his hand on both side of her face kissing her forehead.

"How are we going to get him?" He said moving away but Ridhima caught his shirt. "At the time... this moment... i really don't care." She said  pulling him closer and placing her lips over his.


The End....

Okay DONT Kill me for making it so short, but i have this other idea that i am thinking of so will be doing that.
Hope you like it. I know its not good but do feel free to comment and critisize.
Love Harsha

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Edited by xoHarshaxo - 25 April 2010 at 12:14pm

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Hope you all like it Embarrassed

Harsha


Edited by xoHarshaxo - 25 April 2010 at 12:50pm

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You sent me back to my pinky-ponky fluff cloud of SR... This is so innocently sensuous and very SR. Now, you make me wanna pick up SR and putting them in a jungle.

Who is he?
Write soon, baby.

Love and luck to you always,Heart

GOD bless you. Hug

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pocahontas

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You sent me back to my pinky-ponky fluff cloud of SR... This is so innocently sensuous and very SR. Now, you make me wanna pick up SR and putting them in a jungle.

Who is he?
Write soon, baby.

Love and luck to you always,Heart

GOD bless you. Hug



Aww Your Comment Means so Much. Thankyou So Much Yaar Hug. Your comment makes me actually feel good about my horriable writing ROFL. Thanks a lot Hug. YOU Rock Hug

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Hai haye harsha jaan!! I am so stuck into the shot and it got done! Yes it was too short! Arre itne mood mein aa rahi thi mein of sr and ek dum got finished..anuways it was damn good! I will wait for ur next part!! And who is he?? Tell us!! Fascinating one!

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Aww.....how romantic OS:)) Wish to see such a romantic and heartthrob scene of SR in real (means in DMG...LOL). You made my day Harsha dear!! Awesome awesome awesome.......brilliantly and beautifully done! Loved it top-bottom:)) Keep it up!!

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Aww totally sweet
 
Like Pocu said SR have to be sensuous, more then romantic IMO, 
 
More sensuous along with romanticSmile
 
Ridz being all romantic lol - cute

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