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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 11:07am | IP Logged

Aamna's character's name will be Kakoon

 

Your name across my heart Part 1

PART-1....Sujal is a guy who has a dream girl in life.He has not seen her.But he is waiting to see her. He is close to his bhabhi.
Sujal:i'm sure that one day i will meet her.
Tashu supports him:Its good to have dreams about your lady love.Best of luck.
Sujal smiles:Thanks bhabhi.
Unexpectedly Sujal's brother Aryaman dies in an accident. Everyone becomes moody.Sujal is not in a stage to dream.
Months passed.Everyone decides to make Sujal marry Tashu. They were shocked.
Sujal shouts:No..i can't marry bhabhi.i can't see her as my wife.She will be always my respectful bhabhi.
Tashu sheds tears. Their family members keep on forcing them for the marriage. Both Sujal and Tashu become really upset.
Tashu thinks:Poor Sujal.Because of me, his sweet dreams are breaking..
Tashu cries.
Tashu seems to be missing.Everyone becomes upset.Sujal finds a letter in his diary.
S:Oh...its written by Tashu bhabhi.
He reads it:Sujal..i don't want to break ur dreams.I don't want you to be sad because of me.I don't want to hurt you.So i'm going...Please don't follow me.But please look after my child.
Sujal sweats.He goes searching for Tashu.But he fails. He is tired and sleepy.The two year old child{Kaajal} of Tashu comes and holds his hand.Sujal gets upset about the child. He gets touched by the innocent smile of the child.He smiles at her with pity.
He:I'm leaving my dreams for you.Today onwards you are my child.
He hugs the child.
Two years passed.
she comes running towards Sujal:Papa....
Sujal:what my darling daughter?
Kajal:i want to put kajal.Please put it for me..
Sujal:why not?
He does that for her.
S:You look so pretty today.Today is your first day in the school.You will be the beauty of the school.
Kajal:Really?
S:yes..
Kajal smiles.
S:So cute..
He remembers Tashu and Aryaman pampering her when she was small. His eyes got filled up with tears.
Kajal:papa,why are you crying?
S:Nothing daughter..
Sujal carries her in his arms to the school.He tickles her.Kajal and Sujal laugh.


Edited by jasminerahul - 18 May 2010 at 3:29am

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Omg sooooooooooo sweet and cute Kajal is so sweet she called Him Papa awww thank you so much for pm
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 11:33am | IP Logged
very sweet part, liked the first part
continue soon
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 11:37am | IP Logged
hey damn cuteeeeeeeeee..............wht a concept.....an excellent 1st part.....will b waiting for the 2nd part.......plzzzz pm me when you update....
luv
sana
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Nice start !
Cont. soon !
Waiting for next !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
cute start....................cont soon dear and thanks for the pm......................
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
wow.. continue soon :)
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Nice start...very different.
sujal leaves his dreams behind to fullfill his duties towards Kajal. She loves him the most and for him she is his world.
please continue soon
thanks for the PM

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