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Part 3  is also interesting ....  keep it up

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Posted: 29 April 2010 at 9:01am | IP Logged
nice part!!

now ur ff is awesome n i hope ur ff is always awesome

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aww mehr....lovee the concept and the parts a mindblowinggg
keep it up

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~**~ Thanks people~**~ ....ur comment meant  a lot to me=)

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part 4

now we will start with (sajan) saba and arfeen
so now arfeen went airport to pick saba's parents
saba is in his house with his mom waiting for her parents
arfeen finally got airport to pick them up
arfeen brings her parents home
now arfeen sees saba meeting to his parents
after all this
saba to a's mom: acha aunty ab hum chalte hain
a's mom: aray itna jaldi....thora to betho na
s: nahi aunty...ab bohat ho gaya hai...ab humain jaana hoga
a's mom: acha beta kal ki dawat mei to arahi ho na
s: konsi dawat??
a's mom: wohi jo mene tumhari mummy and daddy ki karoongi
s: oh haan waha haan zaroor...per abhi k liye Allah Hafiz
a's mom: Allah Hafiz
than arfeen is get like saba's deewana so he just see saba everywhere
and than arfeen goes out side with his guitar start singing song
"mujhai tere ankhon ki gharai mei doobne de
mujhai tere aahoon ki jannat mei khone de
tere bina ye jeevan jaise soona sapna
tere bina tujhko har pal dhoonde ye dil mera
mujhai teri gharai mei doobne de
nana nahi jaana pyaar ka
nhai jana hota hai ye intezaar
tere ankhon ne ye sab kaha
kyun na kahe teri zubaan
mana mana mene pyaar hai
kaisa chaya dekho mujh pe khumaar hai
mere sang zameen or aasmaan
phir kyun hai koi mere har dishaan"
while singing afreen is just thinking how saba was beautiful..and meeting to her parents

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now we will come to (mayur) rahul and muskaan
this part will continue from last part where shaan holds muskaan
muskaan: aham aham
shaan was just looking at her and holding her and flowers were still falling on them
shaan: oh (than he leaves her)
and she stands back
muskaan: thanks....seriously abhi gir jaati na kuch nahi ho sakta tha
shaan: mene to bola tha..k nahi pakar sakogi phool ki basket tum hi "nahi do na pakar loongi"
he acts like muskaan
m: dekho..ab bas haan bohat ho gaya chalo ab mere help karo wo flower ki basket do
s: ye lo
basket was empty
m: haye....phool kaha gaye??
and she looks down on the floor
m: oh my God....ye sab phool yaha par..ab main inhe is deewar per kaise lagaoongi
and she looks upset
s: acha neech or hai main le aata hoon
m: haan tum jao...tab tak main ye phool neeche se bhi uthati hoon
shaan goes downstairs to get the flowers and muskaan is picking the flowers from the floor
when shaan comes upstairs with the flowers
m: thank God...saare flowers uth gaye
s: nahi saare nahi uthe
m: haan to jaha dikh rahe hai waha se utha lona
s: nahi zameen per nahi dikh rahe hain
m: to kaha per dikh rahe hain?
than shaan pick all the flowers from muskaan's hair...which fall on them while last flowers were in the air

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now it's come to hedar and sara (kash)
hedar goes in hospital to get job
he saw sara there with the patient
he comes to sara
sara: salam
hedar: w.salam
s: aap yahan?
h: haan wo job k liye aaya hoon
s: oh acha..wo waha office hai...aap yaha se seedha jaake right jaiye aap ko administration ka office milega wahi
h: dekhey aap mujh se "aap" karke baat mat keejiye plz
s: per aap bhi to mujh se aap karke baat karrahai hai na
h: acha chalo main tum se "tum" karke baat karoonga....per tum bhi mujh se "tum" karke baat karna okay??
s: okay...to tum jao or job lo..phir hamari khoob jamegi yaha
h: oh haan zaroor :P
now hedar goes to administration to get the job
he finally get the job
and from tomorrow he will go on the hospital to work (actually love=))

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now it's come to aamir and zaara (karanika)
today aamir is just sitting in house
thinking about zaara.....like how she was looking when he sees him first time
he thinks he fell in love with zaara
now aamir is keep thinking about zaara
while he is thinking this song comes on him
"bekaraar(4)
sooni sooni raho pe hain tera hi intezzar
jali buji saanson pe hai tera hi khumaar
na jaane mene kya khoya
kya paya
bhulake saari bateon ko jee aya
phir bhi to aaye karaar
bekaraar (4)

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now this part is done
for next part wait please=)
hope all of you like it
plz hit like button and do comments!!!


Edited by missinguonly - 01 May 2010 at 9:07am

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 9:15am | IP Logged
res
*edited*
WOW! Loved it!
&&& m the first to comment!!:D
couple wise
saba and afreen i.e.SAJAN- Nice scene! eventhough saba and arfeen didnt say anything to each other, it held so much!the song was nice...i havent heard it anytime before..which song is it? but arfeen says(sings) mana yeh pyar hai aww!! waiting eagerly for their scenes!!Embarrassed
 
rahul and muskaan- MAYUR- I loved this scene, i could imagine it all! AWESOME work on them!!Clap
 
Hedar and Sara i.e. KaSh- headstart to the hospital track, start of something new!! M excited for their track! now they moved from 'aap' to 'tum':D:D
 
Aamir and Zaara- so he's in love!:D i have a feeling he's going to hire her, tht job which is vacant in his office, and he wants it to be a female...only my guessSmile
 
All in all it was a mindblowing update!
Eventhough it was short, it held content
do continue soon!
 
lots of luv
ZeeJay!Smile


Edited by VampirePrincess - 01 May 2010 at 9:28am

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owesome update daear
really loved it
thanks 4 pm me
can't wait next part

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Originally posted by VampirePrincess

res
*edited*
WOW! Loved it!
&&& m the first to comment!!:D
couple wise
saba and afreen i.e.SAJAN- Nice scene! eventhough saba and arfeen didnt say anything to each other, it held so much!the song was nice...i havent heard it anytime before..which song is it? but arfeen says(sings) mana yeh pyar hai aww!! waiting eagerly for their scenes!!Embarrassed
 
rahul and muskaan- MAYUR- I loved this scene, i could imagine it all! AWESOME work on them!!Clap
 
Hedar and Sara i.e. KaSh- headstart to the hospital track, start of something new!! M excited for their track! now they moved from 'aap' to 'tum':D:D
 
Aamir and Zaara- so he's in love!:D i have a feeling he's going to hire her, tht job which is vacant in his office, and he wants it to be a female...only my guessSmile
 
All in all it was a mindblowing update!
Eventhough it was short, it held content
do continue soon!
 
lots of luv
ZeeJay!Smile


the song was mujhai tere aankhon ki from movie paathshaala
thanks...ur comments meant a lot to me
and one more thing they are shaan and muskaan not rahul and muskaan ..... as i have to give them muslim name so i have change rahul as shaanEmbarrassed

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