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part 3

all right first i would like to tell u all that i will write characters real name and the character real name in my ff....cause my one of the friend got confuse with it

now we are gonna start with mohit sehgal, who is arfeen
arfeen comes out from his room so his mom calls him
A's mom: good morning beta
A: good morning ammi
A's mom: beta aaj tumhare pass thora time hai kya??
A: haan kyun kya howa ....kuch kaam hai??
A's mom: acha beta aaj tumhare door k rishtedaar arahay hain lahore se....to tum unko pick karne ja sakoge
(the relatives are saba/gunjan's parents)
A: acha lekin koun??
A's mom: wohi larki k maa baab arahay hain jiski picture tune album mei dekhi thi
A: to wo larki bhi ayegi na
A's mom: haan wo ayegi lekin wo already yaha hai..lahore se us k maa baab arahay hain
A: haan to to main zaroor jaoonga
A's mom: beta meri baat maan le tu plz saba se shaadi karne ki zid nahi kar
A: main to aaj apne rishte ki baat karraha hoon
than he walk out....and his mom is like so mad......also his mom talks to rest of the relatives such as arfeen's cozns, dad, etc.
so they said that its okay let him merry with that girl...cause he dont wanna get merry to anyone else except her
so his mom accept this but still so mad (cause she dislikes saba...but saba is a very very nice girl)

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now it time to go on shaan and muskaan's part (who are mayur)
(also i will continue from that room part)
so shaan and muskaan are alone in the room
shaan: acha suno jo bhi tumhara naam hai.....i think tumhai us deewar se start karne chaiye
muskaan: acha mera naam muskaan hai....or main party/wedding/house organizer hoon...so plz mind ur own business...mr.whatever
shaan: mera naam shaan hai...or for ur kind information..main aap ki help karane aaya hoon
muskaan: acha help karne aaye ho na...(pointing to a stool) to jaake wo stool utha k lao mere liye
shaan goes and brings the stool for muskaan....than muskaan took the stool and stand on it
muskaan: acha mujhai rose do
shaan gives it
muskaan: tum basket pakri rakho...jab tak main ye deewar per set nahi karoon
shaan: yes mam
muskaan: acha tum ek kaam karo..ye basket main pakar leti hoon....tum jaake ribbons nikalo
shaan: oye...tum gir jaogi waise hi wo stool bohat high hai...or phir tumhari heals..or upper se ye basket phool ki
muskaan: aray de do na....main pakar loongi
shaan gives it to muskaan....than muskaan holds it
than as shaan about to go to get the ribbons..muskaan's feet sleep and she fell...but shaan catch her from her arm and the flower basket that was in muskaan's hand fell from her hand and all the flowers were in the air coming on muskaan and shaan

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now it's gonna come to hedar (who is armaan/KSG)
someone was knocking the door on hedar's house
so no one was opening it..than hedar's mom went to open it
when she opens it.....it was sara (ridzy/shilpa anand) on the door
sara: salam, ye yasmeen aunty ka ghar hai??
H's mom: w.salam jee haan ye yasmeen ka ghar hai...per aap koun hai??
sara: jee mera naam sara hai...medical se hoon...and mujhai pata chala hai k aap ko aap k bete ko ek doctor ki job dilwaani hai
H's mom: haan right right..waise andar aao betho
sara: thank you
H's mom: acha to aap kya bol rahi thi??
sara: jee main bol rahi thi ...k aap ki parosi ne humare hospital mei bataya hai k aap k bete ko ek job ki zaroorat hai
H's mom: haan lekin....beta main kya karoon?? wo meri baat hi nahi manta..usse bas cars mei interest hai...pata nahi doctor banne k baad bhi ye sab karraha hai ye
sara: ohh!! aunty agar aap ko koi problem nahi ho to main aap ke bete se baat karoon??
H's mom: haan beta tum usse samjhao main us ko bulati hoon....i hope wo maan jayega
Yaseem aunty calls hedar....and hedar comes...he looks at sara than
hedar: jee ammi
H's mom: beta ye medical se aaye hai...wo mene tujhai job ka bataya tha na...waha se...beta inko tumse kuch baat karni hai...agar tum ek baat sunlo to
H: acha theek hai....per main job wohi karoonga jo mera dil chahega
H's mom: acha beta...jaise aap ki marzi....main coffee laati hoon
than yasmeen aunty goes from there
sara: salam
Hedar: w.salam
S: aap ki mom ne bataya k aap ko cars mei interest hai
H: haan..to??
S: phir aap doctor kyun bane
H: bas aise hi
S: waise main zayada kuch to nahi boloongi...lekin a doctor gets more pay...or aap ki mom k liye aap ko ghar chalana hai...sochiye k aap doctor banke unko wo sab de sakeinge jo unko chaiye
(hedar likes the way in which sara told him the last sentence...and he feels to work as a doctor in hopital because of his mom)
than sara shows all the documents and pictures of hospital and get the survey from him and all that
than hedar's mom brings the coffee and sara drinks it and than she goes
sara: acha  Allah Hafiz
H and H's mom: Allah Hafiz
h's mom: haan to beta kya socha tumne?
H: haan main hospital mei kaam karoonga..main kal hi jaake job ki baat karoonga
than he hugs his mom

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now we will come to zaara and aamir (who is arjuhi/karanika)
after going from salon aamir is keep thinking about zaara
suddenly his cozn called him to tell him to pick her up @ 4 pm
than aamir goes to the salon @ 4 pick his cozn than ask
aamir: acha yaar ek baat poochoon??
A's cozn: haan of course
A: acha yaad hai jab main tumhai chorne aaya tha...to wo larki koun thi jo andar kisi se baat karrahi thi
A's cozn: oh wo larki?? wo salon ussi ka to hai
A: really??
A's cozn: haan!! per ye sab tum kyun pooch rahe ho??
A: aise hi...waise tumhari shakal ka make up thora sa light hai...chalo main tumhai wapis le jaata hoon..us ko bolo thora dark karde
A's cozn: light hai?? per make up to usne kiya hi nahi
A: oh isi liye to main boloon itna light make up kaise??
A's cozn: acha aap mujhai aaj raat ko ussi salon mei tayar hone k liye drop kardenge na
A: yes sure...kyun nahi??
than aamir tell on his heart and think to meet zaara again
at the end he is so happy
(will continue this part in next update)

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now this part finish....for next part...please wait=)
hope u all like it
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Edited by missinguonly - 26 April 2010 at 5:34pm

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dear i'm so sorry 4 the late comment
it was amazing update t
thank u 4 pme love

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Posted: 26 April 2010 at 5:36pm | IP Logged

awesomeeeee ud loved it superb mindblowing continue soon n thanx 4 the pm

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Posted: 26 April 2010 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
awesome part

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Posted: 27 April 2010 at 2:52am | IP Logged
awwwwwww
so cute
thank u for the pm
i totally loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 27 April 2010 at 4:02am | IP Logged

Hey dear!

Loved the way afreen is so into marrying saba! Thts cute!

Shaan and muskaan ka part thoda filmy tha LOL but I guess thts how mayur are, it was nice!Wink

I loved hedar and sara's part! It was an amazing part…the way her words striked him..too good! waiting for more scenes in the hospital:D

Aamir and zaara..hmm he wants to meet her, I have a feeling he's going to offer him job in his company….in the meeting he mentioned….maybe she joins..not sure, just my guess..cont soon!

and thnks a ton for mentioning their names in the show....really helped me read without any interruption..could imagine it all!!
It was an awesome update!
 
luv
ZeeJay!

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