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kasam se....jeena sirf mere liye part 9 on page 18 (Page 4)

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~**~ Thanks people for liking it and for comments...meant a lot to me~**~


part 2

someone was knocking hedar's door so hedar open it than
hedar: salam, aunty
aunty was hedar's mom's friend
aunty: w.salam beta, ammi hai??
hedar: jee aunty aap andar aaye ammi namaz parrahi hai
aunty: jee beta
than hedar goes in his room and his mom comes outside so
hedar's mom: salam sanoober....kaisi ho?
sanoober: main to theek hoon...tum sunao..kaisi ho??
h's mom: hum bhi theek hai
S: acha mujhai wo hedar k job k baare mei pata chala to mene socha k tumhai ek job k baare mei batadoon
h's mom: hain?? konsi job??
s: acha hedar ko doctor k baare mei to pata hai na??
h's mom: haan doctor hi to hai...lekin pata nahi is ko gaari bhejne ka kyun shok hai
s: acha to wo hospital mei inko bohat acha insaan bharosa waala chaiye
h's mom: acha main hedar se poochoongi
s: acha tumhai aaj raat ki dawat aaye hai??
h's mom: kaha ki??
s: aray wo shakeela ki beti ki
h's mom: haan aaye to hai...per main shayad nahi jaaoon
s: aray jaana..waha per bohat achi achi larkiyaan hongi tum hedar k liye dhoonda waha per
h's mom: hedar maane to na
s: acha mera to farz tha tumhai batana....acha ab main chalti hoon...Allah Hafiz
h's: chal Allah Hafiz behan

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now it goes to shaan and muskaan (1 month ago)
shaan is back from America cause of his cozn wedding/meetha mu and muskaan is the organizer for the party
so muskaan knocks to shaan's cozns house door and shaan opens it....but he see that muskaan is doing something (u know like make suring the address...and her hair is flying)....so shaan keeps watching her
muskaan: salam, jee ye adilah aunty ka ghar hai??
shaan: jee w.salam haan yahi ghar hai adilah aunty ka.....lekin aap ka kya kaam hai??
M: acha tum hato raaste se....main kudh dekhloongi
shaan in his heart: wao...what a girl!!
than muskaan goes in and she met to adilah aunty
adilah aunty: okay muskaan beta..humain is deewar per rose laga ne hain...or wo wali dewaar  per chameli k phool laga ne hain
M: okay...aunty.....waise or kuch main apni taraf se karoon....agar aap ko koi aitraaz na ho to
AA: haan...
suddenly shaan enters and go like: no
AA: kyun beta??
S: aunty aap k hi bete ka nahi mere cozn ka bhi hai meetha mu hai
AA: haan ye to hai..to tum kyun muskaan ki help nahi karte
AA to muskaan: haan muskaan beta shaan tumahri bohat madad kar dega
M: okay aunty
S: dulhan k room se organizing start karni hai
than shaan and muskaan goes in the room (and i will continue their part continue from here in next part)

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now it's goes to arfeen, whose mom is showing him
someone's shaadi's album....and showing the girls in it
and asking him...which one he want to marry
A's mom: beta in mei se tujhai kisse shaadi karni hai....(pointing to a girl).....beta ye larki bohat achi hai
suddenly arfeen sees saba's face (pointing to her) arfeen: is waali larki se
A's mom got full with anger...cause they hate saba
A's mom: isse karni hai beta....harkiz nahi...ye larki achi nahi hai...pata nahi kitne kitne larko k saath is ka chakkar hai..or tujhai issi se shaadi karni hai
A: aap ko ye sab kaise pata hai??
A's mom: beta ye hamari door ki rishtedaar hai...mujhai sab pata hai...or tere shaadi isse nahi ho sakti hai bas
(everything that is arfeen's mom is saying...it's lying...cause she don't want arfeen to marry saba)
A: ammi..main shaadi karoonga to saba se hi or kisi se nahi
than he walks out

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now it's goes to aamir, whose cozn is there, whose meetha muu is today with shaan's cozn, but shaan and aamir doesn't know that
aamir's cozn to aamir: aamir...i wanna go to a best salon for the mehndi
aamir: main larki thori hoon...jo mujhai best salon pata hoga
A's cozn: acha to newspaper mei dekhoon main...phir aap chordonge mujhai waha
A: aray..tum ammi ya baaji ya kisi k saath kyun nahi chali jaati
A's cozn: cause ur my best cozn brother..or main aap k saath hi jaoongi
A: acha baba...phir tum magazine mei dhoondo..i will drop u there
A's cozn: thanks amir  bhai
than A's cozn founds zaara's salon in the magazine
A's cozn: dhoond liya
A: kaha??
A's cozn showed the magazine than: ye wala...zaara's salon
A: acha mujhai address dekhne do..phir i will drop u there
so aamir luks for address and than he finally founds it and went to drop his cozn and he just see zaara there....but he don't know that she works there and he just luks at her for one moment and than salon door got close so he left from there!!

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 9:23am | IP Logged
lOVED THE PAT CONT. SOON

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 10:02am | IP Logged
awsome mehar loved it will be waiting for next part  Smile

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 10:04am | IP Logged
hey
awesome part
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Mind blowing!!!!!!Clap cont soon!!!!!

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