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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shafoo

wowow cool ending
thanks shafooEmbarrassed will miss ur comments a lot!!

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
HeyDear,
Mindblowing part,
And itni jaldi end bhi karliya hehe,
But its ok i understand=)
Im happy that all of them are together,
Loved Hedar & Sara part.
Good job & Keep it up.

LoveSurat.

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Awwwwwwwww Mehr
such a awesome ending
loved it to the core

do write more
Take care

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
beautiful
loved it
perfect ending
thanks 4 the awesome ff
going 2 b missed
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
amazing ending hun
loved it
thanks 4 d pm's

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by missinguonly

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part 9: (the last part)

we will start with mayur (shaan n muskaan)
shaan calls muskaan
M: hello
S: hi..main shaan bol raha hoon
after hearing that muskaan has a feeling in her heart
M: oh kaise ho??
S: theek hoon tum sunao??
M: achi hoon...so kya karrahay ho??
S: kuch nai tumse batein
M: acha
S: aaj kahi dinner pe jaana hai??
M: sure y not
S: to phir aaj raat 9 bajay miltay hain??
M: theek hai
S: acha bye
M: bye
after that muskaan goes like "yahi bohat acha chance hai...aaj to main isse sab kuch boldoongi"
n same with rahul "yahi acha moka hai aaj main isse apna pyaar ka izhaar kardoonga"
n now they both waiting when will be 9pm!!
now finally 9pm!!
when shaan n muskaan meets
they look somehow like this

M: hi shaan kaise ho?
S: theek hoon wo mujhai..
M: kya??
S: mujhai tumse kuch kehna hai
M: mujhai bhi tumse kuch kehna hai
S: pehle main boloonga
M: nai pehle main boloongi
S: main
M: main
shaan suddenly got mad & said "I love you"
M: kya??
S: haan mujhai tumse pyaar hone laga hai...or aaj mene tumhai yaha purpose karne k liye hi bulaya hai
M: per..
S: tumhari marzi hai haan ya na jo bhi bolo...lekin pehle mujhai batado k tumhai kya bolna tha
M: jo mujhai bolna tha wo tumne boldiya hai...I love you too
they both smile to each other n now they hug each other
they look somehow like this:

now 6 months has passed they decide to get marry to each other
n now finally today is their wedding=D
in their wedding they look somehow like this in their all wedding functions:

 




n now last n final one


and their story has end with getting love marriage to each other n have 2 kidz
now the 2 kidz are

named (mayank n nupur)
now there we go their story has end!!

now we start with sajan (arfeen n saba)
arfeen n saba has done talking to their parents
n now finally had their rukhsati
their picture is somehow like this:

after getting rukhsati
A: finally hamari rukhsati ho gaye
S: haan..ek baat poochoon??
A: of course
S: tum khush to ho na??
A: haan bohat khush hoon...finally tumhai paa liya
Saba smiles
A: u know k hum next month america ja rahay hai
S: haan main bohat khush hoon k tumhara ek year waste nai howa mere waja se!!
A: haan or main bhi k ab hum saath hi honge
n they both hug each other
which looks somehow like this:

now 1 month has passed
n they r in usa
looking like this:



n now their story also has end!!

now we will start with kash (hedar and sara)
sara is back from london
n goes to hedar
S: hi hedar
H: hi sara tum london se wapis agaye
S: haan bas abhi hi aaye
H: tum pareshaan lag rahi ho??
S: haan wo
H: sab theek to hai na?? tumhare dad theek to hai na??
S: han dad bilkul theek ho gaye hain
H: tum pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho??
S: main tumhare saath apni ek naye zindagi shuroo karna chahti hoon
H: kya?? u mean shaadi??
S: haan mujhse shaadi karlo
H: achanak ye sab mujhse kyun bol rahi ho??
S: cuz m in luv wid u...tumse pyaar hone laga hai mujhai
H: per hum to dost thay na??
S: haan per jab main apnay dad se milne gaye unhay sab bataya k tumne mere liye ijazat li mere dad ne mujhse kaha "k wo tera itna khayaal rakhta hai" or ussi waqt mujhai ehsaas howa k mujhai tumse pyaar ho gaya hai...kyun k meri life mei main kisi aise se hi pyaar karoongi jo meri care karta ho
H: lekin??
S: karogay mujhse shaaadi??
H: haan per tumne soch liya hai??
S: haan i love you
H: i love u too
n they hug each other
they look somehow like this:

n now they are married
looks like this:

n now they r both talking to each other like finally we are married
S: finally mene mera pyaar paa liya tumhai paa liya
H: haan honeymoon pe kaha jaana hai
sara smiles n say "kahi bhi"
and they decide to go to paris
n they look somehow like this:


n now they both say "i love you" to each other
n their story has end here!!

n now we will gonna go on karanika (aamir n zaara)
1 year has gone
aamir n zaara becomes very good friend but have feeling of love in their hearts
but zaara was scared to tell aamir about love, becuz she think aamir will say no and fire her from her job
and aamir has the same thing can't tell her cuz he thinks zaara will say no n leave the job
so now zaara has come to office
A: zaara wo mujhai tumhare dad se milna hai?
Z: kyun?? i mean ap ko kuch kaam hai unse??
A: haan kuch zaroori kaam hai
Z: lekin kis baare mei
A: wo main unse hi kar sakta hoon
Z: jee sir aap millena ye hai address *** ******* ****** ********
A: thanks main abhi hi mil leta hoon
Z: abhi?? i mean mujhai mera kaam to bataday
A: wo tum sharma jee se le lena
Z: jee theek hai
and aamir goes from there to met her dad
n he wanted to ask her dad to let zaara marry with aamir
n his dad say he will ask zaara about it
zaara cums home
z's dad: zaara beta
Z: jee abbu
z's dad: beta mujhai tumse kuch baat karni hai
Z: jee boliye
z's dad: aaj tumhara boss aaya tha
Z: haan wo mujhai bol raha tha lekin kyun aaya tha??
z's dad: beta wo tumse pyaar karta hai..tumse shaadi karna chahta hai
Z: kya? wo mujhse pyaar??
z's dad: haan beta lekin wo tumse nai bol paaya kyun k usko ye dar tha k tum job chordogi
Z: aap kya chahte ho?
z's dad: beta tumhai haan boldena chaiye kyun k wo tumhai khush rakega..beta wo tumhara aaj shaam 5 bajay bridge pe intezaar karega jaake jawaab de dena
Z: acha main dedoongi apna jawab
and now @ 5 pm zaara goes to bridge to meet aamir 
Z: sir??
A: tum agaye...tumhai to tumhare dad ne sab bata hi diya hoga na
Z: haan mujhai sab batadiya or mera jawab aap ko main dene aaye hoon yaha
A: kya hai jawab mei
Z: mera jawab hai haan..main shaadi k liye tayaar hoon
A: ye faisla tum apni marzi se karrahi ho na...i mean kahi tumhare dad ki waja se to nai na
Z: nai ye mera apna faisla hai....main bhi aap se pyaar karti thi lekin kabhi nai keh paaye
A: to aaj kehdo..." I love you"
Z: i love u too
they hug each other
looks like this:

now a week has past
they are married
looks like this:

n now they are happily living after marry
luks like this:




n now their story had end!!

p.s: m sorry guyz to finish it, but have my studiez!!...n now this ff has end!!

my special thanks to:
faaria
thambu
anjali
zenab
noor
achoose
prithvisanyo
love dmg-ar
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armaanksgfan
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olly
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anchal
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samratrocks
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divya
anishka
shafoo

hope u all lyk it=D 
 


wow!!!!!!   Clap   what a surprise Mehr jee......   I really enjoyed this update.....  it's interesting reading
awesome Nice photographs ....... just superb Clap thankzz for sharing  

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
nice and lovely update.. but the kids are damn cute...

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Posted: 06 September 2010 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Awesome part!!!!!!! nice End... <33
ur welcome...... thnks for this beautifull uptade!!!!!

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