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Posted: 19 August 2010 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
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part 8


we will start with mayur (shaan n muskaan)
muskaan is @ her house
her mom comes

muskaan's mom: kya howa beta?? kya soch rahi ho??
muskaan: kuch nai mom....aap logo ne mera rishta wo larke k saath accept to nai kiya na??
m's mom: nahi beta tumhari marzi k bina tumhari life ka decision hum kaisi lenge...waise kyun pooch rahi ho?? tumhai koi pasand hai kya??
M: shayad
m's mom: kya?? koi acha lagta hai??
M: haan mom...but samajh nahi aata i luv him or lyk him
m's mom: beta kaun hai wo??
M: hai ek dost...main ek jaga organize karne k liye gaye thi to mujhai mila tha....ab hum bohat achay dost bangaye hain
m's mom: toh??
M: mom pata nai aaj jab mene usse mere rishte ki baat ki to usne aise way mei baat ki jaise he wants me
m's mom: beta toh tum uuse khud hi kyun nai pooch leti??
M: main usse kaise poochoon?? lekin wo mujhai bol sakta hai....pata nahi aisi batein karta hai jo bas pyaar jaisi ho
m's mom: beta ab jab uska phone aaye ya tum usse milo to usse apne dil ki baat keh dena...aise baton mei deir nai karte...acha beta i have to go on my job main chalti hoon Allah Hafiz
M: Allah Hafiz

now its cum to shaan
who is sitting with his friend
shaan's friend: to tune kya socha??
shaan: kis baare mei??
s's friend: wohi us larki k baare mei?
shaan: soch raha hoon us ko boldoon...kyun k ab to us k rishte bhi aane lag gaye hain
s's friend: to intezaar kis baar ka hai tujhai?? jaldi bolday
shaan: dar lagta hai agar us ne inkaar kardiya toh??
s's friend: aray haan bhi to bol sakti hai na....agar tune ab or intezaar kiya to saari life kash hi bolta rahega tu....ab jabhi tu usse mile usko bol dena.....khair main chalta hoon apni girl friend se milne bye
shaan: bye

now we are gonna come to monaya (saba n arfeen)
arfeen is calling saba
saba picks up the phone
saba: hello
arfeen: hello
saba: haan bolo?? kaise ho?
arfeen: kaisa honga ye sab sunke
saba: tum america ja rahe ho na??
arfeen: haan tumhai saath leke
saba: kya?? ye kaise ho sakta hai
arfeen: dekho saba...ab humara nikah ho gaya hai....hum donoon rukhsati karte hi america mei chale jayenge
saba: lekin tumhai 1 hafte mei america jaana hoga...itni jaldi ye sab rukhsati or sab kaise hogi??
arfeen: saba...main tumhare liye mera 1 saal waste kar sakta hoon humari rukhsati isi 1 hafte mei hogi...lekin america k liye apply or sab kuch karne mei 6 months to lagegngay hi to phir hum america chale jayenge
saba: lekin....humare parents abhi rukhsati nahi hone denge na
arfeen: main baat karoonga unse.....kyun k ye humari life hai..or hum ek dusre se bohat pyaar karte hain...to phir hum donoon ki isi mei khushi hai
saba: acha main rakhti hoon
arfeen: Allah Hafiz...main unse kal hi baat karta hoon
saba: acha theek hai Allah Hafiz

now we are gonna go on kash (hedar and sara)
next day sara and hedar are coming to hospital
sara sees hedar
saara goes to him
sara: hi hedar
hedar: hi...tum abhi itna jaldi kuch kaam tha kya??
sara: hedar....mere dad ki tabyat bohat kharab hai or unhai mere zaroorat hai.....wo london mei hain....
hedar: toh??
sara: toh ye bache ka case hai mere upper.... or main mere dad k pass jaana chahti hoon unhai heart attack aaya hai
hedar: main ye case akela handle karloonga....lekin tumne abhi permission li kya??
sara: main jaanti hoon mujhai senior doctor permission nahi dengi....kyun k pehle 2 months mei london mei thi apne dad k saath
hedar: toh?? abhi to tumhare koi case nai hai koshish to karo
sara: lekin agar nai jaane diya to
hedar: main unse baat karoon?? i mean if u dont mind
sara: haan plz i will cum with u
hedar: acha chalo

they both go to senior doctor's office
SD: app log yaha?? sab theek to hai na??
hedar: good morning mam....wo haan sab theek hai humain aap se wo bachay k case mei baat karni thi
SD: jee bole....wo bacha theek to hai na??
hedar: haan mam wo bilkul theek hai....mujhai aap se kehna tha k dr.sara london jaana chahti hai un k dad ko heart attack aaya hai wo 1 hafte mei ajayengi...main ye case akela handle kar sakta hoon
SD: oh to ye baat hai....lekin wo apni job se aise chutiya nai le sakti
sara: per mam
SD: or dr.sara....aap janti hai dr.hedar is new here...lekin ap to nai hai...ap itna important case chor k kaise ja sakti hain??
sara: mam main 5 din mei ajaoongi....sirf mujhai mere dad ko dekh lene dijiye unhai bohat bara heart attack aaya hai
SD: lekin 1 shart pe... k aake aap ko apni duty double tym karni paregi
sara: okay mam main karloongi
SD: aap ja sakti ho
sara: thanks

than sara and hedar walks out from there
sara holds hedar's hand
sara: thank u so much
hedar: 4 what?
sara: mere saath k liye
hedar: friends mei sorry or thanks nai hota
sara: acha main chalti hoon....waha phonchnay mei bhi 1 din lagega
hedar: acha bye
sara: bye

now we are gonna come on arjuhi (aamir and zaara)
zaara is sitting in hospital
suddenly a man comez
man: jee aap zaara hai??
zaara: jee haan aap kaun??
man: mujhai mr.aamir ne bheja hai....mera naam sharma hai
zaara: lakin kyun?
sharma: aap unse phone pe baat kar lijiye

than zaara calls aamir
amir: hello
zaara: hello sir main zaara baat karrahi hoon
aamir: haan zaara bolo??? kaise hain ab tumhare dad??
zaara: sir wo ab behtar hai lakin doctor ne kaha hai k un k saath har waqt koi help k liye un k saath betha ho
aamir: acha chalo acha hai
zaara: sir aap ne ye sharma jee ko yaha bheja hai mere pass
amir: haan mene socha k kyun na mr.sharma tumhare dad k pass bhet jaye help k liye or tum yaha aajao kyun k mujhai 1 assistant ki bohat zaroorat hai
zaara: lekin sir...main phir bhi kal se aoongi kyun k aaj to office ka tym khatam ho gaya hai
aamir: jee haan main jaanta hoon...lekin aap kal se aa sakti ho
zaara: jee zaroor agar mr.sharma mere dad k pass bethe toh
aamir: toh theek hai kal se aajana subah 8 bajay
zaara: jee okay sir bye
aamir: bye

than after cut the phone
aamir is so happy
that he will finally see zaara again!!

now this part is dont hope all of u lyk it=)
luv mehr=D




wow!!!!  nice update Mehr jee.....   superbly written ...enjoyed it reading ...keep it up

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a very fab part.....keep it up...... :)

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part 9: (the last part)

we will start with mayur (shaan n muskaan)
shaan calls muskaan
M: hello
S: hi..main shaan bol raha hoon
after hearing that muskaan has a feeling in her heart
M: oh kaise ho??
S: theek hoon tum sunao??
M: achi hoon...so kya karrahay ho??
S: kuch nai tumse batein
M: acha
S: aaj kahi dinner pe jaana hai??
M: sure y not
S: to phir aaj raat 9 bajay miltay hain??
M: theek hai
S: acha bye
M: bye
after that muskaan goes like "yahi bohat acha chance hai...aaj to main isse sab kuch boldoongi"
n same with rahul "yahi acha moka hai aaj main isse apna pyaar ka izhaar kardoonga"
n now they both waiting when will be 9pm!!
now finally 9pm!!
when shaan n muskaan meets
they look somehow like this

M: hi shaan kaise ho?
S: theek hoon wo mujhai..
M: kya??
S: mujhai tumse kuch kehna hai
M: mujhai bhi tumse kuch kehna hai
S: pehle main boloonga
M: nai pehle main boloongi
S: main
M: main
shaan suddenly got mad & said "I love you"
M: kya??
S: haan mujhai tumse pyaar hone laga hai...or aaj mene tumhai yaha purpose karne k liye hi bulaya hai
M: per..
S: tumhari marzi hai haan ya na jo bhi bolo...lekin pehle mujhai batado k tumhai kya bolna tha
M: jo mujhai bolna tha wo tumne boldiya hai...I love you too
they both smile to each other n now they hug each other
they look somehow like this:

now 6 months has passed they decide to get marry to each other
n now finally today is their wedding=D
in their wedding they look somehow like this in their all wedding functions:

 




n now last n final one


and their story has end with getting love marriage to each other n have 2 kidz
now the 2 kidz are

named (mayank n nupur)
now there we go their story has end!!

now we start with sajan (arfeen n saba)
arfeen n saba has done talking to their parents
n now finally had their rukhsati
their picture is somehow like this:

after getting rukhsati
A: finally hamari rukhsati ho gaye
S: haan..ek baat poochoon??
A: of course
S: tum khush to ho na??
A: haan bohat khush hoon...finally tumhai paa liya
Saba smiles
A: u know k hum next month america ja rahay hai
S: haan main bohat khush hoon k tumhara ek year waste nai howa mere waja se!!
A: haan or main bhi k ab hum saath hi honge
n they both hug each other
which looks somehow like this:

now 1 month has passed
n they r in usa
looking like this:



n now their story also has end!!

now we will start with kash (hedar and sara)
sara is back from london
n goes to hedar
S: hi hedar
H: hi sara tum london se wapis agaye
S: haan bas abhi hi aaye
H: tum pareshaan lag rahi ho??
S: haan wo
H: sab theek to hai na?? tumhare dad theek to hai na??
S: han dad bilkul theek ho gaye hain
H: tum pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho??
S: main tumhare saath apni ek naye zindagi shuroo karna chahti hoon
H: kya?? u mean shaadi??
S: haan mujhse shaadi karlo
H: achanak ye sab mujhse kyun bol rahi ho??
S: cuz m in luv wid u...tumse pyaar hone laga hai mujhai
H: per hum to dost thay na??
S: haan per jab main apnay dad se milne gaye unhay sab bataya k tumne mere liye ijazat li mere dad ne mujhse kaha "k wo tera itna khayaal rakhta hai" or ussi waqt mujhai ehsaas howa k mujhai tumse pyaar ho gaya hai...kyun k meri life mei main kisi aise se hi pyaar karoongi jo meri care karta ho
H: lekin??
S: karogay mujhse shaaadi??
H: haan per tumne soch liya hai??
S: haan i love you
H: i love u too
n they hug each other
they look somehow like this:

n now they are married
looks like this:

n now they r both talking to each other like finally we are married
S: finally mene mera pyaar paa liya tumhai paa liya
H: haan honeymoon pe kaha jaana hai
sara smiles n say "kahi bhi"
and they decide to go to paris
n they look somehow like this:


n now they both say "i love you" to each other
n their story has end here!!

n now we will gonna go on karanika (aamir n zaara)
1 year has gone
aamir n zaara becomes very good friend but have feeling of love in their hearts
but zaara was scared to tell aamir about love, becuz she think aamir will say no and fire her from her job
and aamir has the same thing can't tell her cuz he thinks zaara will say no n leave the job
so now zaara has come to office
A: zaara wo mujhai tumhare dad se milna hai?
Z: kyun?? i mean ap ko kuch kaam hai unse??
A: haan kuch zaroori kaam hai
Z: lekin kis baare mei
A: wo main unse hi kar sakta hoon
Z: jee sir aap millena ye hai address *** ******* ****** ********
A: thanks main abhi hi mil leta hoon
Z: abhi?? i mean mujhai mera kaam to bataday
A: wo tum sharma jee se le lena
Z: jee theek hai
and aamir goes from there to met her dad
n he wanted to ask her dad to let zaara marry with aamir
n his dad say he will ask zaara about it
zaara cums home
z's dad: zaara beta
Z: jee abbu
z's dad: beta mujhai tumse kuch baat karni hai
Z: jee boliye
z's dad: aaj tumhara boss aaya tha
Z: haan wo mujhai bol raha tha lekin kyun aaya tha??
z's dad: beta wo tumse pyaar karta hai..tumse shaadi karna chahta hai
Z: kya? wo mujhse pyaar??
z's dad: haan beta lekin wo tumse nai bol paaya kyun k usko ye dar tha k tum job chordogi
Z: aap kya chahte ho?
z's dad: beta tumhai haan boldena chaiye kyun k wo tumhai khush rakega..beta wo tumhara aaj shaam 5 bajay bridge pe intezaar karega jaake jawaab de dena
Z: acha main dedoongi apna jawab
and now @ 5 pm zaara goes to bridge to meet aamir 
Z: sir??
A: tum agaye...tumhai to tumhare dad ne sab bata hi diya hoga na
Z: haan mujhai sab batadiya or mera jawab aap ko main dene aaye hoon yaha
A: kya hai jawab mei
Z: mera jawab hai haan..main shaadi k liye tayaar hoon
A: ye faisla tum apni marzi se karrahi ho na...i mean kahi tumhare dad ki waja se to nai na
Z: nai ye mera apna faisla hai....main bhi aap se pyaar karti thi lekin kabhi nai keh paaye
A: to aaj kehdo..." I love you"
Z: i love u too
they hug each other
looks like this:

now a week has past
they are married
looks like this:

n now they are happily living after marry
luks like this:




n now their story had end!!

p.s: m sorry guyz to finish it, but have my studiez!!...n now this ff has end!!

my special thanks to:
faaria
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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 11:44am | IP Logged
beautiful update loved it Wow lovely end

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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharma.nat

beautiful update loved it Wow lovely end


thanks dear..will miss ur comments!!

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aww mehrStar
it's such a nyc endingClapClapClap...as always all the endings were gud..esp karanika'sEmbarrassed
will miss this FF tooOuch
hope u make more FF's soonSmile

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nice, lovely update.loved it.


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hey mehr aweosmeee ending loved it im really gonna miss this ff i jst simply loved the ending n thanx 4 the pm

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