NewFF-Love Is Life- last part page 34 - Page 5

Posted: 13 years ago
So when is the next part coming--please update soon
Posted: 13 years ago
When will you be updating again? Please do so soon........
Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys,thanks for liking😊,but i dont know when i'll be able to update😭.i have plans for this weekend so i'll be very busy,so i really dont know when i'll be able to update.
Posted: 13 years ago

Yaar your making me sit on the edge of my seat 😛

...Its radika B-day ..why is dev so angry 😕
Posted: 13 years ago

part 4 pg 6

suddenly, something some behing made radhika scream.she turned around only to fing amrita and deepika(the actresses) standing behind her.she was shocked.
"aaaahhh!" rads screamed as she embraced her college best friends.
 
"o my gosh!how did you guys come? and when?"she asked.
 
"dont ask us, ask dev," amrita said
 
"huh?"rads aked confused.
 
"yeah,dev  set this entire thiing up"deepika added
radhika turned to find a smiling dev.
 
"how was my acting?" dev asked mischievouly
 
"wait!you set this up?"she asked furiously.
 
"yeah,"
 
"and earlier today,when you left, you were acting?"
 
"yeah"
 
"haan"hearing his respones rads hit him
 
"if you're going to hit me,hit everyone else,cause they were part of this" he said
 
"what?!"rads was more than angry
 
"sorry rads,we just wanted to have some fun"mir said trying to calm radhika down
 
"if you wanted to have fun,you could have play cricket!" rads replied.everyone except rads laughed
 
"why are you laughing?i'm serious.you made me cry"
 
"ok,ok,sorry,"dev said holding his ears.
"it's ok;"all smiled
 
"alright lets leave them alone"devki advised
soon only dev rads amrita and deepika were in the lving room.while talking rads realised that her friends husbands werent there
 
"guys,where are shahid and ranbir?"
 
"am,they are taking out the luggage"amrita replied
amrita noticed dev.they knew him but wanted to find out something.she elbowed deepika.
 
"radhika"deepika called slowly
 
"yeah"she replied.amrita asked rads with her eyed if dev was her boyfriend
 
"no;"she replied but inside she wanted dev to be her boyfriend.
 
dev saw this and was confused
 
"what?"dev asked. before someone could reply,shahid andranbir came talking.
 
"how many things do these girls bring"ranbir asked
 
"i have no clue"was all shahid could respond
 
dev went and helped them.they thanked dev for the help
 
they went by the girls>
"hi..let me guess,you're shahid and you're ranbir?" rads asked
 
"yeah,and you're radhiak and this is your boyfriend dev?"shahid asked.dev and rads exchanged glances.amrita elbowed shahid
 
"ouch what was that for?"
 
"shahid this is dev but he's noe my boyfrien,he's my best friend"rads corrected
 
"crap,,sorry:"
 
"dont worry" dev said
 
an awkward silence passes through
 
"ok then,am deepika,do you think we should tell rads what she has to do for the party?"
 
before she could reply,rads cut in
 
"what what do i have to do?"rads asked
 
              what did she have to do???????
Edited by sugarandspice - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
hahaha i am the first one :D
yay! i just read ur fanfic n i think its really sweet :)
cant believe dev made that joke up, i mean when i read it  was like: oh my gosh!! what happened!!! lol. it was good suspense :)
well done and keep it up
cant wait to read the next part
Lots of love
Prachiee
xxxxxxxx
<3
Posted: 13 years ago
hey thanx for the awesome update but agin u left me curious wat she has to do but anyways thanks for the great update
Posted: 13 years ago
i loved your update.i just cant wait for the next part.i am so curious.
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff...this is really good
Posted: 13 years ago
I loved the post. Keep it up.

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