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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
loved it please continue

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Good job, I can't believe this is your first ff. Can't wait for the next part.

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 3:28am | IP Logged
so sweet of u dr
luv it wil b waiting 4 z nxt hpe 2 get it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 7:42am | IP Logged
such a lovely ff........i just cant wait for the next part.i hope you post it soon........Big smile

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Awesome................ Please do update SOON!!!

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 11:30am | IP Logged
wat a lovely start can't wait for more keep on going

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o thanks you sooo much,all of you.thanks for your support.i'll try to update every 1-2 weeks.i would have updated earlier but i have school.
thanks soooooooo much for your support
 
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Posted: 30 April 2010 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
part 2
the beauty of radhika had him dumbstruct.she was wearing a red and green saree with her hair open.noticing his expression,she smiled from with in.dev's mouth was practically opened. she approached him and closed his mouth and said"do i look that bad?" dev was speechless.noticing his non- response,she waved her hand infront his face.that didnt work so she knocked on his forehead while saying"anyone home?"
"awha,okay,am what do you want?truth or lie?"
"lie"she said uncertain
"okay,your choice,you look horrible"
"ugh,how couls yo.."she trailed off
"wait,was that the lie?"she continued.
"yeah,truth be told,you look beautiful"
"thanks,i like how i look,but.."
"but what?"he was confused
"i feel so girly,you know,like a complete girl"
"you know what's weird?"he asked mischievously
"what?"
"that you even look like a girl"
"how could you say that?"she said as she hit him
"am, joking"
"okay cool, one sec,i never looked like a girl?"
"i never said that"both smiled
"dev you know what's weird?"
"what,that you look like a girl?"
"shut up..no...that deepika and amrita are not girly girls & they are comfortable around anyone,so i think that i will dress like myself"
"rads,wait,you look beautiful, so just act like yourself"
"that advice is so mad that i might agree to it.okay i am going to change"
"okay"
before she left she gave dev a kiss on his cheek and left.
as she went upstairs,she asked herself is she just did that.
downstairs dev touched his cheek and kissed his hand adn said "i love you rads"
 
about 10 mins after rads came downstairs and saw dev on the laptop.she came behind him.when he noticed that she was behing him,he closed that laptop and told her that he had to leave and he would come back later.his strange behaviour left her confused
 
in the afternoon,rads was in her room.dev came and was calling her.hearing his voice she was happy but when she felt the anger in his voice, she felt frightened
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plzz comment and critize
 
 


Edited by sugarandspice - 30 April 2010 at 3:10pm

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