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sugarandspice

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
hey guys,this is my ff and i hope you like it.enjoy
love is life
dev and radhika were friends from childhood.they lived in delhi as neighbours &their fathers were business parthners hence the reason why both  families were close.over the years dev &rads developed feeling for each other but said nothing as they thought that it might ruin they friendship.by this time,dev is 24 and rads is 23.
story starts.
dev and rads were in rads living room watchind videos on youtube, on dev's laptop.dev was  in a white shirt and blue jeans and rads in a lilac pencil shalwar.they werent able to stop laughin as the video was very funny. rads contolled herself but dev was. when she saw this,she pushed him off the couch.fortunately,she was holdin the laptop.
"what was that about?" dev aked,with a tinge of laughter in his voice.now rads wasnt able to control her laughter.
"good thing i was holding the laptop,"she now saidcontrolling her laugh
"hold on,you're worried bout the laptop when i could have gotton hurt?"
"you'll heal" she said smiling.hearing how innocent she said that dev wasnt able to resist smiling.
"ok,help me up now"he said extending his hand
the moment their hands were gripped dev said"big mistake" with an ...evil grin.
he pulled rads and she fell on top of him.
"eh,mister dev, what was that?i could have gotton hurt"
"so,ok,that's called revenge and in your words you'll heal"
"ha,ha,make your jokes."she said
"ok,i will"dev added with a smile.
both began to laugh.just then mirnali and devki walked in and saw radev laughing.they looked at each other with smile as they knew ho radev were with each other. mir clears her throat. radev look up.
"what's going on here?"devki asked with a smile
"ma,he pulled me down" rads complained
"eh,you started it,you pushed me"dev said defending himself.
"so.how's does that affect me?" they began arguing again.devki and mir watched each other.
"okay,hold up,"dev and rads watched devki. she gave them sign to get up.
"what do you two always have to fight?"mir asked
radev watched each other"dont know"thay answered toghter
"aunty,what were you going to do?"
"well,actually we were going to water the plants,but..."
"but what"radev answered together
"but i think you two could do it,right."mir completed devki's sentence
"okay didi."rads said
"but.."dev trailed off as devki and mri left
"o come on cry baby"rads said as she walked off.
dev frowned as he didnt like her words of choice.after watering the plants,they went inside where they met devki.
"finish?"
"yep"
"am betido you remember your friends deepika and amrita?"
"yeah ma,how could i forget?but why?"
"well they and their husbands are coming for your birthday party tomorrow?"
"what really?i am so happy<wait when are thay coming?"
"today cracks,"dev answered
"real;y...wait you knew?"
"that called keeping a secret>"
"ugh"was all she was able to respond
"rads do you want to try on your clothes for the party and dev will be  able to see what you will wear?"devki asked
"you wanna see?"she asked dev
"yeah"he won't say no to her
"okay i'll be right back"
"aunty,i'll say ont he couch"
"ok make you self comfortable"she said with a smile
 
20 minutes later rads didnt come yet and dev was gettig a little impatient.
"didnt she say that she'll be right back?plus why do girls thake so long an....."he trailed off as he ..sensed that she was around.he turned to face the staircase and what he saw left him in shock.
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hpoe you enjoyed it.plzz comment and critize.thanks 


Edited by sugarandspice - 03 March 2011 at 3:38pm

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Vaacha that was a great start !!! Loved it Clap
Please continue soon Smile

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM! Good story plot! I really like it so far! Can't wait for the next part!

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Gr8 start. I like the new atmosphere. Sathrji a business man.. so Devki will be a business lady too. WOw, what abt amma? oh vish?.. sorry.. iwill let you proceed
please update soon if you can.....
what she is wearing yaarWink

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
awwww so sweet,.,,,lovely ff

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Love the modern day CB

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Aww loved it dev and radhika friend how sweet lovely part update soon and can y add me 2 ur pm list pls thanks

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
This was really good dear, cant wait for the next part. Please update soon..

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