FINAL Fan Fiction 'You are Mine' Finished! - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by anchal2


btw, I know I am asking for a lot, but can someone write a brief summary....because I am slower than a snail...and I wanna comment on the latest chapters...because even if I commented on the old ones, I am sure siince wouldn't even remember any of it now!!😳
I will still read them, just cuz siince is such a great writer, but I just wanna read the latest ones too
😳

pleaseπŸ€—


Hello :) no no of course your not asking for a lot. LOL i'll try to summarise it for you but i've actually forgotten my fan fiction as well. πŸ˜†

Okay so you know the beginning, how they meet and all ? okay so eventually Pratigya quickly falls in love with Krishna. And then Krishna escorts her home one day and makes her sit in a taxi but to Pratigya's dismay, the taxi goes passed her house which makes her panic. Krishna is riding his bike beside the taxi, following them. So Pratigya starts shouting to Krishna for help as she realises she's being kidnapped but then Krishna looks at her and smirks which makes her realise that it was all his plan initially to kidnap her.

He takes her to a cabin and suprisingly they share some sweet and intense moments together and Pratigya starts falling more deeply in love. It is revealed that Krishna planned to kidnap her and to send the taxi driver off to Pratigya's house to tell her family that Pratigya is spending the night in a cabin with a guy named Krishna. So his intention was to give her a bad name, so her family would be forced to agree to get Krishna married to Pratigya.

So Pratigya comes home gets disowned by her father and he hits her. Krishna can't tolerate it and stops her father from hitting her and points a gun to his forehead. With the treat to kill him, Krishna forcefully takes Pratigya in a temple and marries her whilst her family stands there simply watching.

Krishna takes Pratigya to his home where his family is revealed. That same night they hold a party for the newlyweds. Pratigya comes downstairs to the party but she had forgotten to wear her mangalsutra and sindoor since she had taken a shower. Krishna soon realises this and is outraged as he drags her into his room and lashes out at her, for purposely humiliating him in front of everyone by showing that he cant control his wife etc. He leaves, and Pratigya is crying like crazy. She smashes the mirror and eventually hurts herself but then she escapes from the house by the balcony. Later Krishna comes into the room feeling guilty and soon he see's his room in a mess and blood on the floor. For a second he thinks Pratigya killed herself, and he gets depressed but then he realises she ran away.

Pratigya goes back to her home and sees that her family has left and she is once again heartbroken. Krishna reaches her home and is angry at her. Pratigya runs off and he follows her, until she meets the dead end of the cliff. She jumps off the cliff and into the water and Krishna dives in after her and rescues her. They go to a nearby house and stay over night, *more romantic scenes*. The next day Pratigya confronts Krishna and asks him whether he loves her and he says no since its not masculine to love and its only a girl thing. Pratigya is heartbroken. Pratigya's childhood friend Aryan comes from london (i think) after ten years. Prat + aryan meet, their happy, Krishna is jealous etc.

And now Krishna has taken Pratigya to a honeymoon, which is my last update and Aryan has decided to come too since his protective of Pratigya and doesn't trust Krishna.


Hope it helps !
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Aaliyah01


Yeah we had alot of fun discussions in the other thread
Dont worry will look for new things in your chapters to discuss just like before πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ


Hopefully this will be even better ! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by siinnce.09




Hello :) no no of course your not asking for a lot. LOL i'll try to summarise it for you but i've actually forgotten my fan fiction as well. πŸ˜†

Okay so you know the beginning, how they meet and all ? okay so eventually Pratigya quickly falls in love with Krishna. And then Krishna escorts her home one day and makes her sit in a taxi but to Pratigya's dismay, the taxi goes passed her house which makes her panic. Krishna is riding his bike beside the taxi, following them. So Pratigya starts shouting to Krishna for help as she realises she's being kidnapped but then Krishna looks at her and smirks which makes her realise that it was all his plan initially to kidnap her.

He takes her to a cabin and suprisingly they share some sweet and intense moments together and Pratigya starts falling more deeply in love. It is revealed that Krishna planned to kidnap her and to send the taxi driver off to Pratigya's house to tell her family that Pratigya is spending the night in a cabin with a guy named Krishna. So his intention was to give her a bad name, so her family would be forced to agree to get Krishna married to Pratigya.

So Pratigya comes home gets disowned by her father and he hits her. Krishna can't tolerate it and stops her father from hitting her and points a gun to his forehead. With the treat to kill him, Krishna forcefully takes Pratigya in a temple and marries her whilst her family stands there simply watching.

Krishna takes Pratigya to his home where his family is revealed. That same night they hold a party for the newlyweds. Pratigya comes downstairs to the party but she had forgotten to wear her mangalsutra and sindoor since she had taken a shower. Krishna soon realises this and is outraged as he drags her into his room and lashes out at her, for purposely humiliating him in front of everyone by showing that he cant control his wife etc. He leaves, and Pratigya is crying like crazy. She smashes the mirror and eventually hurts herself but then she escapes from the house by the balcony. Later Krishna comes into the room feeling guilty and soon he see's his room in a mess and blood on the floor. For a second he thinks Pratigya killed herself, and he gets depressed but then he realises she ran away.

Pratigya goes back to her home and sees that her family has left and she is once again heartbroken. Krishna reaches her home and is angry at her. Pratigya runs off and he follows her, until she meets the dead end of the cliff. She jumps off the cliff and into the water and Krishna dives in after her and rescues her. They go to a nearby house and stay over night, *more romantic scenes*. The next day Pratigya confronts Krishna and asks him whether he loves her and he says no since its not masculine to love and its only a girl thing. Pratigya is heartbroken. Pratigya's childhood friend Aryan comes from london (i think) after ten years. Prat + aryan meet, their happy, Krishna is jealous etc.

And now Krishna has taken Pratigya to a honeymoon, which is my last update and Aryan has decided to come too since his protective of Pratigya and doesn't trust Krishna.


Hope it helps !


awww..........aren't you the sweetestπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
thank you sooo much, I am so sorry for making you do this...I promise to stay up-to-date with the latest parts, and of course write my comments!!
that was so sweet of you dear!! I feel so bad, I made you write like a whole chapterπŸ˜† you could have just wrote a new chapter instead of writing for silly me😭

Anchal😳
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by anchal2




awww..........aren't you the sweetestπŸ€—
thank you sooo much, I am so sorry for making you do this...I promise to stay up-to-date with the latest parts, and of course write my comments!!
that was so sweet of you dear!! I feel so bad, I made you write like a whole chapterπŸ˜† you could have just wrote a new chapter instead of writing for silly me😭

Anchal😳


Thank you love ! 😳

Don't thank me, it was my pleasure πŸ€—
And their is absolutely no need for you to feel bad ! lmaao! no way since the last chapter, everyone is waiting with expectations and high hopes. Right now its 1:30 am πŸ˜† I will die trying to right the next chapter. Saving my strength for tomorrow since i need to mentally plan my next update when i go to bed. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

So enough being upset ! as i said, i really don't mind. 😳😳
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by siinnce.09




Thank you love ! 😳

Don't thank me, it was my pleasure πŸ€—
And their is absolutely no need for you to feel bad ! lmaao! no way since the last chapter, everyone is waiting with expectations and high hopes. Right now its 1:30 am πŸ˜† I will die trying to right the next chapter. Saving my strength for tomorrow since i need to mentally plan my next update when i go to bed. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

So enough being upset ! as i said, i really don't mind. 😳😳


aww, thank you!!
btw, just wondering because you mentined the time!! where are you from (if you don't mind answering that😳)
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by anchal2




aww, thank you!!
btw, just wondering because you mentined the time!! where are you from (if you don't mind answering that😳)


No worries !
lol ofcourse I don't mind πŸ˜ƒ
I'm from Australia - Kangaroo land πŸ˜†
Wbu?
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by siinnce.09




No worries !
lol ofcourse I don't mind πŸ˜ƒ
I'm from Australia - Kangaroo land πŸ˜†
Wbu?

oh, thought so...I kinda guessed that you must be from australia or somewhere from asia because of the time...so for you it's technically 22nd of april now😊
I am from Canada😊...
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by anchal2



oh, thought so...I kinda guessed that you must be from australia or somewhere from asia because of the time...so for you it's technically 22nd of april now😊
I am from Canada😊...


LOL yep its 22nd April right now ! Oh Canada that's nice :) By the way as you read my fan fiction, i like have added like a line or two in hindi but i'm not sure if i pronounced it properly so just ignore any mistakes ! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by siinnce.09




LOL yep its 22nd April right now ! Oh Canada that's nice :) By the way as you read my fan fiction, i like have added like a line or two in hindi but i'm not sure if i pronounced it properly so just ignore any mistakes ! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


lol, believe me even if there are any mistakes, I would never really know...my hindi's not that great....actually I can't speak in hindi at allπŸ˜† I can barely manage to understand it😳
Posted: 13 years ago
 
Originally posted by anchal2




lol, believe me even if there are any mistakes, I would never really know...my hindi's not that great....actually I can't speak in hindi at allπŸ˜† I can barely manage to understand it😳


LOL really? oh well that's fair enough ahah atleast i wont have to worry that you know i'm making mistakes 🀣 I can speak hindi quite fluently, and understand the language completely but I'm not indian so sometimes i'm a bit slow when it comes to writing a sentence in hindi

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