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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 10:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nikitagmc

Hi Lekha

Wow, so you're up with your own FF! Can't wait to read it!

BTW, I must mention one thing. Most of the people simply read FF's but don't comment. So never get discouraged cos of less comments (as you were on the back page). It happens with me too, after every update there are about 500-600 views but only 8-10 comments. At such times I console myself saying they are all silent readers.

I'm sure you'll do a good job! Intro sounds interesting. All the best.

thanks nikki it means alot coming from u thaank u sooo much

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My version of Pavitra Rishta Part 1

Contd from Teaser

Archana was lonlely.... She was heartbroken. Lost and betrayed in love... She was a simple girl with morals that were imbibed in her by her mother

She was thinking about something when her mother Called for her

Sulochana- Archu come down for dinner dear we need to ask you something

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Archana's POV

That Voice that you heard was my mother's I sometimes wonder why my mother is so hell bent on finding someone for me .. It's high time she understands that I loved someone else and can't bear this am I a burden for her???

Sulochana- Archuuu?? We are waiting come on dear

Me- Yes ma I am coming

We all were sitting and silently eating when ma gave me an exciting news

Sulochana- Archu beta kal varsha aur vaishali aane wale hai from New York mai soch rahi thi ki agar tu jaa unnko pick up karle

Me ' Ma yeh bhala poochne waali baat thori hai aur toh aur kal I will go meet my friend bohot din ho gaye mil ker (smiles faintly)

Sulochana- hmm yeh bhi sahi baat hai ''

Me- mum where has dad gone??? aaj subah se nai dikhe???

Sulochana- aap ke papa Delhi gaye hai for some work

Me - ohk mai sone jaa rahi hun kal kitne baje jaana hai??

Sulochana- subah 10 baje

Me -theek hai ma aap jaa ke papa se baat kar ke so jaiye good night mamma (hugging her)

The Next Day

It was A bright I was awake throughout the night thinking how I will Face Varshu Vaishu. They are after all unaware of what happened to me and I never have kept any secrets from my darling sisters

I being the Punctual One arrived at the airport nearly 10 minutes earlier as it was nearly 4 years since I saw my sweethearts VarShali

(Author's note: -Oh If you're wondering what VarShali is That was a nickname that I gave for Varshu Vaishu)

The announcement was made I was scared and excited both at the same time Not knowing what will I say to VarShali.. For the First time in my Life I was Nervous I did not know what I could do

My thoughts were cut off and I was really surprised my sweethearts recognized me

VarShali - Archana diii

Me - Typical Gemini's I tell you I said laughing You two have grown up !!! My My Varshu I think you have grown taller

(VarShali Are twins BTW)

VarShali- Diii let's go home can't wait to see ma

Me - ohk let's go

At home

Me - mum we are home

VarShali -Maaaaa

Sulochana- bas bas relax for a while and then we will talk

Me- Ma I have to go meet my friend jaldi aane ki koshish karungi

I leave home to go to a nearby Coffee Shop where all my friend were waiting

Shreya- What archu where were you ???

Me - Shreyu I told u Varshu Vaishu were coming today na so I went to the airport

We had a cup of coffee each and I headed home ' had to go to office

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I am really sorry for the delay I was stuck wid personal work and one of my Grand father had passed away so could not update yesterday Sorry for the Tardiness

HOPE you Liked it

PRESS THE LIKE TAB PLEASE if you seriously enjoyed reading it

Lekha

Edited by -Destiny- - 22 April 2010 at 2:25am

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 2:18am | IP Logged

Grt work Lekha

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 2:22am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Asther

Grt work Lekha Clap

thank you sooo much your motivation is all I need to go on : ) Big smile

thank you

Loads Of Love

lekha Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 4:50am | IP Logged

Its a small forum member's and there are lots of silent readers!

So don't be disheartened, keep it coming with time u will have the response coming!

I really enjoyed ur FF!!!!!

Cheer's mate......

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 4:53am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Akashspartan

Its a small forum member's and there are lots of silent readers!

So don't be disheartened, keep it coming with time u will have the response coming! Thumbs Up

I really enjoyed ur FF!!!!!

Cheer's mate...... Clap

thank you thank you Embarrassed

it is this that motivates me : )

Loads of Love
Lekha Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 5:37am | IP Logged

I understand how it feels when the appreciation comes, but sometimes u need to wait......Thats how we guys are just like the show pretty laid back!

I hope u will post lots of FF in the coming days!

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged

Nice Lekha, the first part is pretty interesting. Can't wait for the hero to make his entry, though... please bring him soon.

VarShali sounds cute!

I'm sorry to hear of your loss.

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