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Perfect - Short Story - pg.2 last part (Page 4)

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bhootni-

lol snehu he did not rape her in geet...so no I didn't get inspired by that :P...I was just bored yesterday of studying so I started daydreaming :P
lol no but he is so called "prefect" guy...for now and then he will dump her
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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
i don't think he is a perfect guy...anyways lol no I wasn't thinking about him...Safina knows who Amir is...so I was thinking about him :P
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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bhootni-

i don't think he is a perfect guy...anyways lol no I wasn't thinking about him...Safina knows who Amir is...so I was thinking about him :P
damn it she knows and i dontAngry
tell me who this loser isLOL
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Posted: 21 April 2010 at 6:53am | IP Logged
@sofna...lol this story ain't getting any further :P....
 
 
@snehu...lol well he doesn't exist....it's too complicated...lol i'll tell you when we meet or something :P

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
ohh....! so this is the last part, the one on pg. 2?? o_o a whole life and an undefined period of time that both th wife and th husband hav to bear.. forcefully?
well, nice! =) that's just realistic, a happy end or a tiny ray of hope isnt compulsory i guess.
and, so.. they married for that... thing that he did, i see.. that's just... not only hard for her, but for him too... im glad that at last he's a nice person, he doesnt usually bhave like he did. and, well, this man, its not so hateful for me, he's just living his punishment, na. Of course she is the one who really gotta be suffering to the core... i guess, time will heal things as much as possible.. Sleepy

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 1:09am | IP Logged
written very beautifully...
 
i tried to hate Amir... but the way you've shown him makes it quite difficult!!!
 
it happens...
 
when you're overcome by some sinful desire you can't help it....
 
 
can you write it again from the POV of shona...
 
will give the story a clean 3-D point of view!
 
just an idea...

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
lol I love that idea pree...hmm...let me see if I can do that!!
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loved the story...it's beautiful !
Well said...even perfectionist have flaws !!

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