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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
hmm not your usual style of writing but still nice
guessing you got inspired from geet?

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
lol snehu he did not rape her in geet...so no I didn't get inspired by that :P...I was just bored yesterday of studying so I started daydreaming :P

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
Sumi wen i read 'last part' i was Shocked......
 
It is such a tragic,Cry rivetting,Unhappy n beautifully written by uHug
 
I absolutely loved it!!!.....i knw you've ended it but u can cont..it too...LOL
 
In 2 parts u have conveyed soooooo much!!!Thumbs Up
 
Ur talent leave sme in awe somtimes!!!ClapClap

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 1:21am | IP Logged
hey sumi di..nice part..
 
Amir was perfect but its just that he didn't think of himself that way..when rahul called him that he got really angry..but rahul went on teasing him..n he snarled the truth at him..
 
so he had raped her?..thats really sad..but i wonder why he did that..but anyway, its justified shona wouldn't be happy with him..
 
thnx 4 d pm
 
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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 2:42am | IP Logged
hey sumi.....nice story dear....Clap.....do cont .writing such ones...lvd it...

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 8:05am | IP Logged
amir :P

lovely "STORY" cant wait for more........im sure this ff is going to superb...........and i like the fact that it is real.........no filmy or serial characters.........do continue.....well d'uh obviously u will :P

i think i should start writing one too :p

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 8:51am | IP Logged
lol safina...it was just two parts...lol there is nothing more to write :P
 
 
 
and lol shush...I like that name *sumi looks away :P*

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -bhootni-

lol safina...it was just two parts...lol there is nothing more to write :P
 
 
 
and lol shush...I like that name *sumi looks away :P*
 
U can't u have to continueAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry..YR MIND WILL CM UP WITH SMFINROFL
 
CONTINUE!!  CONTINUE!!!  CONTINUE!!!! LOLLOLLOLLOL

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