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ilive2laugh

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 4:05pm | IP Logged

hmm not your usual style of writing but still nice

guessing you got inspired from geet?

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 4:45pm | IP Logged

lol snehu he did not rape her in geet...so no I didn't get inspired by that :P...I was just bored yesterday of studying so I started daydreaming :P

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:11pm | IP Logged

Sumi wen i read 'last part' i was

......

It is such a tragic,

rivetting,

n beautifully written by u

I absolutely loved it!!!.....i knw you've ended it but u can cont..it too...

In 2 parts u have conveyed soooooo much!!!

Ur talent leave sme in awe somtimes!!!

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aish_punk

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 1:21am | IP Logged

hey sumi di..nice part..

Amir was perfect but its just that he didn't think of himself that way..when rahul called him that he got really angry..but rahul went on teasing him..n he snarled the truth at him..

so he had raped her?..thats really sad..but i wonder why he did that..but anyway, its justified shona wouldn't be happy with him..

thnx 4 d pm

-aish

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flamingo_aries

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 2:42am | IP Logged

hey sumi.....nice story dear.... Clap

.....do cont .writing such ones...lvd it...

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miss_precious

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 8:05am | IP Logged

amir :P

lovely "STORY" cant wait for more........im sure this ff is going to superb...........and i like the fact that it is real.........no filmy or serial characters.........do continue.....well d'uh obviously u will :P

i think i should start writing one too :p

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lol safina...it was just two parts...lol there is nothing more to write :P

and lol shush...I like that name *sumi looks away :P*

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Posted: 20 April 2010 at 11:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by -bhootni-

lol safina...it was just two parts...lol there is nothing more to write :P

and lol shush...I like that name *sumi looks away :P*

U can't u have to continue

..YR MIND WILL CM UP WITH SMFIN

CONTINUE!! CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!!!

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