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Nice cs
do cont soon

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First of all

thanks a lot every one
for ur comments
 
This is the first part 
Part 1

 

Railway station

One girl who is wearing her lime colour suit , looking very dull, having a luggage in her hand.she is trying to walk but no mood to walk.

One guy coming behind her and almost bumped on her.guy gets up and says sorry but this girl does not utter a single word.guy is stunned to see ki that girl got hurted even she is not saying a single word.

He takes her luggage and asking her ,kis dabbe me jana hai

G : Mera AS1 me hai

B : thik hai mera bhi wahi hai chalo.

Without emotion she is following him.

And this guy is thinking ki kaisi ladki hai kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai.

 

Guys wo dono ek hi bogi me hai and as it is AC first class so only two berths.

B yahi hai na?

G jee haa ,thanks.

B Sorry ,meri wajah se aapko chot pahunchi hai,aap baithiye main abhi bandage kar deta hu

G main thik hu

B par khun bah raha hai tumhe dard bhi to ho raha hoga na

G- dard ka ehsas to kab se khatam ho gaya hai

Now guys enough of G and B .this girl is our nupsi and the boy is none other then Mayu

(Oh aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi ne bahut bada dhokha diya hai,par may uteri galti se chot kagi hai to tujhe hi care karni padegi)

M : thik hai chot ka asar gahara ho isase pahle uska ilaj kar dena chahiye and he does the dressing for her

N:thanks

M : tum so jao bahut thaki si lag rahi ho ,miss?

N : nupur (no emotions ,no energy)

After some time they both went to there respective berth and soon mayank slept.

After 2 hrs he got up and saw that N is trying to attempt for suiside

Uske hath me blade hai and wo apni nerve katne ki koshish kar rahi hai

M : kya kar rahi ho tum

N : mar jane do mujhe?

He tries taking the raser from her hand and she does not listen ,one tight slap on her face.

And she comes in her sense

N:  tum hote kaun ho mujh par hath uthane wale

M : tumhe koi haq nahi hai apni jondagi se khelane ka nupur ( y he told with this right no idea)

N : ye meri zindagi hai

M : galat ye zindagi tumhare parents ki di hui hai aur tum apni zindagi lekar unhe jeete jee marana chahti ho

N eyes were widened and she was staring him ShockedShockedShocked

M : sorry nupur main tumhare personal matter me nahi pad raha hu par ye bhi sach hai ki suicide is a crime aur plz ye mere samne mat karo

Suddenly she started crying CryCryCryCry

M was trying to console her and she was crying ,she was heart broken

M : main nahi janta ki tumhare sath kya hua hai par itna janta hu ki insane dhokha khakar hi aise tutata hai ?

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aaj ki mulaqat bus itni TongueTongueTongueTongue

Aakhir kya hua hai nupur ke sath , kyon kar rahi hai wo aisa?

Janane ke liye rahiye mere sath "Tumhare liye"

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Posted: 16 April 2010 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
1st to  comment...emotional part yaar...what happened to our nupzi??plz update soon....

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Posted: 16 April 2010 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
aruuuuuuuuuuuu
ye kya hai??????????AngryAngry
Itna chota update. start karne se pehle he end hogaya.
its not fair.
hai ALLAH ye nups ka kya hogaya.
our bubbly, chatter-box nups itna dal,emotionless- ye kaise hua.
and then she trying to committed suicide -haye kyun??????????
but now i can relax - maynk jo uska sath hai.
nups ko kuch nehi hone dega.
very good part.
but next time try to amke it longer.
and update asap.
take care


Edited by fariaa70 - 16 April 2010 at 2:08pm

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Posted: 16 April 2010 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
lovely update
loved their first meeting
Mayank was so helpful
but whats wrong with her?
why she trying to committed suicide?
pls update soon

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Posted: 16 April 2010 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
loved it cont. soon

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Posted: 16 April 2010 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
Hey Aruna.....
 
 
Damn good CHARACTER SKETCH!!!!
 
 The update was really nice....
  
  
 
  
 
 
Nupur trying to suicide???? Poor thing! Really wanna know what happened with her...
    
Mayu is such a sweet heart! He is caring for her...
  
 
 
*bows*
 
 
 
Hope Mayank is successful in making her understand how precious life is!
 
Eagerly waiting for the next part....
 
Jaldi update karna please.....
I'm waiting!
Love
 
Mina
 

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Nice update....

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