Mayur FF: Melancholic September- Chpt 11Page41 NEW - Page 7

fabulous

Reserved till m free to read........

dearest kainath.....u r back in action!!! n also wid a big bang!!! 👏 god..realy missed u dear....seriously,i hvnt read such poignant n soulful ff's b4 lyk urs... ⭐️ it may b d umpteenth tym dat m saying at u r bst ff writer in d I-F!!!cnt stop myslf frm saying actualy...
now abt dis "melancholic september"...its realy intriguing n melancholic 2.... 🤔 nupur is so lonely n depressed..so is mayank...but m dead sure u vl definitly give d necessary twists n turns whre dey r required...finaly,..thnx a lot 2 u 4 writing yet anothr ff...coz its a pure pleasure 2 read urs...thnx dear..god bless!!!! 👍🏼
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

thisssssssssssssssssssss is awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

the update was simply out of the world...totally different 4m ur previous FF.continue soon dear.😊

Hey Divz, Nidhi really really well said,

I am totally speechless after reading this beautifully written chapter. When i read the first chapter, i knew that i would be hooked to this story and you have certainly got me hooked to it Kainath.

I agree with Divz, you should be writing professionally Kainath. I loved how you started with Mayank and his growling stomach and connecting the recent breakup, its not so strong effects to his daily life, his mum and Dia. Dia simplicity as her forte is what has made this character even more appealing for me.

I don't have much words to describe how wonderfully you have written and I don't think i will, but one thing i wholeheartedly loved your update😳 and would loveeeeee to read ahead.

God bless.
Edited by Senny - 14 years ago

wow
awesome story
can u plz add me to th e pm list

it was amazingggg.....

Beautifully written Kainath!!