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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

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Originally posted by guglu088

And also welcome to the club of writers... humare saath ek aur bhi aa gayi... sahi kaha guglu...ab hum sabb mil kar is ka voh halat karenge ki ise jaldi hamare club ke member ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL  LOL LOL
 
ab bas tumhari fics se ye judge karna baaki hai ki iss writer ko DDPA ki membership kab den...maine sahi kaha na Mana aur Priya...matlab itne elite club ki membership hai jiska president Raj hai...to fir test to hona hi chahiye na...LOL yaar prolouge se toh lagta hi hai ki abhi abhi dimagless bani haiLOL...par dont worry hum sab hain na...is ka dimag pura khaali karne k liye...LOL!!! aur is k liye humain jyada mehnat bhi karni nahi padegi...bass hamare comments se use pakana hai bass....kaam 'KHALASH"...LOL!!! jiss din Siri bina wajah k pure 30 min tak hassegi...us din humain pata chal jayega ki ab is k dimag me kuch bhi nahi bacha hai...aur ise life tym membership ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL


yaar priya saare ke saare sirf hasne waale emoticons ....tum log mere expense pe has rahe ho na..........chalo has lo abhi ke liye..........jis din mera dimaag ghoom gaya aur jaise tu ne kaha tha waise hi bina kisi wajah poore 30 min tak hassungi na uss din dikhaaungi tumhe main kya kar sakthi hu............tab tak ke liye tum log hasthe raho....................
hello Maam...aap ka dimag ghum gaya se kya matlab...Confused??? matlab aap k paas dimag hai kya...Ouch??? DDPA k member k paas Dimag allowed nahi hai...samjhi...LOL??? voh sirf achhe achhe UDS likh sakte hainBig smile...jaise ki tune abhi start kiya haiClap...par DIMAG ishtemal nahi karr sakteLOL... yeh strictly banned hai...Tongue!!! aur maine hassnewale emoticon isiliye post kiye hain kyoun ki DIMAGLESS club k member sirf hasste hi rahte hainLOL...sukh me bhi aur dukh me....LOL!!! aur agar kisi ko encourged karna ho na toh jyada hasste hain...code word hai yaar....!!!LOL

yaar Priya ab mere paas dimaag hai ya nahi ye main kaise bataa sakthi hu?? ye kaam toh tum sab ka hai na...issiliye maine ek aur ud post kiyaa hai........ab isse padh lo aur decide karo ki mere paas dimaag hai bhi ya nahi.........waise iss ud ko padh ke mujhe khud nahi lagtha ki mere paas koi bhi dimaag haiLOLLOLLOLLOL...........aur haa DDPA ke code word bataane ke liye shukriyaa.......LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 4:57am | IP Logged

Now this is reallly reallly baddddddddddd !!!

humko lollypop toh dikhayi, par jaise hi khane keliye aage badhe, tune jhtase haath peeche kar liya !
I mean i was trying to decipher th reality out of the cadet's convo, and u stopped the update at Naina !
Not fair !!!!!
 
coming to the update from start....
 
Update was superrrrrbbbbb !!!
 
something new....Lala already proven guilty and now that coward has ran away and had promised Raj to turn his life in to hell.....Angry
 
Lets see...what he does !
 
The description of KMA ....Surijee cadets convo was nice...
 
Ab i am guessing that my guess regarding Raj's marraige might be true from cadets convo.....
 
Aur kya kahu??? Tune toh UD beechmein hi kaat diya ! Angry
 
Update soon !!!!
 
 
 

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

Originally posted by guglu088

And also welcome to the club of writers... humare saath ek aur bhi aa gayi... sahi kaha guglu...ab hum sabb mil kar is ka voh halat karenge ki ise jaldi hamare club ke member ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL  LOL LOL
 
ab bas tumhari fics se ye judge karna baaki hai ki iss writer ko DDPA ki membership kab den...maine sahi kaha na Mana aur Priya...matlab itne elite club ki membership hai jiska president Raj hai...to fir test to hona hi chahiye na...LOL yaar prolouge se toh lagta hi hai ki abhi abhi dimagless bani haiLOL...par dont worry hum sab hain na...is ka dimag pura khaali karne k liye...LOL!!! aur is k liye humain jyada mehnat bhi karni nahi padegi...bass hamare comments se use pakana hai bass....kaam 'KHALASH"...LOL!!! jiss din Siri bina wajah k pure 30 min tak hassegi...us din humain pata chal jayega ki ab is k dimag me kuch bhi nahi bacha hai...aur ise life tym membership ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL



Bilkul sahi kaha hai Priya tune... bas thoda sa intezaar karna baaki hai....LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

Originally posted by esha143

Originally posted by Lion_Priya

Originally posted by guglu088

And also welcome to the club of writers... humare saath ek aur bhi aa gayi... sahi kaha guglu...ab hum sabb mil kar is ka voh halat karenge ki ise jaldi hamare club ke member ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL  LOL LOL
 
ab bas tumhari fics se ye judge karna baaki hai ki iss writer ko DDPA ki membership kab den...maine sahi kaha na Mana aur Priya...matlab itne elite club ki membership hai jiska president Raj hai...to fir test to hona hi chahiye na...LOL yaar prolouge se toh lagta hi hai ki abhi abhi dimagless bani haiLOL...par dont worry hum sab hain na...is ka dimag pura khaali karne k liye...LOL!!! aur is k liye humain jyada mehnat bhi karni nahi padegi...bass hamare comments se use pakana hai bass....kaam 'KHALASH"...LOL!!! jiss din Siri bina wajah k pure 30 min tak hassegi...us din humain pata chal jayega ki ab is k dimag me kuch bhi nahi bacha hai...aur ise life tym membership ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL


yaar priya saare ke saare sirf hasne waale emoticons ....tum log mere expense pe has rahe ho na..........chalo has lo abhi ke liye..........jis din mera dimaag ghoom gaya aur jaise tu ne kaha tha waise hi bina kisi wajah poore 30 min tak hassungi na uss din dikhaaungi tumhe main kya kar sakthi hu............tab tak ke liye tum log hasthe raho....................
hello Maam...aap ka dimag ghum gaya se kya matlab...Confused??? matlab aap k paas dimag hai kya...Ouch??? DDPA k member k paas Dimag allowed nahi hai...samjhi...LOL??? voh sirf achhe achhe UDS likh sakte hainBig smile...jaise ki tune abhi start kiya haiClap...par DIMAG ishtemal nahi karr sakteLOL... yeh strictly banned hai...Tongue!!! aur maine hassnewale emoticon isiliye post kiye hain kyoun ki DIMAGLESS club k member sirf hasste hi rahte hainLOL...sukh me bhi aur dukh me....LOL!!! aur agar kisi ko encourged karna ho na toh jyada hasste hain...code word hai yaar....!!!LOL


Bilkul sahi kaha priya...mai bhi padhkar yahi soch rahi thi ki agar DIMAG hua to fir to Siri ko DDPA ki membership nahi mil sakti na... DDPA ke members humesha haste rehte hain ye ek baat hai aur dusri unki ek aur khubi hai.,..bataun kya...soch soch....hum sab kam se kam ek baar apni fics discontinue karne ki sochkar fir se continue kar rahe hain...WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink Bas ab yahi hope hai ki Siri madam ye trend na follow karen kyunki iss abb is trend ko hum DDPA se bahar fenkne waalen hain...

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Siriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...

Ab agar mai tujhe maar daalun to shikayat mat karna...how can you end this part at such an interesting point...AngryAngryAngry

Thankfully Lala Gehlot is proved guilty and that witch Ritu is dead...but Lala farar hai aur ye chinta ki baat hai...after all Raj aur unke cadets ka sawal hai...

The convo between Suriji and  Ali and Pooja was very nice...matlab Pooja soch rahi hai ki Graduation hone ke baad wo KMA ko kitna miss karegi...

Aur Yudi ki complaints dekho...kitna complain karta hai...mujhe hasi aa rahi thi..Neelu bhi delhi gayi hai aur Aalekh aur Naina bhi...m sure ki daal me kuch kaala hai...aur agar as u said TUMHARA DIMAG GHUM GAYA to puri ki puri daal hi kaali hogi...

Now why were her friends dazed to see Naina...mujhe kuch kuch samajh me to aa raha hai par maine bhi faisla kiya hai ki kuch nahi bolungi...tumhare agloe part ka intezaar karungi...

Last but not the least...the best part was Raj's promotion to the post of Major...he deserved it...sabse jyaada taklif to usse hi hui hai...matlab kitna kuch khoya hai usne...apna dost, apna pyaar aur fir ab lala Gehlot...usne bhi dhoka diya...My poor Raj...CryCryCryCryCryCryCry

Khair, continue soon...

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 7:04am | IP Logged
awesome update. loved it.
Accha hua oh lala ka gunah samane aagaya.
Naveen innocent bhi prove ho gaya.
continue soon.
sorry for short comment exam ke baad lamba , lamba comment dungi.
 


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 26 April 2010 at 5:46am

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 7:47am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Lala Gehlot has been proven guilty and Navin has been proven innocent!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileThats great!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Yeh accha huya that Ritu is dead magar woh toh khaayi mein giri thi matlab uske wapas aane ke chances hai!!!!!Ermm Ermm Ermm Ermm

Its bad that Lala was able to escape and he has sent a letter to Raj threatening him that he will destroy Raj's life!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Lala ko pakad nahi paya Raj kyunki woh desh chhod ke bhaag chuka tha!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Lala is like a wounded animal who will surely take his revenge but I am sure Raj can take care of him!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Raj ka promotion ho gaya and now he is a Major!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileThats great!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

But yeh kya Raj ka KMA se jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyUske bina KMA suna suna lagega!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

The convo between Suriji, Pooja and Ali was very nice!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Pooja is thinking about how much she will miss KMA after passing out!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Pooja is missing her Shahrukh and thinking who will save them from Nair now!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Yudi is complaining about Aalekh deserted him and went to Naina's house with her!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Neelu bhi Delhi gayi thi aur Aalekh aur Naina bhi and even Shalini was there!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileSomething is fishy!!!!!!Ermm Ermm Ermm Ermm

I am sure yeh sab wahan Naina aur Raj ki shaadi ke liye gaye thhe!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Why were Naina's friends stunned to see her when they were wating for both Naina and Aalekh??Confused Confused Confused Confused


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 24 April 2010 at 2:44am

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 8:29am | IP Logged
hi dear
Gr8 update
finally new year start ho hi gaya
its nice, the way u have changed the story
aur ye kya, kma me no Raj? iske bina to sab soona soona ho jayega na..
but i know tumne kuch aur achcha plan karahoga
thnx for the pm
love
Sur

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